Thursday, January 31, 2019
Perhaps I Could Believe
Emotionally explosive verse. Keep sharing. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, January 30, 2019
Monday, January 28, 2019
Saturday, January 26, 2019
Way Back To Indolence
" SPEECHLESS " * ! . . . . . .-OUTBACK
"The vast blankness of mind staggers." Profound! Always expected.-Lawless
What a beautiful piece. I was reminded the other day of Keats's ode on indolence do drawn go this.
This synchronicity gifted my reception to a poem that played like an orchestra through a wave of emotions far away from indolence.-sylviasearcher
"The vast blankness of mind staggers." Profound! Always expected.-Lawless
What a beautiful piece. I was reminded the other day of Keats's ode on indolence do drawn go this.
This synchronicity gifted my reception to a poem that played like an orchestra through a wave of emotions far away from indolence.-sylviasearcher
Friday, January 25, 2019
Help Me
When people drowns from love, a lifeline will keep them alive but still dying. In a few words you command a bounty of thoughts. Another great poem.-Kevin Patrick
Love hours with birds, great write.-Gajanan Mishra
Love hours with birds, great write.-Gajanan Mishra
Thursday, January 24, 2019
Wednesday, January 23, 2019
Euphoria
interesting write, i love butterflies.-psychofemale
THEN CHECK THIS OUT* - YOU TUBE IMG 0517 & THEN - \" THE POETRY of TREES " ! YOU JUST MIGHT ENJOY THESE* !-OUTBACK
THEN CHECK THIS OUT* - YOU TUBE IMG 0517 & THEN - \" THE POETRY of TREES " ! YOU JUST MIGHT ENJOY THESE* !-OUTBACK
Tuesday, January 22, 2019
Reconciled
I gotta tell ya dark poetry isn't my favorite but my goodness this really had my emotions stirring. A sad loyalty about it.-JacieStralkoDuca
My Commitment
Commitment given to December moon is excellently expressed in this beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul
The Syntax
Your words are simple, yet the imagery and meaning are so deep. Love this!!!-S.T.A.R.
Monday, January 21, 2019
After The Stampede
the mystical nature of your writing style always grabs my attention.-eleven_eleven
Sunday, January 20, 2019
Thursday, January 17, 2019
Attributed To Peace
An insightful and multi-layered poetical share. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, January 16, 2019
Giving A Miss
Indeed...
Why?-Laura
wow, the last line changed everything for me during this read....that is in a good way!-psychofemale
Why?-Laura
wow, the last line changed everything for me during this read....that is in a good way!-psychofemale
Tuesday, January 15, 2019
In Upheaval...
Intricately profound.-whisperingquill
Peace from this existence is what we seek. Tangled words and lies corrupt
humanity. The moon and stars know this and shine.-Lawless
Peace from this existence is what we seek. Tangled words and lies corrupt
humanity. The moon and stars know this and shine.-Lawless
Moonlight Through The Filters
Quite an insightful verse, can see through the filters...TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
GOOD POEM.
NEW EXPRESSIONS.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Loveely imagery.-Meena S, Madurai
GOOD POEM.
NEW EXPRESSIONS.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Loveely imagery.-Meena S, Madurai
Sunday, January 13, 2019
Path Taken
An amazing poem, Satish...............................-Bernard F. Asuncion
Repeating Again
“It again aches, my
roving heart, trying to
knit the harmony in black and white.”
Exceptional...as always!-Laura
roving heart, trying to
knit the harmony in black and white.”
Exceptional...as always!-Laura
Saturday, January 12, 2019
Unthinking
This really made me stop thinking, each stanza draws a different picture but At the end they become one beautiful painting!!-She of the Stars
Friday, January 11, 2019
Not Ready To Forget
You are so unlike any poet I've ever seen, and I love it. What a vivid rhythmic poem.-Aislinn Wilson
But Nothing
plenty of a times. love build up to this poem and the fall from pedestal. amazing lines in poem. very stong and direct and the light dimming was shinning to me as a sign of descriptive poetry setting the shade pun intended. crumbling under weight of enormity is pressure getting to much and like a cooker blowing. enjoyable read here. -duck
I found this so very interesting and loved your way with words.
