Seed Money

great format and message.-Jayesh

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Eternal Verities

I don't understand how people are still under-appreciating your work. I love it still. The sodden hint of formaldehyde touched with a glint of truth and disparity. Well done once more.-Nicholas Browning

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The Blooming Blood

Lovely and creative write my friend!-Troylato

Creative and yet sad. Good writing.-MissSharon

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Massive Explosion

What a well written post my friend! Because of the way I was taught as a child I DO have hope of a fabulous eternity after death with Christ in heaven. And...if what I've been taught is not true, what have I lost to have had faith? BUT....if those who do NOT believe are wrong they face an eternity that will not be pleasant in the least.-MissSharon

Great and creative write my friend!-Troylato

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Feeding Silkworms

Lovely
"Again the mountain
slips. The terrain becomes pathless,
placeless. "
A hauntingly beautiful sentiment.-j.d.wade

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Soaring High

Judging comment:

Oh, another beautiful poem about purpose - one's purpose in life; the ultimate purpose of life; the world's purpose in our own life. I somewhere along the lines, found all these questions in this short and crisp piece. Built on the foundations of sad imagery, the verses take me into a very different world than what the poet himself feels - does poetry only make the poets help realize and put together their thoughts and feelings, or somewhere do we as readers take bits and pieces from them too in our minds, or do they just end up like piled up newspapers - read, abandoned and forgotten in our cupboards. Thank you.-gumshuda

So brilliant. I have been wrestling this question myself of late. You have carved this into the most beautiful question.-Tanya Southey

Wow, this poem is amazing.-Bless_Poet

Congrats on the win!-mossgirl19

Congrats on the win!!-Ren

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Eternality

Judging comment:

Your words have clubbed in a mixture of mystery and curiousity in its every line. Having read this piece multiple times, I am still left wondering if this piece talks of a personal dilemma or contains some hidden deeper meaning in it that needs to be found by the reader.-gumshuda

Congrats on the win.-Mark

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Will Meet Again

Raw and thundering!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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In Disguise

Thanks for the intriguing disguise. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

POEM IN... DISGUISE ! -R R Gandikota , Hyderabad

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Receive Your Children

A powerful write my friend.-MissSharon

Great write, love the style!-Troylato

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* The Dead Tiger

Mindblowing sir... Short of words to comment...-Indranil Bhaduri

Striking imagery here.-Yacov Mitchenko

the nesting eagles, I choose
this bitter absurdity of large wings
under the sun, where they will announce the shade,

a lonely patch of life, of signature
kill of future, the metamorphosis of a street
into unending wait;
-----
powerful words great imagery painted! ! ! -Catrina Heart

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Unending Rope

I enjoy your poetry sir. I am intrigued that you never comment on the poems of others. Whatever the case, keep posting and I shall continue to read.-spinner

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Taboos

Hmm.... so I had to look up "aperitif" and I found out it is an alcoholic beverage taken before a meal to stimulate the appetite.

I feel a sense of uneasiness in this piece. Like you are purposefully familiarizing yourself with this darkness, this alcohol that consumes you, and instead of having that control of how much you consume, you drown in it.

Something I admire about your poetry is that it so distinct yet I often have to read lines again because I could take several interpretations. Perhaps there is only one meaning, but when I read the short verses you write I have this sense you put every word in place for a specific purpose.

When I read this, I felt like I was falling, that sense of remorse yet not being able to pick myself up. That loss of substance, "no flesh", "cleaning the words on the whiteboard" - perhaps the inner voice of your mind.

Okay, so now after almost finishing my comment and reading again, I see you have placed this in the "nature/environment" category. I'm tying this to being immersed in that darkness/alcohol with being immersed in a flood. There's a sense of hopelessness too.

