YOU BECOME A STRANGER

I may be a stranger, but what passes my lips you don't want to know about.-Dooby

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AT THE END

Satish, an almost mesmerizing piece.. I really like your style!-Lyric Man

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MALIGNANCY

This really makes me ponder,especially the last stanza.It makes me dig deep.-Cupids Arrow

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NOT FOR WAGES

Really good poem, good flow.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Scissors

I enjoyed this write.- Lina Guerrero

The edgy life, the nakedness and void exposed coarsely at certain point of time. Appreciate your work!.- Jharna Choudhury

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SOLIDARITY

Deeply layered writing with heavy meanings.- Just Arun

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SMASHING THE ROAD SIGNS

WOW!! Reads like some of my Life experiences. Always pleased to read your posts.-Lady Dragonwyck

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MOONLESS NIGHT

Satish, awesome. Love.-SKAT

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SHIFTING FLOORS

Beautiful imagery! This poem really does speak to all who read this.- Samantha Miller

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ENDLESS SEARCH

It was the beginning it was the end. Wonderful poem shared on really. Nicely penned poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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ASSAYING

Good Morning my brother bard... What a spin on the digging into and extracting out of... a soul... it as like any other rock... a bit hard to crack, by hand... but when put to a sledge hammer... well, it opens up in a most pain filled way... these words are spun as if brushed by Dali... or as pushed along by Kafka...and make a great am meal... for me! and the analogy of sailing to... nothing like the depths of the great water to rinse out and expose all those hidden fines... wonderful work of words... Thank you for expressing to US this beauty from your mind... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... -Michael Walkerjohn

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UNFORGIVING

An artist piece I enjoyed reading!-Lyric Man

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Dust Will Laugh

It will only laugh until mist, muck and mire wash it away! - Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

Beautiful. This poem truly speaks about the people being the light and doormats in this world.- Samantha Miller

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CAPSIZED BOAT

Very nice pen Satish! A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!-Dorian Petersen Potter

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FROM DEATH TO DEATH

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Dr. M.L.K., Jr. Day, in USA, to you. Thanx for your excellent read, without poets like you, where would the world be. Generous and gracious of you. A musical and cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery and emotional integrity; organically thought provoking- thanx again. Good luck in the Challenge. Consider entering a poem of yours into my weekly Challenges on The Starlite Cafe: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', and/or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)’ :). "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~ Leonardo da Vinci. For those interested :) "of or pertaining to the morning, day :) relating to or happening in the morning or in the early part of the day ( formal ), (Mid-16th century, from late Latin matutinalis, from Matuta, goddess of the dawn.)". Thanx for all you do! Enjoy a festive eve' as best as you possibly can. Sayonara, for now. Matutinally Yours, james m nordlund reality.-reality1 

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Unfinished

I enjoyed the flow of this. Good write.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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HIGH MOON

Nice expression in this write;- Weeping willow

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YOURS ONLY

This is incredible sir, one i shall recommend certainly.- Samuel Thomas

A brilliant write!- Lina Guerrero

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FEEL OF SHARING A GOD

Yes! Our religious identity is only when we live, where we come from and where we go, no one knows as nothing is proved.-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

In one of the central Jail in Kerala Christians, Muslims and Hindus pray under the same roof; but in three rooms separated by brick-walls. They pray to the same God calling Jehovah, Allah and Sahasranama of Vishnu respectively: But quarrel outside jail for communal identity!-P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

This is a very well-articulated poem Verma ji, capturing the plight and pain of all differences and disputes.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

It is mesmerizing.-sahil Mudasir, Mel hora shopian jk india

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VIOLENT END

It rambles around in my brain like a happy vagabond , something new around each bend , much enjoyed.-  David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Millstone

It must be interesting walking around inside your aesthetic...then make it touch the world -  allets

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BLACK POETRY

and well received - that pretty much says most of it from this view, the world view, and what the universe will see when we no longer have eyes. Gratitude -  allets

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SNARING

Death has many faces seems -  allets

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WINTER SCRIPT

I have always suspected that mushrooms huddled - nice - Stella

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WHEN WEAVING STOPPED

It skips like a skipping stone across my mind then sinks in leaving ripples in the moonlight of my sanity.-David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

Your work makes me wonder in nostalgic clouds of peace and sadness. - Light H2o

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FEEL OF SHARING A GOD

This is a very well-articulated poem Verma ji, capturing the plight and pain of all differences and disputes.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

It is mesmerizing. -sahil Mudasir, Melhora shopian jk india

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THE POISENED BLUE

I love this! - hysterical weaver

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AGAINST THE TIMES

Is this about rejection? Its very cryptic, I enjoy the flow of the words.- R.T. Pait

Nice! .... Happy New Year! my dear friend. - Light H2o

yes.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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PAPYRUS

Splendid Sir!
It’s an honor to read your poems.
Thank you!-Purabi, Gandhinagar

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