I loved this, I love nature and I wish more people wrote about it.-Yajaira Katzi
Sunday, December 31, 2017
Thursday, December 28, 2017
Honey Trap
Writing Furtively
No matter how unobtrusive you are, your irrelevant song will not have an effect on the inevitable disaster. Godd one Satish ji, -Supratik Sen
Saturday, December 23, 2017
Invisible Stains
Misty lips don't
leave the imprints on
the frozen face..... //.... There is something very special in your portrayal of emotions.-Rajnish Manga
leave the imprints on
the frozen face..... //.... There is something very special in your portrayal of emotions.-Rajnish Manga
Serendipity
i always hope it is Emmanuel in us that calls that shots ... you write such interesting poetry... may not comment much but that is because life is busy but I try not to miss what you post. happy holidays to you.-Debera
One Reality Show
Happy holidays. What a wonderful poetic weave. Interwoven within our time, Cosmos, and hearts with eloquence, while earthen, veraciously baying while meekly saying, we can but be like water. A few thoughts to close the New Year with :) An injustice to any is an injustice to all, and if it isn't addressed individually, it becomes a global injustice as well. "You can't struggle with the man's house (mansion) using the man's tools", Audrey Lourdes, "be the change you wish to see in the world", "the root of all oppression lies in (supposed) science", Gandhi. Remember, if responsibility isn't exercised, its Siamese twin sister, freedom, will wither, like an unused muscle as well; now, sadly, because of self-possession, it needs to be exorcised before it's exercised. No one must be conned by the corporate structure's convolution, divide and conquer only works on the divided, life is indivisible, as your potential is illimitable. If you will, please copy, share. Matutinally Yours, reality, james m nordlund.-reality1
Tribulations
I'll be honest, I never really understand your writes but I really enjoy reading them. This in no exception-it really is beautifully done-Brenda
Writing Furtively
No matter how unobtrusive you are, your irrelevant song will not have an effect on the inevitable disaster. Godd one Satish ji, -Supratik Sen
Thursday, December 21, 2017
Wednesday, December 20, 2017
The Shriek
Mute scars
Topically, of the abused. - well expressed concept. We hide our scars and their causes.-allets
Topically, of the abused. - well expressed concept. We hide our scars and their causes.-allets
Tuesday, December 19, 2017
The Gift Of Abandonment
While most of your recent poems have a moon in them, like this one, I am not sure if I could catch the intent here, unless it is talking about the confusing moonless night as a gift of abdonment.-Supratik Sen
Sunday, December 17, 2017
Upstaging
Friday, December 15, 2017
Imploring
This realisation sets one free.-Supratik Sen
Thursday, December 14, 2017
Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Taking Sand Bath
Satish, each stanza a mystery to themselves. A fine write.-Robert Murray Smith
Parentheses
Yes, there is no point adding sugar to the sea.-Supratik Sen
"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota
"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota
Sunday, December 10, 2017
Renouncing
Questions that do not have answers, unless someone takes a plunge. -Supratik Sen
Saturday, December 9, 2017
Deterrence
I liked the image of caressing the mimosa, like a metaphor for vulnerable love? The third stanza 'The spontaneous probe will start the construct..' is very intriguing, but I wonder if it could be expressed more simply. I liked the abstract feel of this though. It feels like I am walking through time, touching and feeling.-monono
Thursday, December 7, 2017
Let's Think
A philosophically analytical poem. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga
Ending Was A Ceremony
Yes and that becomes a ceremony... strange but true. The poem's quiet and firm tone is appealing.-
Supratik Sen
Supratik Sen
Wednesday, December 6, 2017
Disoriented
..."abduction-of a mystic"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.-Yahchanan AbiyaH
Tuesday, December 5, 2017
The Perceiver
This sure shines in the lines of poetry it made me smile.-SuperSlimJim
Monday, December 4, 2017
Tragedies
This reminds me of a few different pieces, such as the kidnap poem by Nikki Giovanni and the circus is cheaper when it rains by Iain S. Thomas.
It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.
I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay
It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.
I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay
Icing
We'll never be able to control this planet, try though we might. I think as a race, we're incredibly arrogant to believe that we can. The earth is on a journey all of its own and was very busy with that long before humans popped up for the ride, and it will continue its journey long after we've self-destructed
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady
Saturday, December 2, 2017
Undressing
Nicely articulated poem with unique expressions. Thanks for sharing, Mr Verma.
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga
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