I like this poetry its haunting and daunting to the senses.-SuperSlimJim
Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Not Negotiating
This is a very thought provoking poem wisely penned and shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Sunday, November 26, 2017
Still Alive
A though-provoking poem, Satish ji. The idea of gender-bending to give man some of the basic genes of a woman and make him more compassionate, certainly could lead to a better world.-GSP Rao
Yes we will survive everything, but wars, stubborn wars will become worse; we will die a thousand deaths without any 'different' birth therapy, but not succumb. We are destined to witness and withstand wars. -Supratik Sen
Yes we will survive everything, but wars, stubborn wars will become worse; we will die a thousand deaths without any 'different' birth therapy, but not succumb. We are destined to witness and withstand wars. -Supratik Sen
Tuesday, November 21, 2017
A Mauve Wound
A wonderful poem reflecting the bearing of panting pain in life.
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Who Gives Up?
Insightful and contemplative reflection of the world within a faithful soul. Thanks.
The heartbeats miss.... with every skip of god's name.
Slices and maneuvers ― become the right of day.-Rajnish Manga
The heartbeats miss.... with every skip of god's name.
Slices and maneuvers ― become the right of day.-Rajnish Manga
Expanding The Sky
The poet has really a unique style of expressing his innermost feelings.
Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote:
Something unsaid
will remain between the words.
I pick up the dots.-Rajnish Manga
Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote:
Something unsaid
will remain between the words.
I pick up the dots.-Rajnish Manga
Diet Of Tears
The words suck
the essence of unspoken
grief, when life turns
around to say goodbye.... //.... Feelings of the heart nicely expressed. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
the essence of unspoken
grief, when life turns
around to say goodbye.... //.... Feelings of the heart nicely expressed. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Talking To A Friend
From unknown to unknown / I am the self / I am the known beautifully summarises everything - our life, what we know and what we cannot. -GSP Rao
Monday, November 20, 2017
A Mauve Wound
A wonderful poem reflecting the bearing of panting pain in life.
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Counting The Steps
This is a mysterious offering full of death images. The last two lines are particularly enigmatic, as though the speaker was dealing with some deeply held guilt. It is almost as if t he/ she was in the midst of a dream. Beyond this I can tell nothing.-John the Baptist
Saturday, November 18, 2017
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Sunday, November 12, 2017
The Hostage
Thanks for the meaningful share.-Jasneet Kaur
Saturday, November 11, 2017
Secretly
To Stay
"in the house of truth" is residence and a promise - nicely woven ambiguity - enjoyed, as always.-allets
"in the house of truth" is residence and a promise - nicely woven ambiguity - enjoyed, as always.-allets
Sacrificing Oneself
Austerity is great path to get fragrant life. Brilliant poem is beautiful.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Friday, November 10, 2017
Contentiously
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
A Whirlwind Romance
You are a very special poet overlooked. -James Michael
satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now, and two, that I could write as well as you do.-FredPeyer
satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now, and two, that I could write as well as you do.-FredPeyer
Still Alive
satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I think I need a few more readings as well as some time to think. But am not sure if I will understand it.-FredPeyer
Slanting The Picture
Depending on me
Very nice poem Mr. Venu Gopal, Karuna Sri's "Pushpa Vilapam" comes to my mind. As a student of Botany, I liked your poem very much.-R R Gandikota
Thanks for the interesting post.-Jasneet Kaur
Thanks for the interesting post.-Jasneet Kaur
Tuesday, November 7, 2017
Starting Synchro In Trinity
Look, from where to
where we have come to
know each other..... //.... Wow! Great expression. Freshness overwhelms. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
where we have come to
know each other..... //.... Wow! Great expression. Freshness overwhelms. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Saturday, November 4, 2017
Eternality
Thanks for sharing a thoughtful read. Keep writing and responding to other posts.-Jasneet Kaur
Friday, November 3, 2017
The Hostage
I really like this. You used very powerful imagery and force your reader to think about their meaning.-PotbellyPleb
Wednesday, November 1, 2017
Economics
"...to seek nothing..."
All corporeal acqisitions are nothing, god(s) do not exist on this plane equals nothing - I like walking around in dichotomies and ambiguities in end lines, Satish.- allets
All corporeal acqisitions are nothing, god(s) do not exist on this plane equals nothing - I like walking around in dichotomies and ambiguities in end lines, Satish.- allets
Flying In Dark
Interesting as usual. You explore inner truths and come up with the strength of your ego which seems mighty important So where are you, the apple once bitten goes brown and dissolves, implodes. The twin is the mirror inverse is that person less an egotist or more. I wonder.-Paul Brookes
It Was Time
Love this-so much for food for thought in this write.-Brenda
Satish
An incredible piece which has your name all over with great metaphors and story
well done.-Michael
"Leaky ethics" ... love it! Great poem Satish.-Kitty Cat Lady
Satish...this write is mystical and engaging. Amazing poem about time.-mossgirl19
Blown away:
O, watchmaker,
trapped in your own shadow,
you were yourself a fugitive.-ddavidd
Satish
An incredible piece which has your name all over with great metaphors and story
well done.-Michael
"Leaky ethics" ... love it! Great poem Satish.-Kitty Cat Lady
Satish...this write is mystical and engaging. Amazing poem about time.-mossgirl19
Blown away:
O, watchmaker,
trapped in your own shadow,
you were yourself a fugitive.-ddavidd
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