Tuesday, July 31, 2018
Shooting Stars
I like the deliberate pacing and delicate brush strokes you use to create your poetry. A mystery and yet not.
Take care.-Mr. Darcy
Take care.-Mr. Darcy
Sunday, July 29, 2018
Loose Threads
Sisyphus
This piece...
I'm not sure how many times I just read this but it made me read it over and over.
Looked up Sysyphus and really related to the kind of loop one can get caught up in.
Makes me think.-sootyash
I'm not sure how many times I just read this but it made me read it over and over.
Looked up Sysyphus and really related to the kind of loop one can get caught up in.
Makes me think.-sootyash
Saturday, July 28, 2018
Tuesday, July 24, 2018
All Said
This poem is highly discouraging.-abstractempo
Deep and intense as always..I love your work.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)
Deep and intense as always..I love your work.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)
Nothingness
An interesting read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, July 23, 2018
I Demand
Satis,
very intricate piece with some magical complexities to unravel too.
Totally enjoyed this one.-Unsub
very intricate piece with some magical complexities to unravel too.
Totally enjoyed this one.-Unsub
The Claudication
"...Too/Many boats in the sea of eyes."
The world watches as migrants drown - I can not stop thinking of helpless flounding boats and bigger boats ignoring them. Immigrants murdered to prevent contamination of nationalist maritime doctrines and policies. Italy has closed its doors and won't take any refugees profered by Spain. These little scenarios escape the media. The drama is tragic and too real - allets
The world watches as migrants drown - I can not stop thinking of helpless flounding boats and bigger boats ignoring them. Immigrants murdered to prevent contamination of nationalist maritime doctrines and policies. Italy has closed its doors and won't take any refugees profered by Spain. These little scenarios escape the media. The drama is tragic and too real - allets
Saturday, July 21, 2018
Friday, July 20, 2018
Thursday, July 19, 2018
Wounded Veils
Beautiful and well flowing write!-Troylato
Beautiful and well flowing write!-Troylato
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/
Beautiful and well flowing write!-Troylato
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/
This Was Cobra Night
This Sounds Like
Trump & Putin. I could be wroing. I'm usually wrong. Apropo and topical thugh.- allets
https://www.postpoems.org/
Trump & Putin. I could be wroing. I'm usually wrong. Apropo and topical thugh.- allets
https://www.postpoems.org/
Gliding
Tuesday, July 17, 2018
A Wrong Turn
Thanks for the insightful share. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, July 16, 2018
Saturday, July 14, 2018
Loftiness
You play beautifully with words and gift us little treats...thanks so much☺!!-Tahsin.Z
A Bruised Memory
Memories need not necessarily be happy, some times laced with pain, they could be most abhorred. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, July 13, 2018
Untold Journey
"A child will ask, when my father will return? There was no answer. The tide has brought back the ashes. " This last line is so true for some. Great write!-Troylato
Thursday, July 12, 2018
Streaking Alone
Well penned my friend, well penned. Loved this line "something glitters which was not yellow." Keep it flowing.-Troylato
Wednesday, July 11, 2018
Stone Hearted
That first stanza really packs a punch. It seemed so spontaneous.-Sara Fielder
Tuesday, July 10, 2018
Moratorium
"The museum of skulls" is very evocative all by itself.
One can't help but get a sense of irony, with "Civilisation had come very far." (complete with capitalisation).
It looks like you're getting closer to refining this style.-charlie
One can't help but get a sense of irony, with "Civilisation had come very far." (complete with capitalisation).
It looks like you're getting closer to refining this style.-charlie
Monday, July 9, 2018
No Vilification
An interesting share. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Sunday, July 8, 2018
Fangs Open
Oh, this is a bit of poetic class, my friend. I understand every word and their meanings. Brilliant metaphor. Good work.-kevin browne
Lips Will Measure
Saturday, July 7, 2018
Ink Fall
I really, really like the last stanza. It seems ethereal, but has weight, too.
"aurora of stainless" is an interesting turn of phrase...-charlie
"aurora of stainless" is an interesting turn of phrase...-charlie
Friday, July 6, 2018
Endless Search
Soaring High
So brilliant. I have been wrestling this question myself of late. You have carved this into the most beautiful question.-Tanya Southey
Wow, this poem is amazing.-Bless_Poet
Congrats on the win!-mossgirl19
Congrats on the win!!-Ren
Congrats!-Mark
It is hard to find a place in the world when all around you is bad.
Nominated.- Ben Pickard
Wow, this poem is amazing.-Bless_Poet
Congrats on the win!-mossgirl19
Congrats on the win!!-Ren
Congrats!-Mark
It is hard to find a place in the world when all around you is bad.
Nominated.- Ben Pickard
Day Of Anxiety
An interesting read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, July 4, 2018
The Vinegar Test
Oh my, you've stepped it up.
You are my favorite poet next to Robert Goslin. You are probably more recognized.-Lawless
You are my favorite poet next to Robert Goslin. You are probably more recognized.-Lawless
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Unmaking Me
Your article is detailed, thanks to it I solved the problem I am entangled. I will regularly follow your writers and visit this site daily geometry dash.-ellascottgm
The best of of a life - Moving on...
Many absurd tasks are offered by the brain to wrap up the betrayer or depression...still a good intention rises somewhere...Thanks for sharing this!-Tahsin.Z
The best of of a life - Moving on...
Many absurd tasks are offered by the brain to wrap up the betrayer or depression...still a good intention rises somewhere...Thanks for sharing this!-Tahsin.Z
What A Scenario
Simple and Beautiful.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Monday, July 2, 2018
Assaying
Love starting a Friday with a great write. Loved this one my friend!-Troylato
Brilliant Stroke
I want to start out by saying this is a very odd and unique piece. Not in a bad way whatsoever, I just wanted to let you know you really have a different way of writing. Your works always feel like they're in an alternate world entirely. The second the readers take in that first stanza they're sucked into your world, a world that you have created whether you realize it or not. Each poem seems to be in a different world, a different time. When you write you bring something truly magnificent and well, genius to us. Your perspective on your surroundings and life in general are really a fascinating subject. You seem to have no problem showing these perspectives and you are very good at showing who you are as a person through your writing. Amazing, I look forward to more from you.-Eve
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