Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Tuesday, July 30, 2019
Asking For Validation
Your works are a consistently delightful challenge to read and reread.-Miracle Beyond Me
Superlative!
Needs no validation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Superlative!
Needs no validation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Monday, July 29, 2019
Sunday, July 28, 2019
Your Generosity
Great. Easy poem to revisit to distill all the imagery and meaning.-Miracle Beyond Me
Three Vistas
Blue Sunstroke
I can`t judge this poem as good or bad because I got lost in it. I got the feeling that the language says much that stops on the side of the poet for this poet is the creator of the piece.
There is so much packed in each stanza that I do not have the mind to decipher.-Luis Estable
" In sleep walking
you discover the blind
walls.All blood stained skulls
start rolling" .
What a conceptualization under great duress? 10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
There is so much packed in each stanza that I do not have the mind to decipher.-Luis Estable
" In sleep walking
you discover the blind
walls.All blood stained skulls
start rolling" .
What a conceptualization under great duress? 10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Nostalgic Return
Thanks for the interesting and insightful verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Saturday, July 27, 2019
Reading Arthur Rimbaud
You are such a good writer
These are somewhat densely written in a way that I can't quite put my finger on the idea being portrayed, but I sense the spirit of it. It reminds me of a breakup, and a revelation of a deep love all at once.-lizardking
These are somewhat densely written in a way that I can't quite put my finger on the idea being portrayed, but I sense the spirit of it. It reminds me of a breakup, and a revelation of a deep love all at once.-lizardking
Thursday, July 25, 2019
The Cobra Kiss
Changing Name
A beautiful poem is astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Wednesday, July 24, 2019
Want To Think?
Lovely!-Padmavathi, Khammam
Beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
A fine poem enlisting the possibilities... TFS -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
A fine poem enlisting the possibilities... TFS -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, July 22, 2019
Saturday, July 20, 2019
End Of Beginning
Really interesting to see the sweetness of poetry still blooming amidst the carnage!
Great write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Great write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Friday, July 19, 2019
Maturity
Crisp nouns would
take revenge on the
unuttered words. The sacred
ism was no more valid. - absolutely true. TFS. - Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
take revenge on the
unuttered words. The sacred
ism was no more valid. - absolutely true. TFS. - Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Thursday, July 18, 2019
Drifting
The moon does not care for the painters eye, it will flex with or without poets or killers.
Life drifts on, best to float with it.
Another thoughtful and meditative work.-Kevin Patrick
Life drifts on, best to float with it.
Another thoughtful and meditative work.-Kevin Patrick
Wednesday, July 17, 2019
Sunday, July 14, 2019
Barriers
a poem filled with feeling and unexpected at that...
they do indeed and oft they scream for more.......... enjoyed beyond the last full stop...-Neville
they do indeed and oft they scream for more.......... enjoyed beyond the last full stop...-Neville
Saturday, July 13, 2019
Friday, July 12, 2019
Times Are Changing
I totally agree with Bob, I wanted to dig deeper into the poem but I couldn't grasp everything well. Some questions marks seemed placed by you, others out of place. Some gave the impression that you were making rhetorical questions, trying to to emphasize a statement.
It sounds clearer if you also let go of the comma after dead. The flow in my opinion sounds much better. I see you have beautiful statements and some great descriptions, I'm just not being able to make connections between your verses. It might be my fault, and it might be that the poem needs some reorganization of ideas. I will come back and read it again!-Rania Moallem
These question marks look out of place. Must be the glitch. Whenever someone pastes the poems ( in opposed to typing it perhaps) most likely, in P&Q, the pop-ups just appear all over the places.
Here makes it annoying to imagine, what if the writer him/herself put them there, and why??-BOB GALLO
It sounds clearer if you also let go of the comma after dead. The flow in my opinion sounds much better. I see you have beautiful statements and some great descriptions, I'm just not being able to make connections between your verses. It might be my fault, and it might be that the poem needs some reorganization of ideas. I will come back and read it again!-Rania Moallem
These question marks look out of place. Must be the glitch. Whenever someone pastes the poems ( in opposed to typing it perhaps) most likely, in P&Q, the pop-ups just appear all over the places.
