I have been away for a year but I clearly remember your poems back then. I am surprised to read this one where all of the stanzas coherently make up the poem and the title made sense in relation to the content. Not to dismerit the older poems because I have seen your craft from them but to appreciate this approach you now take. I think capturing that grasshopper moment was great and the poem is beautiful.-mossgirl19
Friday, August 30, 2019
Sacred Steps
Beautiful verse Satish ji! Loved reading it! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Thursday, August 29, 2019
Seeking Peace
Make my life ephemeral is amazing to counter pain through organic love. A brilliant poem is excellently penned....-Kumarmani Mahakul
Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Pangs Of Truth
This poem has an interesting melancholy tone. I like your word choice here: Meet me in some moonless night./I will show you a slice/of my bruises", as if the absence of the moon became the "slice" of light that was pulled down from the sky to reveal the wounds shown. Curious to hear about what inspired this!-Kay
Last Dawn
People seem so busy with the hustle and they miss out. Tardy spirits? More like laid back spirits to take in everything. Looking at everyone’s hustle and no time to relax and see what there is to see? That’s what I got from your work. Awesome-Teresa
Embracing Dark
In the morning
I will unlock the moon
to go back its home......wonderful ideology. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul
" The moon flowers
are in full bloom, opening
at dusk till noon"
Wonderful conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
I will unlock the moon
to go back its home......wonderful ideology. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul
" The moon flowers
are in full bloom, opening
at dusk till noon"
Wonderful conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Whom To Sing
Very beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, August 27, 2019
Whispering Clouds
A mystical write about whispering clouds and unblinking as we look at the clock! Nice imagery.-Aqua Flower
We have heard the whisper of cloud after reading your excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing thiis.-Kumarmani Mahakul
We have heard the whisper of cloud after reading your excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing thiis.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Forked Tongues
Monday, August 26, 2019
Into Dark Abyss
Strange sense of detachment from emotion except for what is created by huge natural bodies like the moon.-Julia Luber
Fading jasmines spark less fragrance but moon motivates to regain strength. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Fading jasmines spark less fragrance but moon motivates to regain strength. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul
You Walk Like Moon
Love the language used.-Aurora RW
A subtle parallel- linish undercurrent in the entire write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
A subtle parallel- linish undercurrent in the entire write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Sunday, August 25, 2019
Art In Pain
Washing body in tears of devotion and emotion is definitely very nice. This poem is interestingly.-Kumarmani Mahakul
The Hidden Sky
I love this and find it refreshingly original.-Willys Watson
oooh love the metaphors very clever. well done love it-Julie McCarthy (juliesp
oooh love the metaphors very clever. well done love it-Julie McCarthy (juliesp
Thursday, August 22, 2019
Brief Answer
Great. Is this a contemporary take on some of the wonderful Saivite poems I used to read? If so, it's wonderful as well.-Miracle Beyond Me
Searching My Voice
To float in scented sky we should float in dreams. This poem is very excellently penned. An excellent sharing is done really. -Kumarmani Mahakul
Naked Truths
The fusion cracks. An amazing poem is wisely penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
A profound poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion
A profound poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion
India Ink
A Paroxysm
Intricate expressions of loss and despair. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Such a beautiful poem Satish ji! Heart touching!-Giti Tyagi, Patial
Such a beautiful poem Satish ji! Heart touching!-Giti Tyagi, Patial
Sunday, August 18, 2019
Strange Rivalry
Such aromatic lines. Enjoyed the spice in every line. -Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar
Saturday, August 17, 2019
Inheritance
The ghost limb will slash the wrist to swallow pride. Humorously you have spoken wonderful thing. An amazing and brilliant poem is penned...-Kumarmani Mahakul
I did not get much out of this poem. Verse two was a bit problematic for me. This is not your fault. I might not be giving this its proper reading. -Luis Estable
I did not get much out of this poem. Verse two was a bit problematic for me. This is not your fault. I might not be giving this its proper reading. -Luis Estable
Friday, August 16, 2019
Prerogative
Absence of a person creates an aura of sorrow that hurts but when sun appears this creates an aura of love and beauty. This poem is very nice and excellent...-Kumarmani Mahakul
Covered With Quills
Your closing stanza holds me captive...(Apparitions gather―to bid goodbye to the moon. A flame of the forest was due any moment.) Excellent!-MissSharon
Thursday, August 15, 2019
Arts In Telling
My muse became addicted to really bad substances and I have not seen him for years. The world is preying on him.-allets
Summer Solstice
All desire that a butterfly should come and sit near them. You have very nicely penned this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Dark Circles
Repeating some hymns everyday is very nice. This act purifies life with beauty of personality. Thank you very much for sharing this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Living With Grace
A true picture mirrored. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, August 12, 2019
Song Of The Sky
With the wonderful imagery moon is described as strawberry. This poem is definitely an excellent poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Saturday, August 10, 2019
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Walking Away
Multilayered verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, August 6, 2019
Learning You
An imaginative poem that puts all words in the garden flowering.-Jane Campion
The Ire
Great poem. I think I'm going to have to read it a few more times to attempt to get it's meanings, though. Thanx; have a great day :) reality-reality1
Monday, August 5, 2019
Learning You
An imaginative poem that puts all words in the garden flowering.-Jane Campion
Sunday, August 4, 2019
Heart Searching
Absolutely, we need some soul-searching. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, August 2, 2019
Bewitching
A bit pessimistic (I'm an optimist) but thought inspiring. The poem leads one to re-think on actions one perform in ones life.-Guruji
I Must Tell You
Help Me
Interesting lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
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