In The Garden Of Gethsemane

Wow, this is brutal and raw and I absolutely loved it! Your visuals although hard are breathtaking. This is just beautiful.-Brenda

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New Alphabet

I would work on the form, it is a little sloppy. I did like the first stanza though!-bubblz 

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Become My Father

Beautiful write up Sir....I liked it...
The feelings were very true.-Randhir kaur

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Lips Of Moon Were Hot

Cheated....Wowww..fantastic read..-Randhir kaur

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Matrix

Don't know if this inspired me, but it did give me a moment to pause.-noah count

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Non-Story

A beautiful poem sir. I too would like to tread your path to find the missing link.-Konalli Rajeev Naik, Kundapur

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Crossroads

A thoughtful introspection carried out at a crossroad in life is presented in the form of verse. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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Pause

There are beautiful lines in the poem. Enjoyed reading it multiple times. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Black Days

Brilliant dark ink.-Cherie Nolan

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Something To Happen

You are a great poet. I like the use of words from your mind.++++10
As a poet who loves words you may like my A Hauntingly Beautiful Word.
Robert-Robert Murray Smith 

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Prayer In Message

I am walking barefoot
To feel the bygone dead
sacrifices].
Conceptualization of emotions coming from the bottom of heart and very touching. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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Black Sun

The second verse made me give a pause...
Breath taking. -abstractempo

Very well done....a great write.-Jeff

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Another Blossom

Nice one... Golden place
Golden place

Dreams never end
And send
Unfulfilled desire
That shall realize never

It is better
To put end here
And regain control
Over inner call

No one is sure
Of next birth to secure
Same character
For companion and being as stage actor

So life shall stand as mirage
And can never change
Man’s ambition
In present relation

So calm down
And make it known
That you are leaving golden place
With smiling face.-Hasmukh amathalal mehta, Ahmedabad

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