Here makes it annoying to imagine, what if the writer him/herself put them there, and why??-BOB GALLO
In Sadness
a beautiful write!
My poems remain explorations of the subconscious erotic
If I where a film maker or a novelist you would see me telling a story; not judge me for it although I admit to my paraphilias
Some of these poems are lunar anamorphic streams of cons.-zebrablack
My poems remain explorations of the subconscious erotic
If I where a film maker or a novelist you would see me telling a story; not judge me for it although I admit to my paraphilias
Some of these poems are lunar anamorphic streams of cons.-zebrablack
When The Rains Stop
Beautiful imagery portraying the havoc or ruins after a devastation. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Thursday, July 11, 2019
When A God Bleeds
Not sure why I haven't seen a comment so far. These works are great!-Unobtrusive Sun
Wednesday, July 10, 2019
Mementos
" behind the veil
the moon will heal the
acid burns"
A fantastic conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
the moon will heal the
acid burns"
A fantastic conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Tuesday, July 9, 2019
No Dark Crime
" Ah, the scars don't
go time don't heal
the wounds of earth" .
Agonizing remembrances through an introspective soliloquy. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
go time don't heal
the wounds of earth" .
Agonizing remembrances through an introspective soliloquy. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Questions Won't End
Beautiful scenery created Satish.-Godawan
Poetically immaculate imagery—incredible, Satsih.-S Olson
Beautiful!-Jen
Splendorous!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Poetically immaculate imagery—incredible, Satsih.-S Olson
Beautiful!-Jen
Splendorous!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Seeking Carefully
I have to be honest, Satish (and i may have said this before) I do not always even pretend to quite understand your poetry but it is always a pleasure to read and hypnotic.
All the best.-Ben Pickard
All the best.-Ben Pickard
Monday, July 8, 2019
Gleanings
There is nothing prosaic about this piece. I quite enjoyed it. The staccato lines were little magic carpets, with the spaces in between prompting our undivided attention. Nice to meet you, Satish!-Kelly Scheppers
In Dustbath
Simply beautiful ! Loved the verse Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Sunday, July 7, 2019
Unhurting
A beautiful, well written poem...yet sad.-MissSharon
Beautifully written and sad poem. Hugs, -MARYT.LIVE
a lovely poem.- just_little_me
Beautifully written and sad poem. Hugs, -MARYT.LIVE
a lovely poem.- just_little_me
Saturday, July 6, 2019
Glinting
Lovely words Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Charming verse! TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Charming verse! TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, July 5, 2019
Questioning You
The first stanza encloses what seems to me a profound poetic thought that I am not competent enough to get in full.
The poem is full of such lines that one has to be very careful what kind of reading one gives to this poem.
Thanks for you good effort! -Luis Estable
The poem is full of such lines that one has to be very careful what kind of reading one gives to this poem.
Thanks for you good effort! -Luis Estable
Being In God
A clear sense of non-conformism in this subtle write; of both god and science! Great work!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Thursday, July 4, 2019
Little Gods
Wednesday, July 3, 2019
Scissor Hold
I had written a proper review of this write, and the sands of the internet just swept it
The rigged notes on paper speak of mendacity.
Between the primates, man
was becoming the beast.
The stone, sculptor and ghost are one.
But essentially what I wanted to say was thank you for the reminder of who we are. It seems ridiculous to think that we consider ourselves to be the most advanced of all the species on the planet.
Keep those reminders coming, Satish. We may not think we need them, but we do.-adichie
The rigged notes on paper speak of mendacity.
Between the primates, man
was becoming the beast.
The stone, sculptor and ghost are one.
But essentially what I wanted to say was thank you for the reminder of who we are. It seems ridiculous to think that we consider ourselves to be the most advanced of all the species on the planet.
Keep those reminders coming, Satish. We may not think we need them, but we do.-adichie
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