Your words too are broken and heartfelt.
You birthdate is a special one.
Thank you.-
Lyn PaulBees ready to fly away! ! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-
Edward Kofi LouisSometimes the design goes awry.
Ptosis. You are called for―
a fall. But you refuse
to die.
You survive the clouds, the
first moon, the brown eyes.
Me before the sun.- - - - - I can not say I fully understood the poem, still its beauty makes me come here again and again to read and enjoy.-
Bharati NayakA great poem indeed. Like to read again and again. Deserved to be poem of the day.-
Anil Kumar PandaA great philosophical poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.-
Kumarmani MahakulA fabulous piece of work! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!-
Dr Dillip K SwainThe tie that binds two hearts that once connected has gone...Marvelous expression is vividly seen in every line...I love it..Congrats for being chosen as POD.-
Jez BrulHow truly lovely. Congratulations on Poem of the day and very well deserved I might add.-
Sarah PerssonHeartiest Congratulations for selection of this beautifully conceived poem as Poem of the Day.-
Ratnakar MandlikSatish, such a splendid poem of the day...........
Congrats for being chosen...10++++++++++++-
Bernard F. Asuncionnice writing
The shrine of a (intentional error) flier
insurmountable thinking for poor hunger!.-
Mahtab BangaleeNot a poem that we would put in our pocket.-Chainsaw
An interesting peculiar write with a pleasant flow. Enjoyed the style. Congrats for POD selection.10+++-
Petals Azureblue