A winter bath
tries to hold the halo-
for sometime, and then disappears
in obscurity.
Particularly loved these lines.
Also as a very tall person I have received many blasts in the face. Well done lovely writing-likesgreeneggsandham
I found this so very interesting and loved your way with words.
A winter bath
tries to hold the halo-
for sometime, and then disappears
in obscurity.
Particularly loved these lines.
Also as a very tall person I have received many blasts in the face. Well done lovely writing-likesgreeneggsandham
The Poem Before Meaning
A marvelous poem, Satish..............................-Bernard F. Asuncion
This is beautiful poetess! Thanks for sharing...-Petals Azureblue
This is beautiful poetess! Thanks for sharing...-Petals Azureblue
Wednesday, January 9, 2019
Tuesday, January 8, 2019
Gifted Hands
beautiful poem
//
Hand finds a friendship
Pen spreads ink in paper's depth
Poem enjoys all.-Mahtab Bangalee
A marvelous write, Satish.................................-Bernard F. Asuncion
//
Hand finds a friendship
Pen spreads ink in paper's depth
Poem enjoys all.-Mahtab Bangalee
A marvelous write, Satish.................................-Bernard F. Asuncion
Coming Near You
Excellent...as always!-Laura
The last stanza was my favorite. There was something visual and real there bravo.-psychofemale
Spinning and never landing. I believe that you have forgotten our fellow creatures. Nature? Our nature only? Some diversity is needed.-Lawless
Spinning and never landing. I believe that you have forgotten our fellow creatures. Nature? Our nature only? Some diversity is needed.-Lawless
Song At The End Of The Road
One of your best. Superb.. -Milly Hayward
Always fascinating in your write Satish. Loved the visuals.-Brenda
I really like the images, this is a really beautiful piece!!-She of the Stars
Always fascinating in your write Satish. Loved the visuals.-Brenda
I really like the images, this is a really beautiful piece!!-She of the Stars
Monday, January 7, 2019
Violent Shaking
“Outrage and despair”...
excellently expressed in your poem!-Laura
You are a very LUNAR Soul...you mention Moon in many of your writings...which you must have thousands for I see your posts every single day just about.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)
excellently expressed in your poem!-Laura
You are a very LUNAR Soul...you mention Moon in many of your writings...which you must have thousands for I see your posts every single day just about.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)
Living Dangerously
judges comment
What I love about this piece is it's complexity. You really need to sit and digest each stanza. There is so match imagery climbing out of this piece that makes it breath taking. It is also quite compact. Each stanza contains only words neccessary to continue the story. A challenging read that is worthy of my 7 points.-Darren
Your poetry is so intense and intriguing. This is no different. I am slowly learning your style, as it’s so distinctive and cryptic.-Daniel
What I love about this piece is it's complexity. You really need to sit and digest each stanza. There is so match imagery climbing out of this piece that makes it breath taking. It is also quite compact. Each stanza contains only words neccessary to continue the story. A challenging read that is worthy of my 7 points.-Darren
Your poetry is so intense and intriguing. This is no different. I am slowly learning your style, as it’s so distinctive and cryptic.-Daniel
Thursday, January 3, 2019
THINKING DEEPLY ABOUT SOMETHING
Hello Verma so nice to meet you. I like your poem. It is deep with a deep meaning. Have a nice evening my friend.-Darlene De Beaulieu
Take Back Your Swallows
The laced wounds
prepare to make water
thin for the sleet of
salt water in red eyes......good lines.-Prabir Gayen
prepare to make water
thin for the sleet of
salt water in red eyes......good lines.-Prabir Gayen
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