Really interesting piece.-Poet on the Piano

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Come Again

...and the warring
struggles continue...
Excellent!-Laura

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Dying Art

I don't always understand the contexts of your poetry but it is always captivating and most thought provoking and this is no exception.-Milly Hayward

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Foetus Was Not Moving

This poem is full
of haunting symbolism. Excellent write.-and_hera_met_zeus

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Sides Of The Truth

Swallow all the darkness
of crying earth, I impel your
nails to scratch the sun........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Frightening

Can visualize the turbulence all around, frightening. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Disoriented

I really enjoyed this piece and if you read it over you can take different things from it.
Regards.-CJ Maleney

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I Survive You

WoW!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Such a deep write, beautiful style and the words just hit hard. Fantastic work!-Em MacKenzie

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Looming Large

nice poetry. loved the tittle looming large and in put of nature as this was very effective.-lowpoem 

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Tempestuous

Wonderful.-abstractempo

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Relics Of Words

nice stanza-
Let the mother resolve,
who was the immortal son
of the bruised earth.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Frightening

Can visualize the turbulence all around, frightening. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Incinerated

As always a curious and deep piece.-Michael

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Unheavenly

Great piece.-Crystal Hope

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Sacred Committment

Delightful verses, Satish ji, graphic in imagery and an undercurrent of affection.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Quite moving. Good poem.-R R Gandikota , Hyderabad

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In Trepidation

This is a well written beautiful write. I always enjoy your work my friend!-Troylato

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Looming Large

The Assumption
Is that there are garden prayers and that butterflies can declare them over (on the surface). The thing about personal imagery is the puzzle and the internal codes which I totally agree the reader can not be written in or permitted access. All that survives is undaunted and unsuppressed emotion - not too shabby. - allets

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Many Injuries

Concealing the wall
yellow lilies try to bluff me
from underground. Spring was
still afar.

The second existence
was not possible. Trying to
go again for a trial......so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Demanding Answers After The Chemical Attacks In Damascus

Such A Powerful Title
And a map to the imagery of Satish the poet. Wowed! - allets

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Some Stupidity

For Those
Who do mayhem and disrupt the calm, this poem - allets

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My China Broke

Everything you write that I read hits notes so deep.- Hopefulwoman

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Consecrating Muse

Great expression. It is here that the mythology and reality meet. Thanks:
Indeed you discover
Yourself, reading the myth of modern
Sisyphus and floating rock.-Rajnish Manga

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A Noble Life

I feel like I've read this before. Something strikes me like deja vu. Very intimate to me, thank you.-abstractempo

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Disturbances

Excellent writing Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

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Endless Search

Thank you for the interesting share. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Some Stupidity

For Those
Who do mayhem and disrupt the calm, this poem.-allets

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Wrapped In Stigma

Interesting and thought provoking write my friend. I enjoyed the read.-MissSharon

Awesome write my friend!-Troylato

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Unanimously

a fantastic piece. Very good work!-Crystal Hope

"A chilling meet begins between the sparring wheels" What a statement. Thank you.-abstractempo

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Fighting One Another

I feel a presence.
Jessamine's smile.
A bright planet was going to
take birth. Nobody wants
to be left behind. I take the pen........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem nicely executed.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Absurd Myths

I liked this and the questions it raised.-Mr. Darcy

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Battered Faith

Very stark. An accurate read for today's feel. Thank you for the vocab.-abstractempo

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The Sterility

Very good poem, enjoyed reading it.
Couldn't help but notice in the second stanza last line, is "thruths" suppose to be "truths"?-Fenrir

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To Know Not To Know

Two sides of a coin. You
take turn to kiss the hands
of benevolent god.........here is the essence o the poem. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Blue Valley

A typical poem needing a number of reads before being comprehended. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Reviled And Revered

Love this style and wonderful write!-Troylato

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Returning Your Message

A fantastic write.-Crystal Hope

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Waiting To Happen

Sometimes the inner sorrowful situation of a castle is something opposite of what we see from outside.... am glad to read it from you....thanks for sharing Sir :)-Tahsin.Z

