Beginning Of Voyage

excellent piece of poetry. please check out my work.-audax

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Ignorance

The delicate nature of Jasmine is lost long ago. Thanks for a sensitive recital. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Don't Forget

Can we laugh
together, before we peel
the oranges to make
our eyes blink? ..// really we can laugh together by reading this stanza.-Mahtab Bangalee

A well conveyed notable poem, sir Satish.....10+++++++++++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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It Happened Once

This is truly an amazing piece!-audax

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Allusive Pain

Three powerful references to pain! Great work!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Una Corda

Mm-hmm!!!
This poem is a very satisfying intellectual snack! Elegant flow, and studied rhythm. The eye and the ear go exactly where the author wishes. Love that final stanza, and the rest before it. :):)-adichie

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Where To Go

"Come to me with
"Come to me with unarmed
lies, to fight with my truths."
This is usa's presidency presently. -allets

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Opening A Wound

Yeah, correct! A poet can turn the minds of people easily with his poweful words. Well depicted.
Padmavathi, Khammam

A poet has the capacity to spread his ink far and wide. An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Voices In Dark

Six poems I commented and the sixth I liked best. Is it strange I feel at home in the void, as if noble tengu can hear my voice and council me? What serenity I take from reality I drown inside my workshop within my dream. My life to sustain the dream. Mighty moon, hide this evil from me. Let my heart be shallow enough to wander forever in hapless bliss. To these promises, I add your name to my stump, where I wish to speak to you, one day, my friend. Thank you for writing something so powerful that it triggered all of these musings. -Bryad Polis Valentino

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Strange Rivalry

Lovely verse Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines:
Why do we suffer
in the hands of the unknown,
when we know the ending? -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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The Dead Don't Care

Hate does breed hate, and the dead really don’t care.-Johnny Lawless

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Again A Sheep Walk

I have been rereading this poem and every-time I read it, I come up with a new reading. Your terms are not complex but you have used them in a functional deep structure. Some of your lines are really sad, I shall say statements, I guess. I love it.- Rania Moallem

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Unmasking

Satish Verma Ji,

If there are 'no beginning and no end', then I guess there is no game left for us to play on.-  
ngawang norbu, New Delhi

The last para says it all. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Lovely poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Feeling The Terror

Awesome metaphors!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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A Window Burns

Love the tenor of this one and the flow in a nice smooth freeverse. Ttust/faith is so important and when broken is difficult to repair.-John Alexander McFadyen 

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Between You And Me

omg SO GORGEUS-Crandall Branch

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Small Things

Scintillating first stanza!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Take The Hemlock

I like the three stanza format of your poems.-Poetry Addict

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Joining The Hyphens

"this was the moment of liberation" is a line I'll remember well-Poetry Addict

Spectacular!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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I Am Not One

The last para is hard hitting in context. A thought provoking read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Yes, well depicted all the worldly facts!-Padmavathi, Khammam

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Outstanding! The reality is shared clearly that you can't change the world, the world will change you. Tfs sir.-Prashant Kumar Choudhary, New Delhi

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Negation Of What

Another enjoyable read. I liked in particular the second and last stanzas my favourite being the last. "Do not go on chasing the grazed genre. The style will bring back the questions which had no answers. Inspired... -Milly Hayward

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Shooting Stars

How lovely, a joy to read...-Mariannajo

You have a gentle yet strong and tactful way in expressing yourself. Well done poet!-JacieStralkoDuca

Very well done. A joy to read. Bookmarking! Hugs-MARYT.LIVE

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Karmic Influence

This is quite a dark piece. The title Khamic influence suggests that it is Kharma that the person is in the state that they are in. The painful daily existence of someone barely clinging onto life, only able to breath using a ventilator. Asking the question "Are you sure it was easier to live" adds so much hurt to the imagery. Its almost like saying was it worth it. The letters written daily but never sent again add to a rift that is still sore. I wonder what they will find in those letters and will it change their perspective? For if someone thought enough about them to have written daily but not had the confidence to send the letters there must be a lot of emotion and regret in them. An interesting and thought provoking piece. -Milly Hayward

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Honor On Sale

Simple and impactful verse. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Lovely verse Satish j! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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A Nondescript Night

Your words have a certain mysteriousness about them. Enthralling and curious, seeming to evolve.-Debera

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In Misty Day

"tears of the sky"
beautiful and solemn images here that exist on the edges of emotions. - allets

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Ancient Landscape

Very well written Satish ji! loved the verse!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

The landscape is a bit difficult to place, yet interesting to read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Toxicity

Your poems always take me into visually complex and compelling directions.-Milly Hayward

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Passage Of Pain

An excellent portrayal of pain. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Sir,
What if the pain is the gain, and the pain is a hidden force of happiness?-ngawang norbu, New Delhi

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Joining The Hyphens

Spectacular!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Snowblinks

A Very Cool
write, seasonal - allets

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Sell The Mocking Birds

Enjoyed the sattire rightly placed in time. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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