Wonderful. Enticingly thought provoking. What a beauteous musing missive. Thanx for sharing, for all you do and don't. Keep up the great work, please. "Where there are two or more gathered in his name, there is love". Have a nice day. Ciao, for now. reality-reality1
Thursday, August 31, 2017
Making Overtures
"The pain eases, when memory fails." No regrets comes across as coming to terms with reality. Clever usage in the last line.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Sunday, August 27, 2017
Measuring The Scales
The saddest lips will
not tell the violence of uncluttered
words, that had wounded the heart.
Beautiful line..Nice work.10+++ for it. -Subhas Chandra Chakra
Beautiful poem Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken
not tell the violence of uncluttered
words, that had wounded the heart.
Beautiful line..Nice work.10+++ for it. -Subhas Chandra Chakra
Beautiful poem Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken
Blackened Seeds
Intriguing but cannot decipher...can you help this uneducated soul...because I really like your work!-Martina Lynch
Oversighting
Nice composition Satish Sir.Very thought-provoking.-IFTEKHAR AHMED, KOLKATA
Thursday, August 24, 2017
The Wax Palace
Yes, I think there is smoke all around...and what a haunting atmosphere it has created.-mossgirl19
The Stings
Ours is rather a crazy world and these stings are everywhere...especially in our heads!
This was a real captivating write.-mossgirl19
This was a real captivating write.-mossgirl19
Ziplocked
Good one Satish ji!-Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Wednesday, August 23, 2017
A Bird Song
Come, sit beside me
holding my hand.
We will look at the moon..... // Lovely expression of togetherness. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Wonderful reiteration of the eternity of love. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
holding my hand.
We will look at the moon..... // Lovely expression of togetherness. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Wonderful reiteration of the eternity of love. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Unforgiving
I feel like I could chew on this for awhile. Excellent imagery. It seemed to end a bit abruptly, but then, perhaps you were going for a fade out image of bared trees. In which case, it works. Cheers!-SaintdeSales
Drift Wood
The first piece of love I read from you. There is a heavy feeling of sadness in this piece. The last stanza is definitely fantastic.-mossgirl19
Words are mine
I liked the third stanza immensely.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Sunday, August 20, 2017
Standing Alone
The meloncholic pain well expressed in these thoughtful verses.-Iftekhar Ahmed, Kolkata
A poem filled with melancholy and isolation. A nice read sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
A poem filled with melancholy and isolation. A nice read sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Repeating History
Satish Sir you have poignantly expressed your sorrows. In fact it is the harshest reality of life which none can shirk by any means. Very nicely composed. -Iftekhar Ahmed, Kolkata
A stirring composition. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
A stirring composition. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Saturday, August 19, 2017
Recollection
I faved these...I like to keep reading them...I am still trying to figure out the first...The third with the help pf a dictionary and the second I am guessing! these are really clever!-Martina Lynch
Friday, August 18, 2017
Yellow Roses
Oh this is beautifully written, really appreciate that first verse...It is so neatly folded...no blurring of the lines! Wonderful piece.-Martina Lynch
Thursday, August 17, 2017
Without A Title
we are lost and will wander around looking for conclusion :D - enjoyed this one. Particularly: "...I wanted the sacred smell of dark heaven/which was dispensing the forgiveness..." and "Deliberately I cleaned my room twice/to welcome the instincts..." -allets
Tuesday, August 15, 2017
Doom’s Day
Just hauntingly great.-mossgirl19
My respect!!-Frank
I love this and it captures the horror of what has happened today. Thank you!-Nobody
My respect!!-Frank
I love this and it captures the horror of what has happened today. Thank you!-Nobody
The Wars
This felt like a dream - or rather, a nightmare - where so many different images seem to violently cut into each other as each stanza switched to another. It was powerful and raw, with little drops of poetic air.-Bradley Peter
Blew me away, again!-mossgirl19
Blew me away, again!-mossgirl19
Monday, August 14, 2017
Like Rosetta Stone
White holes
in black teeth.
An empty truth bleeds.
A lesser light
fights the darkness in a ring.
There was no excuse
for harmony.
- - - - - - - A profound poem with stunning imagery- - - - - -Darkness in the ring- - A breach in harmony- - -Bharati Nayak
in black teeth.
An empty truth bleeds.
A lesser light
fights the darkness in a ring.
There was no excuse
for harmony.
- - - - - - - A profound poem with stunning imagery- - - - - -Darkness in the ring- - A breach in harmony- - -Bharati Nayak
Sunday, August 13, 2017
Who Was Me?
