Sunday, April 29, 2018
Friday, April 27, 2018
Crisis Moment
My...this is as Mr Darcy said filled with mystery but I can also
see how people are destroying nature but its worded with much
vividness! I like it and would like a deeper explanation into this for
some of the lines are so interestingly penned!-Meena Krish
Super imagery. I admit to not understanding it, but the dark sinister images were inspiring. I especially like the eel in the gut. I could almost feel it's search for the light as it poked eyes out of their sockets.
A journey across the equator?
Wonderful and mysterious. - Mr. Darcy
see how people are destroying nature but its worded with much
vividness! I like it and would like a deeper explanation into this for
some of the lines are so interestingly penned!-Meena Krish
Super imagery. I admit to not understanding it, but the dark sinister images were inspiring. I especially like the eel in the gut. I could almost feel it's search for the light as it poked eyes out of their sockets.
A journey across the equator?
Wonderful and mysterious. - Mr. Darcy
Thursday, April 26, 2018
Sharp Murals
Satish,
A dark tale from you, so much imagery captured in metaphors which you really delve yourself deep into.
I enjoyed reading this
well done.-Michael
A dark tale from you, so much imagery captured in metaphors which you really delve yourself deep into.
I enjoyed reading this
well done.-Michael
Wednesday, April 25, 2018
Lofty Peaks
Quite an intriguing poem. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Sunday, April 22, 2018
Conversation
A thought provoking read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Holy Bath
The contrasting imagery is nicely conveyed here. I think I may opt for the main course, leaving myself time for a long beach walk?-Mr. Darcy
Saturday, April 21, 2018
Wordless Pains
It casts a spell.
A rock licks the moon.
Wow Satish Sir, what a brilliant modern poem.
Thanks for sharing it.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
A rock licks the moon.
Wow Satish Sir, what a brilliant modern poem.
Thanks for sharing it.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
Friday, April 20, 2018
Paralysed
Mysterious and enjoyable reading. I like the use of symbolism beyond my usual experience.-slithr
The Democracy
A satirical representation. The bo tree has become a mere symbol of peace and tranquility when in reality there is only chaos that is becoming endemic with passing time. Thank you Satish sir for the timely poem. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Yes, most timely. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Yes, most timely. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Wednesday, April 18, 2018
Questioning Again
I sense some dark inscription from this, and I must say that I enjoy it. Well done.-Nicholas Browning
Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Chemistry
Nice composition. TFS.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Understanding Death
Fascinating write-as always a lot of thought in this-well done.-Brenda
Saturday, April 14, 2018
Unlikely
I can feel a sense of sorrow in the poem. My interpretation is that the red hibiscus wants to be loved? Excuse me if I get it wrong. Thanks for sharing.-CJ43223
Friday, April 13, 2018
Sacrifice
I completely understand where you are in the well penned poem. made me think and I like that. great write, my friend.-kevin browne
I do know the yellow glare well. Believe me, that's all that matters.-Lawless
I need someone to explain it to me.-onepauly
the true meaning of love is sacrifice.-onepauly
I do know the yellow glare well. Believe me, that's all that matters.-Lawless
I need someone to explain it to me.-onepauly
the true meaning of love is sacrifice.-onepauly
Untrailed
Nice composition. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Thursday, April 12, 2018
What September
Congratulations on hanging in there with PostPoems to reach 2700 posts. When I need a surreal pick-up and a spiritual lift or a need to contemplate matter - I read Satish - allets
Climbing Up
Almost eerie in a way. I like it though.-Nicholas Browning
we need to reclaim not just our integrity but our dignity towards the respect of the meaning I perceive behind your work here. I love the way you end on a positive note. good work.-kevin browne
we need to reclaim not just our integrity but our dignity towards the respect of the meaning I perceive behind your work here. I love the way you end on a positive note. good work.-kevin browne
Deeply Scarred
I will be honest, I never totally understand your poems but I always enjoy reading them. It seems with this one you have a lot of underlying things being said about current things happening in the world today. Well done as always.-Brenda
Wednesday, April 11, 2018
Struck By Moon
Facing moon and getting cosmic touch matter a lot with analysis of emotion. Without goddess of love life temple is empty and this gives sadness. A brilliant poem is interestingly presented...10-Kumarmani Mahakul
Empathy With Tattered Cape
Pilgrims Progress
transcending "the dead remains of ancestors". Shedding the past or reincarnating it - either way, it is very poetic. Enjoyed the depth, the wisdom - allets
transcending "the dead remains of ancestors". Shedding the past or reincarnating it - either way, it is very poetic. Enjoyed the depth, the wisdom - allets
Neutral
A shade between two borders of lies/ between right and wrong. - Apt meaning of neutral. A good poem. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore,
Tuesday, April 10, 2018
Imploring
This write is deep,and it speaks of a sadness. Writing helps to self express,and often consoles the heart. Knowing you are never alone no matter what the circumstance we reply with understanding and prayers. Big hugs for all thee hurts this often cruel world hands out. -JacieStralkoDuca
Being self-deprecating is a noble act as long as we don’t hurt ourselves in the process. Nice poem I enjoyed it.-Mark Heathcote
Being self-deprecating is a noble act as long as we don’t hurt ourselves in the process. Nice poem I enjoyed it.-Mark Heathcote
Scouring
Sunday, April 8, 2018
Parentheses
Refreshingly clever and different Cut from a spare cloth Devious in its slender thoughts.-slithr
Thousand Moons
Interesting. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
A beautiful poem. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
A beautiful poem. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
Saturday, April 7, 2018
World Moves On
"...A psudowar of words..."
Sounds like humans interacting again or a poet crocheting. Liked this one lots-allets
Sounds like humans interacting again or a poet crocheting. Liked this one lots-allets
Recovering
Satish, like so many of your works, I don't pretend to fully understand this, but I am always mesmerised by your writing.-Ben Pickard
Friday, April 6, 2018
Last Hope
Just keep the hope going strong. Enjoyed the lines ''Footprints and invisible faces. Somewhere a hope lives in amber." -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Thursday, April 5, 2018
A Whirlwind Romance
I find your muse very soothing to my ear but a little too abstract to precisely pin down. But I nevertheless really like them.-Mark Heathcote
Uprooting
Much respect for every word! This might be my favorite poem from Your repertoire my friend.-Post Scriptum,
Wednesday, April 4, 2018
Scrutinizing
An intriguing composition with intricate similes. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, April 3, 2018
Thoughts In Wind
Wow Sir, what a beautiful mind blowing and modern poem.
Amazed at the skill of your writing.
You are the king of short poems-Subhas Chandra Chakra
Amazed at the skill of your writing.
You are the king of short poems-Subhas Chandra Chakra
New Features
Gold and honey, pretty much the same thing in the coal-pit. Compassion is the prize.-Lawless
Monday, April 2, 2018
Unending Marathon
An analytical perspective of the confused nature of being human. Or just judgmental?-Lawless
The Futurist
Unpunctuating,/ fear will slice the time, - a lovely expression. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
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