Thursday, February 28, 2019
What Was Invisible
A hard-hitting composition. TFS.- Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, February 27, 2019
Your Journey
To tell todays' to magicians
no rabbit in the hat
the purple silk hanky disappeared
Never swan necked entwined
the mute give a sign
seeking placentas don't play
around in my temple
roses shame to gold
snow and green deep in androgyny
perfect match and legal, at home here
I find Taj Mahal to build
conformist holds straight bat
for his team, no off-side
Noises perform tricks
like illusionists making truths
of no intentions
now snows cook lie of truths
the cuckoo was never cuckoo
In homage to Satish Verma.....Distinguished Poet.-Yenson
no rabbit in the hat
the purple silk hanky disappeared
Never swan necked entwined
the mute give a sign
seeking placentas don't play
around in my temple
roses shame to gold
snow and green deep in androgyny
perfect match and legal, at home here
I find Taj Mahal to build
conformist holds straight bat
for his team, no off-side
Noises perform tricks
like illusionists making truths
of no intentions
now snows cook lie of truths
the cuckoo was never cuckoo
In homage to Satish Verma.....Distinguished Poet.-Yenson
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
It Kills It Kills
Very good write and well written. I liked it very much.-Mike Mezz
So Much To Think
Thanks for the profound verse...there is indeed so much to change, if ever backtracked. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Sunday, February 24, 2019
Shedding Skin
A relationship that soured and went to long, once freed from its cycle both parties benefited. Then the rebirth of perception realizing the nature of the beast that has crippled humanity for so long. Very nice poem that dives deep with such few words +10-Thomas Kane
Kaleidoscopic
I always find your poetry fascinating. It is like being in a kaleidoscope filled with words instead of colours spiralling around yet revealing slivers of ever changing imagery. Best wishes.-Milly Hayward
Grieving
A thoughtful contemporary theme displaying dissatisfaction of the elements around. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Saturday, February 23, 2019
Friday, February 22, 2019
On Reverse Trail
Time makes you strong.
One day you score a
unique myth. - These last lines convey a meaning much deeper than their literal meanings. It is perhaps not a myth but a uniqueness that is acquired. Thanks Satish sir for the profound lines.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
One day you score a
unique myth. - These last lines convey a meaning much deeper than their literal meanings. It is perhaps not a myth but a uniqueness that is acquired. Thanks Satish sir for the profound lines.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Thursday, February 21, 2019
A Smile Falters
I never quite get the true meaning of your poetry satish but it doesn't make it any less beautiful...-Em (marmite)
Wednesday, February 20, 2019
Serenity
Listening To Yourself
Sometimes the macabre imagery of sin compels us to watch its defeat. Another excellent piece.-Milly Hayward
From The Womb
Your poetry is always unique and full of beautiful metaphors. This is no exception.-Milly Hayward
Monday, February 18, 2019
Sunday, February 17, 2019
Eclipsing
" The fair queen has
a scar on forehead. Third
eye was waning."
Fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
a scar on forehead. Third
eye was waning."
Fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Thinking Deeply About Something
I think your mind is the most malleable I have seen, at least in this site; for example this:
"The fixing magnifies your scars. Do not go deep
in the veins. "
Wow only wow.-BOB GALLO
Saturday, February 16, 2019
Cause And Reality
Satishverma,
An Excellent write and a great question you have posed...
“Can we undo the damage
and become friends?
Unuttered, but still vocal.”-Laura
An Excellent write and a great question you have posed...
“Can we undo the damage
and become friends?
Unuttered, but still vocal.”-Laura
Not Like Me
Differences between a couple beautifully expressed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, February 15, 2019
Thursday, February 14, 2019
Tuesday, February 12, 2019
Such Was Our Planet
This is more than a climate change warning! I hope that Noah is able to accommodate all of us in his ark this time around!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
In Emptiness
Thanks for the profound share.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, February 11, 2019
In Quiteude
Sometimes, it's inevitable, I think to stop ourselves from walking towards them even though it hurts, but then it hurts either way when we're pulled away by force...
I like the tone of this write, and it's very close to how I myself write at times, I'd say.
Acceptance or rather defeat, despite wanting something else, is what I got from this poem.
Interesting read. -Dr. YumnaKay
I like the tone of this write, and it's very close to how I myself write at times, I'd say.
Acceptance or rather defeat, despite wanting something else, is what I got from this poem.
Interesting read. -Dr. YumnaKay
So Much To Think
Every December snow
becomes a shroud.
Intensity in the emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
becomes a shroud.
Intensity in the emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Friday, February 8, 2019
We Will Not Part
VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada
What an aura of romance the poem creates! So different from your usual verses Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Beautiful composition and well depicted emotions.-Padmavathi, Khammam
It's too beautiful, sir. Enjoyed reading it.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi
Very beautiful poem Satish Verma!
The brevity and conciseness of the words chosen is wonderful. Beautifully written!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
What an aura of romance the poem creates! So different from your usual verses Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Beautiful composition and well depicted emotions.-Padmavathi, Khammam
It's too beautiful, sir. Enjoyed reading it.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi
Very beautiful poem Satish Verma!
The brevity and conciseness of the words chosen is wonderful. Beautifully written!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Thursday, February 7, 2019
Some Thinking Space
a great read. thanks for sharing.-psychofemale
Mutilation is at our core. Thinking contradicts innate essence.-Lawless
Wednesday, February 6, 2019
Not Your Doings
Tuesday, February 5, 2019
Soothsayer Has Nothing To Say
What Times
I really liked this poem, very unique. With little words evoking such imagery. Great work.-DarkNDangerous
Trapped Wishes
Very touching Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Very heart touching- simple, short yet meaningful poem!
How beautifully the poet compares the aging concerns with a quake- struck building!
“As flames are dying’ shows a little pessimism but the poet is strong enough and hopeful of starting afresh as he wishes to ‘script a new song’.
The last line of the poem …”In twilight of age” says it all.
Beautiful poem Satish Verma!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Very heart touching- simple, short yet meaningful poem!
How beautifully the poet compares the aging concerns with a quake- struck building!
“As flames are dying’ shows a little pessimism but the poet is strong enough and hopeful of starting afresh as he wishes to ‘script a new song’.
The last line of the poem …”In twilight of age” says it all.
Beautiful poem Satish Verma!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Monday, February 4, 2019
All You Know
Awesome inference, The fever was mystical.
In delirium you will recite
a poem It is a tragedy that it is factual. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
In delirium you will recite
a poem It is a tragedy that it is factual. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Sunday, February 3, 2019
Cosmetic Effect
Apt images in play. The subtlety between virtual and actual is expressed well. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Saturday, February 2, 2019
Debating Point
Some of the choices of phrase in this are wonderful. I particularly liked 'the game was fair but the players were dishonest'! I like the short stanzas as well, as it allows you to compact your ideas.-PatrickPink
Friday, February 1, 2019
Soft Music
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