If I had a vote I would nominate this I love the way u pieced this together.....-Scott Cole
Friday, May 31, 2019
Thursday, May 30, 2019
In Autumn
The contrast of a pleasant autumn with that of the venmous snake bite is portrayed well. Thanks for a profound verse.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, May 29, 2019
Monday, May 27, 2019
Not A Banal Taste
Beautiful poem. Loved it. I wish I could master the language the way you do. Great work.-daydreaming
Becoming A Legend
Multilayered and profound verse. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Sunday, May 26, 2019
Saturday, May 25, 2019
Twisting The Watercolors
I have not seen a lily-trotter, or become a monkshood, but there are possibilities.
A wonderful poem of intricate imagination. Thank you.-Johnny Lawless
A wonderful poem of intricate imagination. Thank you.-Johnny Lawless
Thursday, May 23, 2019
Venomously
A fine poem, sir Satish.............-Bernard F. Asuncion
Pomegranates Venomously explodes our inside pulse!-Mahtab Bangalee
Pomegranates Venomously explodes our inside pulse!-Mahtab Bangalee
A Blackbird Will Not Sing
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Antithesis
"...I hear the footfalls/of your absence..." and "...unseen gods..." sang to me. Invisibilities -allets
Tuesday, May 21, 2019
Theories
A well written poem, sir Satish...................10+++++++++++-Bernard F. Asuncion
Monday, May 20, 2019
Deadbeat
Friday, May 17, 2019
No Love Song
A little gem. I loved in particular the final stanza being the opposite of Christ's gathering when bread fed the multitudes. In this reality bread wont feed the thousands who come clamouring for a bite.-Milly Hayward
Thursday, May 16, 2019
Ghostwriting
Let the Sun wait for eternity...
Still reading satishverma daily. These works always seem to be speaking in some mysterious way to me.-Morningglory
Still reading satishverma daily. These works always seem to be speaking in some mysterious way to me.-Morningglory
I Will Know
Nice. May this suffering in our world be joined with His -the God whom lowered Himself to suffer death on a cross for us.-Gary Edward Geraci
We do need dark nights to appreciate the glimmer and shadows of the moon.
Poignant as always. Thank you.-Johnny Lawless
We do need dark nights to appreciate the glimmer and shadows of the moon.
Poignant as always. Thank you.-Johnny Lawless
Tuesday, May 14, 2019
Touching Infinite
I pack your smile
in womb of dry roses.
Phenomenal imagery conveying a maze of expressionistic ambiguity. Infinity welcomes warm embraces. I can wrap myself in your poems and the always change.-Kevin Patrick
in womb of dry roses.
Phenomenal imagery conveying a maze of expressionistic ambiguity. Infinity welcomes warm embraces. I can wrap myself in your poems and the always change.-Kevin Patrick
Monday, May 13, 2019
Message regarding The Words Of Blank Paper
Dear Satish,
I notice that many of your poems take the form of five stanzas of three lines each. Is this a specific type of poem? What is this form called?David
I notice that many of your poems take the form of five stanzas of three lines each. Is this a specific type of poem? What is this form called?David
Moon Child
Ahhhh..yes good stuff zeemd anbedawdeenda yo ka rupsh-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)
Saturday, May 11, 2019
Thursday, May 9, 2019
I Will Know
A great poem, of which I particularly was drawn by "Prophet of grief".-lyrycsyntyme
Eclipsing
There couldn't be a better explanation than this about eclipses in general or metaphorically 'our fate' or 'man's rational thinking'. Thanks for the insightful poem. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, May 8, 2019
All Is Forgiven
Forgiving is a good quality. We should forgive all. This poem is excellently penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Tuesday, May 7, 2019
Extraversion
Delicate Maturity
Thanks sir for an interesting abstract verse.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, May 6, 2019
Sunday, May 5, 2019
Saturday, May 4, 2019
Opening The Fist
I Enjoy Reading Satish
You make my day! Thank you for sharing so much beauty and letting it loose in the universe! - allets
You make my day! Thank you for sharing so much beauty and letting it loose in the universe! - allets
Pain And Endurance
A fascinating poem, sir Satish........Bernard F. Asuncion
a celebration
for the pain
comes from the souvenir leaf with the snowflakes tear through scarlet flames!-Mahtab Bangalee
Who will dance
to celebrate the history
of broken hearts? ............. // What a beautiful expression. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
for the pain
comes from the souvenir leaf with the snowflakes tear through scarlet flames!-Mahtab Bangalee
Who will dance
to celebrate the history
of broken hearts? ............. // What a beautiful expression. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga
Friday, May 3, 2019
Thursday, May 2, 2019
Sailing On Peaks
I love the metaphors here in particular the first and second stanza. "Unwedded to moon,
I become sick of hypocrisy of hands" is such a vivid statement. Body language reveals so much that is hidden.-Milly Hayward
I become sick of hypocrisy of hands" is such a vivid statement. Body language reveals so much that is hidden.-Milly Hayward
Wednesday, May 1, 2019
Failed
Bringing moon with similarity of moon is definitely very amazing. A nice imagery is drawn today. An excellent poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul
An excellent poem, sir Satish......-Bernard F. Asuncion
An excellent poem, sir Satish......-Bernard F. Asuncion
Chameleonic
We all possess some “chameleonic” qualities! Are we cognizant of that fact? Does it matter?
Excellent write!-Laura
Excellent write!-Laura
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