Monday, August 29, 2016
Friday, August 26, 2016
Fall of a Tender Doctrine
I love this one. -Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore
Beautifully sad. I agree with the views of the poem in that death is not corrupt. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Beautifully sad. I agree with the views of the poem in that death is not corrupt. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Wednesday, August 24, 2016
I Will Not Agree
The sermons, the prayers won't
help you become a subject―
to unseen god.
wonderful thought to proclaim that religions are the just guidance! !-V S
help you become a subject―
to unseen god.
wonderful thought to proclaim that religions are the just guidance! !-V S
Sunday, August 21, 2016
The Atavism
Yes, hardly any hope for humanity. Things are really gross. A profound piece of writing.-Nosheen Irfan
Traveling Constantly
Who allowed the novice,
third mate to steer the ship?
A beautifully conceived thought provoking poem raising very important questions.-Ratnakar Mandlik
third mate to steer the ship?
A beautifully conceived thought provoking poem raising very important questions.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Silent Prayer
Excellent expression shows the poets humility but at the same time his resolve to remain grounded with realities. Nice prayer. Thanks. I quote:
....I will / always fight my demons / with my broken pen.
I want to remain a human being.-Rajnish Manga
....I will / always fight my demons / with my broken pen.
I want to remain a human being.-Rajnish Manga
Thursday, August 18, 2016
Super Terrain
Hello,
We live in a world of truth and lies. Each one balancing the other creating dark and light. With this knowledge we each have a quest to reach our own destiny.
Thank you for sharing. ,Take care, Mr Darcy
We live in a world of truth and lies. Each one balancing the other creating dark and light. With this knowledge we each have a quest to reach our own destiny.
Thank you for sharing. ,Take care, Mr Darcy
dead bodies
Hello Satish,
I read a lot of your poetry.
Your imagery about the ”dead bodies” I’ve walked over freezes me in my tracks. I do think about dead people a lot. I read obituaries. That kind of stuff. I have a lot of feeling about many of your poems. I feel like I know you… or like I can see you speaking to me. It is horrifying and ferociously original.
I’ve been sifting through the bios listed on highonpoems.com. yours was one of the first I read. There is so much about your bio that makes me feel like a deer in headlights.
I can hardly believe how much you have written.
I’m a fan of yours Satish Verma.-Kenneth Miller
I read a lot of your poetry.
Your imagery about the ”dead bodies” I’ve walked over freezes me in my tracks. I do think about dead people a lot. I read obituaries. That kind of stuff. I have a lot of feeling about many of your poems. I feel like I know you… or like I can see you speaking to me. It is horrifying and ferociously original.
I’ve been sifting through the bios listed on highonpoems.com. yours was one of the first I read. There is so much about your bio that makes me feel like a deer in headlights.
I can hardly believe how much you have written.
I’m a fan of yours Satish Verma.-Kenneth Miller
Tuesday, August 16, 2016
Feet of Clay
I like this poem for the word selection and construction, but not able to get into it. Hope the author can help.-KPankajam, CHENNAI
Powerful images. But the "meaning" eludes me, though the poem does speak.-Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore
Powerful images. But the "meaning" eludes me, though the poem does speak.-Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore
Saturday, August 13, 2016
End Thinking
"where you were drowned one day in the eyes of the needle" Man.. That is awesome, Satish! - Noel Tapia
Friday, August 12, 2016
Where The Lies Are Born?
Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
In Search Of Peace
Super! I enjoyed reading your poem, "Jealousy: sand was under the nails. Now I will find the remains of an ocean in your eyes." Poetry!! - Lina Lotus
My Blue Valley Burns
Very sombre, very poignant, Satish ji. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Wednesday, August 10, 2016
I Will Not Come Back
You can not leap over the grass of antiquity.
Hats off for this precious nugget of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Hats off for this precious nugget of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Some Ghosting
I'm not sure I understand it, but thanks for sharing.-Spock The Vegan
Unpretending
Unassuming and honest outlook towards life, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Where The Lies Are Born?
Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
Tuesday, August 9, 2016
Mauled Self
Satish ji, a nice, challenging poem that takes the reader to the threshold of death. The emotional churning at that hour is expressed powerfully. - GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Monday, August 8, 2016
Wandering Jew
I especially loved: "you forget, how many fathers you have." It reminds me of the patriarchs of the bible... I don't know if that is what you mean or not, but I love the write. - Stephanie Mahlan
Saturday, August 6, 2016
REVISED VERSION
Nice verse "Meditating on the words and meaning, I read your face".-Louis Borgo
Wednesday, August 3, 2016
Where The Lies Are Born?
Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
Charity
This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight
Meanness
this is powerful-authorAAA
I can't imagine where you get your ideas, but they're something to admire for sure.-abstractempo
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Monday, August 1, 2016
Body Becomes the Path
The enigma of life and death has always been insurmountable. The relentless probe continues.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Charity
This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight
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