Green Eyes

Each ounce of the poem is oozing with sorrow, tragedy and tears…Moved me.-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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Future Hides

I loved the lines ‘when nobody was there… truth was walking with me’ ..simply amazing!-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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Forgives The Past

Happens with us sometimes in our lives…the need to think about the paths we tread…-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana ) 

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Lies

Such beautifully portrayed conflict and emotions within the human body…magical:)-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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Fate Of Man

A poem founded on deep philosophy…nice!-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana ) 

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GROUNDING

Just when you've nailed it, you have to deal with collapsing profiles and aliens. Sometimes it just is. - I read this one 5 times. o.k. - Blacpoet

and they all sing along, there's a steepy rocky path, high up near to the mountain, it leads to places where people dwell in white clouds, there we sit and marvel at sunset through fresh green leaves, as summer is about to burst in new songs.may your roads be auspicious.-SatSitatara

Dear Satish Verma, Ni hao. Good National Poetry, Earth and Jazz Appreciation Months, USA, to you. Thanx for an excellent read, without poets like you, where would the world be. Very generous and gracious of you. Yeah, you're a musician too, a poetic tapestry of intensity, emotional integrity and insight. Consider entering a poem of yours into my weekly Challenges on Starlite: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', and/or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration) :). "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~ Leonardo da Vinci. For those interested :) "of or pertaining to the morning, day :) relating to or happening in the morning or in the early part of the day ( formal ), (Mid-16th century, from late Latin matutinalis, from Matuta, goddess of the dawn.)". Thanx for all you do! Enjoy a vernal eve' as you can. Namaste. Ciao, for now. Matutinally Yours, james m nordlund reality (aja) :)-reality1

Good to read a sixth time also - u rock SV-Blacpoet 

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Commerce

Difficult to read but worth reading -- going to the dictionary to get meaning of certain words! thanks for sharing.- Mawuli Amedofu

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Recall

There’s a certain sadness, a heart felt melancholy in your poems, which I can relate to:)-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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Echo

A sad tale in the form of a melancholic poem..very beautifully portrayed!-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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Fairy Rings

Another truly philosophic and touching poem…Nice write!-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

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PLASMOLYZED

Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. -Funom Makama 

Your word choices are good and the message sent (although not conventional), is strong and emotional.-Emile Pinet 

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Fountain

Implosion.. when all is lost, death is the solace, but where do you go when death betrays.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )
Beautiful expression of emotions. The anger and sadness were so palpable!-Kasturi Patra ( @Kasturi_Patra )

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Haltering

Very aptly and nicely presented. Fantastic imagery. Many thanks for sharing.- Kumarmani Mahakul

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City Of Stones

“To fill the void, dialogues were not sufficient.” same is what a reader feels , articulated and expressed very well!-Sahana ( @Sahana_Vasudevan )
“..and the lightning was lifting the clouds” very powerful. thank you.-Keith Wilson

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CUP OF SORROW

Dear Satish. This is a very powerful and heart rending poem. Thanks for sharing.-Avril meallem, Jerusalem, Israel

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Suspended

Great piece of writing.-Lenny Gazbowski

So good to see your work here my friend - - your writing is second to none and the imagery is to sigh for in this reach for relief after estrangement.-Fay Slimm

Wonderful, liked.-Madeira

Fabulous write, my applause, my congrats
Regards & Love-williamsji

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Moment

Reality of life…very well expressed here… we need to looking ahead and be brave!-Shamala Chandran ( @Shamala_Chandran )

Wow, wow, wow..thats an awesome one…-Laya Sarath ( @Laya_Sarath )

Brilliant write. I liked it.- ammu sachariah ( @ammukutty_sachariah )

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Harvesting

Both powerful and intricate. Liked.-muccletonjoe

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For Anything

Great write satishverma! :-).-Seánaí

Nicely written...liked..x.-Jazmine Reid

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In Transit

Through my love I touch. Really beautiful touch in poem shared. - Kumarmani Mahakul

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Always

Beautifully expressed.-summerdelight

Wow these lines are really wonderful,
"I craved and dispossessed myself in the
rainy convulsions. The stupidity of
invoking rainbows. In tall grasses
the eyes were looking for the brazen
clouds. "-piusha

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In Transit

Through my love I touch. Really beautiful touch in poem shared. - Kumarmani Mahakul

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Give Me

St Gun has beaten all saints since time immemorial. Could god please switch off our baser instincts. We ask again, perhaps some day our prayer will be answered.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )

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Longing

So poignant, a few lines, but so meaningful. It is so difficult to let go of this life, always one more thing to do, one more moment to love, yet one must go.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )

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Hurting Dive

Enjoyed this poem very much, Satish "...a moon was left out in the stillness..." like the dog or the cat, forgotten. Mellow image.-Death Smirks

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Homelessness

"...the musical return of the mute..." a satish image this one - nice.-Writing Is The Thing!

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STRANGE

Move shadows on sundials indeed! Nice image. The sun, the clock, the unmoved mover.-Fingerless Hands

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Intense Poetry

That is indeed intense.-Geetha Paniker ( @Geetha_Paniker )

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Blindfolded

Seeing so much, but its our choice, our blindfold. We can untie the knot and it will fall away, we will see the light.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )

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A DARK HOUSE

Great imagery and flow.- Shaun ..

Such elegance displayed in this sophisticated write.- stoicpoet166 cardinal

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BURNT TASTE

As always, I enjoy your writes. -Lady Dragonwyck

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Microthin Smile

Very powerful poem depicting a scene cascading across the larger and larger TV Screens every News Broadcast aired.Christ's love-Thecraig

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LIFE DEMANDS ONE THING

Very well done and a joy to read.-GaelicRogue 

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MOURNING BAND

A lovely poem you have penned and liked the description. - Shalini Debra Joseph

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DISASTER

A very very beautiful poem. Definitely.-Funom Makama

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Blistering Attack

And the Crucifixion of Jesus Christ will validate the pain and slaughter (((which Historians recently concluded actually took place on a Friday, and on April 3rd of the year 33ad, albeit, back then, days and dates were calendared with Aramaic names and calculated via Jewish astronomics and I believe , the Moon)))FjR - Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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