Wow, another great write here Satish. You always take me somewhere with your great imagery and unique tone.-mossgirl19
The imagery had me on the edge of my seat. Dark, straining, reaching. Exquisite piece of work!!-Jessica
The imagery had me on the edge of my seat. Dark, straining, reaching. Exquisite piece of work!!-Jessica
Bare Tongue
This is beautiful and haunting to the bones!-mossgirl19
The thought process you had when writing this eludes me but can I just say I love it for what it is, suppose that's the beauty of poetry.-Aries Rising
To be honest I don't even know what you are talking about, but I love it. Blue clouds? Empty cauldron? Robot leading a revolution maybe? This poem remind me of the scene in the 2011 (I think) of the reboot of freddy kreuger nightmare when at the beginning he was dreaming of all the weird things and pigs in the pots on fire in the kitchen. This poem also for some reason makes me think of heronymous bosch and one of the paintings, thinking what kind of fable is being depicted here. Great poem. And please don't be offended I'm writing on instinct ha.-Milo
To be honest I don't even know what you are talking about, but I love it. Blue clouds? Empty cauldron? Robot leading a revolution maybe? This poem remind me of the scene in the 2011 (I think) of the reboot of freddy kreuger nightmare when at the beginning he was dreaming of all the weird things and pigs in the pots on fire in the kitchen. This poem also for some reason makes me think of heronymous bosch and one of the paintings, thinking what kind of fable is being depicted here. Great poem. And please don't be offended I'm writing on instinct ha.-Milo
The Ink Did Not Stop
The ink did not stop / I was writing alone. This you have done admirably and with remarkable diligence always. Your obsessions to express your most profound thoughts consistently, is indeed very inspiring, Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Friday, August 11, 2017
Self-Deception
"Goddess of ruin"---oh what an amazing usage! Nice poem. -R R Gandikota ,
KAKINADA
Wednesday, August 9, 2017
Howling
Seamless.
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Tuesday, August 8, 2017
Reaching Out
The emotions have been captured in your poem in a very careful and precise manner.
Can you read from the stains of an empty
cup of tea? My life had been like that. These lines are really relatable by many since their life is also no different from that of yours.-Gurleen Kaur Narang
Can you read from the stains of an empty
cup of tea? My life had been like that. These lines are really relatable by many since their life is also no different from that of yours.-Gurleen Kaur Narang
Monday, August 7, 2017
Arithmeatic
I enjoyed this poem, the imagery you created was nice.-lostinthewaves
please tell me what your poem name means.
simple and cute poem.-Abraham George
please tell me what your poem name means.
simple and cute poem.-Abraham George
The Shooting Star
Powerful Images
"By transforming the obsession
into the wholeness of a metaphor,
don’t you externalize the center,
of a theme?"
When I want to read the finest poetry I've encountered anywhere in a long time - I read 10 or so of your work and rethink why I became a poet when the world has you. - Marvelous writing - enjoyed twice :-allets
"By transforming the obsession
into the wholeness of a metaphor,
don’t you externalize the center,
of a theme?"
When I want to read the finest poetry I've encountered anywhere in a long time - I read 10 or so of your work and rethink why I became a poet when the world has you. - Marvelous writing - enjoyed twice :-allets
Of Unknown Roots
There is something very special in the poem- a search, a probe or a study of reality of life. Thanks.
Tying loose / threads / to become sane.
The book remains incomplete / I have come to meet the prince of
pranks. There was a / mystical touch.-Rajnish Manga
Tying loose / threads / to become sane.
The book remains incomplete / I have come to meet the prince of
pranks. There was a / mystical touch.-Rajnish Manga
Howling
Seamless.
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Saturday, August 5, 2017
Knowing Thyself
No one knows who they are. This is the nature of mind full of electro-chemical neurons that pulsate unceasingly all of life. See my Our Fascinating Minds.-Robert Murray Smith
Friday, August 4, 2017
Black Walls
True, things have been deteriorating fast, faster than we can imagine. But there is hope. Always a star of hope in the dark sky blinking away without our notice. Do we care to notice? An interesting read sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Thursday, August 3, 2017
Without A Name
This poem seems to have borne out of dissatisfaction of not having achieved much in life, and talks of defeats in life. The mind is also agitated at time running out. While this is reality with most people, it will be better to remain positive and try to do something worthwhile in the remaining time of life. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad
A loser becomes a nameless hero, much like the thought all will be well in the end. Stimulating read. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
A loser becomes a nameless hero, much like the thought all will be well in the end. Stimulating read. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Saturn Will Shortly Rise
Bravo. A gripping read.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
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