Morning Sir: I really enjoyed this write and felt myself there. I always enjoy your posts and pleased you continue to grace Creative with your writes.-Lady Dragonwyck
Saturday, February 27, 2016
Suspended Execution
Morning Sir. Very profound and thought provoking. Always enjoy your writes. -Lady Dragonwyck
The Ending
Morning. I felt a lot from this write. I usually read your posts and really enjoy. -Lady Dragonwyck
Holding The Poems
Friday, February 26, 2016
A Family Dust
a failed thirsty town harvested the moon and changed it into a reservoir for tears! ! what a pitiful state of my country and the countries alike, producing family dust! ! The poem makes me to be slightly sad and brave when digging the meaning of the lines down, Satish Vermaji..and it is the effect of your mesmerizing thought and writing. Thank you so much..Congratulations...-V S
Wow! What a unique way! Like walking into meditative circle to feel the essence of life.-Savita Tyagi
A unique concept written within a brilliantly woven imagery. Perfect 10. Thoughtprovoking poem.-Uzefa Rashida M.a
Heartiest Congratulation for Poem Of The Day.
A beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points-Ratnakar Mandlik
A unique concept written within a brilliantly woven imagery. Perfect 10. Thoughtprovoking poem.-Uzefa Rashida M.a
Heartiest Congratulation for Poem Of The Day.
A beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points-Ratnakar Mandlik
Matter Of Fate
I have never heard things said quite the way you say them.-Kelly Kurt
I Will Write A Poem
Your writing intrigues me. Like being in an altered state. Peace-Kelly Kurt
By Any Reckoning
Beautifully conceived poem with the help of minute observation and flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Where Dreams Live
A poet could not be stood blind on world affairs and poem pertains to the subject.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat
The Raging Storm
stone pelting becomes the daily ritual with a song! ! what an imagination! as usual amazing, Poet!-V S
Before The Sunset
If reading a good poem makes a morning worthwhile this is one of those morning for me. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.-Savita Tyagi
Sting's Betrayal
A deep and well written poem...thank you for sharing :)-Abhilasha Bhatt
*impact
A collegium will stitch up the wound.
Once upon a caste the country will go.
beautiful poem...-Aarzoo Mehek
Once upon a caste the country will go.
beautiful poem...-Aarzoo Mehek
It Was Not Vicious
There are much things to learn about in this life. Nice work.-dward Kofi Louis
After Meeting God
Love should be a desirable thing; when we seek for peace. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis
Confronting The Unknown
Spirit and water! With the muse of creation. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis
The Daphnia
The other face; but, with the hope of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.-Edward Kofi Louis
The Rarest Thing
Lovely poem, the poem is composed with beautiful words and images, thanks for sharing-Shakil Ahmed
Cracked Open
Stepping out, from the
grave of body― you will throw
a reflection, of the nerves,
in a wreath.- -Beautiful lines from a great poet, i enjoy reading your poem, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed
grave of body― you will throw
a reflection, of the nerves,
in a wreath.- -Beautiful lines from a great poet, i enjoy reading your poem, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed
Skirting The Book
I climb up the blue,
to unsolve the murder and go
into deep meditation to reject
the gods. The gold mine was flooded
by unprecdented rains of hands and footsteps. Beautiful lines, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed
to unsolve the murder and go
into deep meditation to reject
the gods. The gold mine was flooded
by unprecdented rains of hands and footsteps. Beautiful lines, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed
A Space, A Dot, A Line
As the river of darknes squirms
You must face the dying earth -
Sustained - on prayers only
This poem is a lovely piece of work done by you, Satish Verma!-Clarence Prince
You must face the dying earth -
Sustained - on prayers only
This poem is a lovely piece of work done by you, Satish Verma!-Clarence Prince
A Riddle Unsolved
Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the various aspects of the riddle. Thanks for sharing.10 points. -Ratnakar Mandlik
Crash-Landing
Verily, the chaste know how to preserve their chastity.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti
Gold Coins
well-composed poem, last stanza is beautiful- 'Shutting the lamps. No moths
will descend on the books― no
bleeding of the verse, so
you can become empty of arithmetic.-Shakil Ahmed
will descend on the books― no
bleeding of the verse, so
you can become empty of arithmetic.-Shakil Ahmed
Sunday, February 21, 2016
A Nonsensical Poem
"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells."~Dr.Seuss :):):) Good job in fine tradition...- Kerry Reynolds
Saturday, February 20, 2016
PARALYSED
Satish, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE-Poet Destroyer A
A LONE JOURNEY
UNDERBELLY
love the imagery.-Poet Destroyer A
So dark and symbolic Satish -Kelli White
Great write Satish..-Silent One
So dark and symbolic Satish -Kelli White
Great write Satish..-Silent One
INCINERATED
THE NECTARINE BLISS
This is nice, I think it's a free verse... they read like senryu... -LINDA
great write Satish..-Silent One
great write Satish..-Silent One
A Call To Murder
This so cleverly worded, the poet presents the basic for a perfect murder, then finally blaming...This is like EAP in sententious format. Oh EAP? That stands for Edgar Allan Poe. Sir, this poem looks easy, but to create it it is not easy. This is indeed A Call To Murder, because of that unending scream. I like this intriguing poem very much, thank you for sharing.- Sylvia Frances Chan
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Without Bargaining
I loved it, but really we need to know the price before we start bargaining. Honestly made me think about my life and the work for the corps ive done.-HumanInATree
Monday, February 15, 2016
Options
Real cool poem, I just felt I was robbed. Waiting and waiting on the end that never came. Great poem though. VaV-VOOM! -Vicky A Chai-Brocato
Losing Again
A beautifully poignant poem piercing the Bull’s eye. Bravo !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )
Saturday, February 13, 2016
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Thursday, February 11, 2016
Here Lies The Queen
I really enjoyed that thank you. You hold a lot of care in your words , keep the fire going . - Lucid dreamer
Resonates so strongly, becuase...Tears in my eyes shine for this, "dog eat dog", race of mine...Which share a hunger, I can't pretend... - Kerry Reynolds
*because.- Kerry Reynolds
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Glitches
Just an awesome read! The imagery brought me to a point of such joyful enthusiasm; then in an instance, I saw it? (Damn) There was nothing left on my plate! Great read thanks. Write On!Vicky A Chai-Brocato
The Scream
I loved reading this. "Chasing a mysterious silence. The scream". This was wonderfully written.- Ace Sargent
I am sure you once heard often my silent screams. Bastard!!- Don Nguyen
I am sure you once heard often my silent screams. Bastard!!- Don Nguyen
I abandon my blog, just stick around here to blow it up, a just retribution. - Don Nguyen
Friday, February 5, 2016
Judgement
This piece grips one’s spine to the inner veins. The deep emotions are felt all through! Thumbs up!-Ibrahim Ibrahim
Wednesday, February 3, 2016
Ancient Address
thought provoking poem. Is this about blindness and once being able to see?-patH
Monday, February 1, 2016
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