Monday, June 29, 2015
Sunday, June 28, 2015
Saturday, June 27, 2015
Along The Path
The arrival does not finish
the journey. There are far―
away worlds beyond
your fantasies. .... nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ......10-Kumarmani Mahakul
the journey. There are far―
away worlds beyond
your fantasies. .... nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ......10-Kumarmani Mahakul
Other God Was Sleeping
@ satish_verma, the other god was sleeping, indeed.
Matters are not tended well as it is. Philosophical.-Editorial Board ( @Editorial_Board )
Matters are not tended well as it is. Philosophical.-Editorial Board ( @Editorial_Board )
Second-Hand Event
An enjoyable piece; appreciated the message; nicely conceived poem; well done!.-Joe Breunig
Of A Virgin God
The reference of the virgin god who did not want to succumb to the human greed is a very relevant concept in these time of abject corruption., very nicely put.- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )
Wednesday, June 24, 2015
Sunday, June 21, 2015
Bowl Was Still Empty
nice thoughts expressed in this poem…reflects how we all are just lost in the big world and don’t know what we seek nor fear…-Shamala Chandran ( @Shamala_Chandran )
Thought provoking one.-Geetha Paniker ( @Geetha_Paniker )
At last I read something I can relate to
words with depth
abstract emotions
psyche explored
hope hoped for
and then nullified…
bravo bravo bravo- Zyborg ( @zyborg )
Thought provoking one.-Geetha Paniker ( @Geetha_Paniker )
At last I read something I can relate to
words with depth
abstract emotions
psyche explored
hope hoped for
and then nullified…
bravo bravo bravo- Zyborg ( @zyborg )
Saturday, June 20, 2015
Death on grass
Quite a commanding take Satish- make you want to read between those lines….I think its a killer.-minakshi.balasubramaniam ( @minakshi )
Thursday, June 18, 2015
COMMENTRIES
Book of pain nicely opened. Yet, let's hope to see light at the end of the tunnel.-U Atreya Sarma, Pune
Yes Sir, time is running out. Back of her head is bald. futile to try to catch her.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur
Yes Sir, time is running out. Back of her head is bald. futile to try to catch her.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur
Give Me Some Poison To Live
How ironic what people generally take to die, poison in this case has to be taken for becoming alive again. Beautiful irony!- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )
Lips Of Moon Were Hot
The comparisons are just WOW! And I love the lines”concept of the sky was a lie” and “You had cheated the boat, you may not be lucky this time”- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )
Walking Down The Lane
Wonderful imagery. Nicely presented. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.- Kumarmani Mahakul
Wednesday, June 17, 2015
Kleptomaniac
Popular icons are idiotizing the worlds population, and the irony is the glory we associate with it.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )
Friday, June 12, 2015
Tuesday, June 9, 2015
WAITING TO BLINK
This poem is lovely. I can't quite comprehend the meaning, but I know it is an intelligent write and it rolls off the tongue!-Anna Hopper
Metaphysical View
Wow... This is so full of intellect on so many levels... Great job. - Michael Cardinal
Monday, June 8, 2015
Saturday, June 6, 2015
Today
Love this & the picture you're painting. Tfs. Check out some of my poems? - adrein blue
Wednesday, June 3, 2015
Soliciting
Wing pierced, like
butterfly amidst cacti,
still trying to reach your lips.
Thanks for this amazing poem, Sir. You have elevated the status of personal pain and suffering to something the world desires and craves for. Following lines are the most poignant ones.-Rajnish Manga
butterfly amidst cacti,
still trying to reach your lips.
Tuesday, June 2, 2015
Armless Enemies
"The vortex of existence needs surgery."..."I am asking god to pray for me." So much food for thought in your lines as usual. Warm wishes for you. - Light H2o
Monday, June 1, 2015
Devoid Of Feverfew
There is a certain fear, a silent calming effect felt after reading this poem…-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )
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