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Being The Untruth

The poem is a treat for the mind. Brain and the heart will have to work overtime
to come to terms of these poetic expressions. Thanks, Satish Sir. -Rajnish Manga

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Reverberations

I hope the lonely man rises from the ashes and lives another cycle. Enjoyed your poem sir.-spinner

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The Nature

Enjoyed the dissection of true nature. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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I Want Bliss

Your vision is remarkable, Dear Poet. For example:
What does the silence
say? You need to erect a
god's temple on funeral ground?-Rajnish Manga

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Give Me Something

The silence opening up the blood trails that stayed with me how we weep.-Robin Carretti

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Was It A Warning?

My comment couldn’t do justice. Poetry here, Poet.-Persephone

"Love was an execution
drug. It works
inside, not outside. "
Astounding observation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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In Deep Anguish

Your writing is fantastic.-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Light Was Failing

Very good! The last stanza, great end lines.-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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No Snobbery

Satish,
oh this is very good indeed!
Particularly like:
"No words will follow me
I am going unwritten. "-Unsub

Excellent point of view!
Snobbery eliminated!-Laura

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A Poem

Great write! Loved the flow of these spoken thoughts!-Troylato

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Prophesying

Excellently executed! -Laura

I wish I could understand this.-abstractempo

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No Snobbery

Satish,
oh this is very good indeed!
Particularly like:
"No words will follow me
I am going unwritten. "-Unsub

Excellent point of view!
Snobbery eliminated!-Laura

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Was It A Warning?

"Love was an execution
drug. It works
inside, not outside. "
Astounding observation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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It Is Absurd

sounds like an intense
sounds like an intense situation. The imagery of the anarchist in the cauldron is stark. I like this poem.-fuche_bu

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Burning Across The Sky

Very realistic, you can relay your re-actions to the mood stating.-Domic Sands

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It Comes

First off you have used a great deal of grammar that is simplistic to taste. I liked the flow. Further, you have grown in your work as an artist type poet. Really liking your work. Words of nicely woven linguistic terms. Fashioned in a great experience type work you got here. Try reaching out to your fan base it may surprise you. Even you who may think otherwise. This piece is wonderful in its presentation. Lastly, subjects change and there maybe a pattern to this equation. Mark the one willing to let go & explore.
This incredible piece makes one really think. About the seasons the air we breath and the touch of a hand to hold. Savor each memory that is presented. I may come across as being cold at times but i really have a special place in my heart for poetry. Everyday i search for the latest poem that comes across feeling very positive to me. Grasping the dear message that each poem has been presented. you show your growth with each delicate penned piece that I come across reading. Thank you for the chance to have read.-Mario Vitale

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Freaking Out

First, you have eyes to see very great and potentially fantastic poetry. This remarkable piece really makes you think a bit. Further, as if a sculpture would create a piece. Your remedy is in check with thoughts provoking premise intact. I was drifting halfway down maybe that’s just me ? I picked up the pieces and really valued this exquisite piece. Lastly, overall i don’t see and flaws but rather enjoyed the meaning of this grand poetic endeavor. You hit the ball out of the park with this one. Thank you kindly.-Mario Vitale

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Absinthe

A giant leap into fame you got potential pal would love to read more of your work. Strong message you have here really hit home in accordance to the poem piece. You are very alert and stand in one accord according to its great message. Such as a blade of grass torn in the wind you have great taste in brevity. Further, your word choice is professional very in tuned you got here from the heart you got to write more of your excellent poetry. Lastly, it encompasses a wealth of knowledge to humanity to embark along its journey.-Mario Vitale

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Renouncing

Interesting? Intriguing, as always...-Mr. Darcy

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Difficult Choice

And I listen to your complexity of love and fear combining in your writing. Your brave expression about being queer touches upon my heart because I have my tendencies to indulge with whatever I what and feel the need to do. I like your words here. They lean up against each other with life and it's passions. Great work.-kevin browne

Excellent!-Laura

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Not Holding

An interesting read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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