Topical Now…

A cleverly worded write creating resonance.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Hypnosis

An poetic insight into the depth of human nature and world. Wonderfully expressed.Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Collective Death

I love the beginning; and just how it turns from a singular experience to a collective one. The first three stanzas could stand by themselves in my opinion.- jinka fass 

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Windows Are Not Supporting

Very late in life.. good poem...

It is human tendency
That is marred by its frequency
It finds no end with desire
That puts everything on fire

It becomes too late
To understand the consequences of fate
Time comes to wind up the show
In fact no time is granted to know what actually happened.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Composing

Nice composition...

It is common fact
That people are making escape goat
At each word you shall smell lies
Despite being persuasive try

Only few may survive such bid
And try to lead
Different life in deceptive path
Till the end of life with death.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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From Death To Death

Nice one... No loss of time....

Instead of dying and longing
It must be made full digging
Till it comes out with full satisfaction
And matching with resolve and action

So we seek
And speak
Each time
With no loss of time.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Baby God

I am not going to forgive you……….
……….you have made my eyes wet…..-ramakrishnan chatakondu ( @ramakrishnan_chatakondu )

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Fastening

Bravo! Love this style satishverma!!!- Redbarchettadrive 

The imagery of "writing my name in water" is unique and plays like Ping pong in my head, love it!- Lina Lotus

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Smash The Book

This Verse is worth the Feel of a higher calling, justified in saying that you must have said, I Am, I Will and I Recall Every Monent that Led to these Words. Damn, you shook the ground and spoke it in your own tone. Thanx for being Poet, -warrior poet

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Ubiquitous Being

Fine poem. Excellent imagery. Beautiful cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Prometheus? Mon Frere? ?

Death consciousness becomes somewhat dramatic here but Intense passion and poetry pervades.
Excellent write.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Catch the Sunset

Make it glorious... catch the moment... nice one

The sun was at peak
But life did not pick
With suitable place
You were pushed out of race

You need not worry
And carry forward
The mission
And prove it was an accomplished admission.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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From Death To Death

Nice one... No loss of time....

Instead of dying and longing
It must be made full digging
Till it comes out with full satisfaction
And matching with resolve and action

So we seek
And speak
Each time
With no loss of time.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

http://museindia.com/

Ravaged

Nicely put forward................

We have invaded everywhere
And ventured enough
To destroy the entire natural concept
The time is not far off for us to be wept

Ecological balance is threatened
Even though it is always condemned or criticized
But where are we today as part of civilized world?
We wish it to be clearly told -Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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EXTOLLING

Good question Satish :))-Maharani Phool 

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Tale-bearer

An intensely passionate poem. Poet beautifully emoted with exquisite imagery.-Aloke

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An Agonised Prayer

A poignant poem but it is beautiful in its poignancy. Death seems to be a staple penchant of the poet.
Cadence is good, wonderful imagery.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Shambhook…*”

Poem is heavy. Bu what an eloquent and elegant way of conveying it !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Mum Is The Word…

Wonderful. We can feel the resonance and warmth, Passion and skill work together to make a vibrant poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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NEW PATHWAYS

Just loving the title and then the meaning of the poem.very good.-Miraj Raha 

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Deleting

Fascinating word choices. Interesting tone.- Nico Reznick

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BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

epilation and stumilate
stumilate (simulate?) epilation: hair removal - the unflowing river could needs stimulation. Decapitation - not a word encountered often in modern times but great as a metaphor or reference to barbarism in 20th-21st Century (or wishful thinking).- allets

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In Transit

Powerful ending

and I was amazed
by the idea captured
in great talons
and released
as or from or because
or into prophecy (magic & faith images)
enjoyed the surprise ending - allets

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The Wars

"...you know..."
an aside or a request for shared knowledge - The Wars - everywhere for everyone.- allets

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Acrimony

"...like sorcery..."
Got snagged on this line. The last verse/stanza defines poeting (& any creativity) for me.- allets

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A Sickened Craft

"plucked"
the finest word-choice for dismantling metaphysical or metaphoric stars .- allets

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A Wall Painting

"Contours of a dimmed tunnel." -- Ah Satish, you hit me where I live in this offering - allets

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The Untitled Erotica

A powerful write.- Seema Chowdhury

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Slaughtered Dreams

Intense write here. Hells fires rage throughout many cities destroying much in their way. I hope this write is not about you. JacieStralkoDuca

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Non – ‘I’

Nice imagery. Beautiful word play.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cracking The Code

very deep, great write "Liars will tell the story of honour killing. We were tired of listening" My favorite lines.- Lucid dreamer

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Featureless and White

as usual the poem touches my heart...what shall we do to rectify the current issues? -veeraiyah subbulakshmi, Thanjavur

Marvelous write, stirs up some gory yet familiar images in the contemporary scene.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Transmigration

Wonderful cadence. Past master in weaving a filigree of beauty of thought and imagery !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Tear Of Things

Brilliant in cadence and imagery. Consummate skill in manipulating language to convey passion. Awesome with stirring emotion and scathing remarks.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cultural Drift

The beauty of music, of song, is that it stirs the heart. I remember hearing a childhood song in my later years that stirred up a faith in me when I needed it most. Your writing is so expressive. I have been reading it for quite some time. It takes honesty in self examination to write from the depths of your heart as you do. -AbbasEwe

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A Rebel Being Born

That’s a poem that stands on powerful legs.-Bill Peeler ( @konpreah )

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Unblaming

continuation was a little off but the overall effect and tone was pleasant.- Tyler Williams

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