Dark and complex as your Quill tends to profusely bleed but the is born of the innerwirkings of a most creative Minds eye... Most mercurial you still be after all these years behind us... Behind old thoughts... Before the best to come... judgement hath no poetic justice, Satish...thus, we see our seeds with dragons teeth and God's good promise of all that's ripe in His Ever Garden, where I must believe that poetry doth exist.-Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
Monday, December 30, 2019
Saturday, December 28, 2019
God It Kills
A poem that needs introspection! My favorite lines: Of conscience/The veins of leaves will knit/the face of a brute.......Appreciated....-Dr Dillip K Swain
Friday, December 27, 2019
What Was It ?
Very much like the poetry of Shamloo in Iran Nice imagery with a live heart.-Sajjad Gheytasi
Thernodial
Wow! Profound lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE
Thursday, December 26, 2019
Wednesday, December 25, 2019
Once Again
A dark reality that happens more often than people realise. I love your rich metaphors in this especially the last stanza.-Milly Hayward
Monday, December 23, 2019
Pain Of Surrender
Imaginatively expressed. I like the images.-Poetic Poet
Beautifully crafted. Nice choice of words...-Kingsley Egbukole
Beautifully crafted. Nice choice of words...-Kingsley Egbukole
Sunday, December 22, 2019
Troubled Waters
I can read between the lines. Thanks for the hard-hitting verse.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE
Saturday, December 21, 2019
Unbecoming Of The Poem
This is my favourite of your recent poems. The start with its contrast of a fat moon and bland earth caught my attention straight away because the earth in reality is quite beautiful from space. It had to be a metaphor for how someone felt about themselves. The third stanza for me drew everything together neatly the conflict revealed and further laid out in the last two. An enjoyable read.-Milly Hayward
Friday, December 20, 2019
Where A God Sleeps
no one really wins power games...treaties are better...i am especially blown away by..."under a cataract of twilight"----
i like how you brought in logic and pathos....there is an ethos in this...in the original script...but when we deviate from that...some of the impromptu lines and actions will lead us where we did not want to go...but where we might find...that the beat of a different drum is a really good one for us.
love this piece...
so smart and cleverly "scripted"-jacob erin-cilberto
i like how you brought in logic and pathos....there is an ethos in this...in the original script...but when we deviate from that...some of the impromptu lines and actions will lead us where we did not want to go...but where we might find...that the beat of a different drum is a really good one for us.
love this piece...
so smart and cleverly "scripted"-jacob erin-cilberto
Map Reading
Very beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala
Thursday, December 19, 2019
Wednesday, December 18, 2019
Contemplating
A satirical take on the prevailing conditions... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Song Of Promotion
A wonderful wonderful work, as always.
Dear Satish you must watch out for these pop out question marks, they distracting glitches. Some people can not pass through them.-ddavidd
Dear Satish you must watch out for these pop out question marks, they distracting glitches. Some people can not pass through them.-ddavidd
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
You Survive The Day
An insightful rendition of survival. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Monday, December 16, 2019
Justice
I loved imagery. Nice.-Padma, Khammam
Sunday, December 15, 2019
How Precious You Were
satish,
made me stop in my tracks & read again to make sure I got it all.
A very powerful poem.
Thanks for sharing,-Unsub
made me stop in my tracks & read again to make sure I got it all.
A very powerful poem.
Thanks for sharing,-Unsub
Saturday, December 14, 2019
Rock Truth
An interesting portrayal of truth. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, December 13, 2019
Thursday, December 12, 2019
Without Fear
Calming and thought provoking.-Lyn Paul
In tongue like nails! ! ! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis
Congrats on p.o.t.d. excellent write. Thumbs way up!-Butch Decatoria
Laden and layered poem with excellent metaphors, very poetically said, Satish Sir! Respectfully yours, Sylvia FC. CONGRATULATIONS for the choice of Poem Hunter as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! A 10 and myriad of 10's more. God's Blessings! Straight to MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing, Sir!-Sylvia Frances Chan
interesting and sententious POD, congratulations Satish Verma-Alouwou Mandjah
Ancient Nemesis accept only the fallen grace (the avoided truth!)-Mahtab Bangalee
Concise expression. Excellent-Sanjibsaha Aniketa
Lovelyand makes interesting reading.-Kingsley Egbukole
Congratulations.
Your poem reflects a poetic spirit.-Poetic Poet
A concise and poignant verse, well conceived and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful work of art.
Thanks for sharing, Satish.-Chinedu Dike
Inseparable
the words will be buried
in tongue like nails. great expressions.. Congrata! ! ! ! dear Varma-Drtony Brahmin
Like you want to
meet the Demigoddess, before
you go in bloom..................................excellent metaphor...............full score-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee
In tongue like nails! ! ! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis
Congrats on p.o.t.d. excellent write. Thumbs way up!-Butch Decatoria
Laden and layered poem with excellent metaphors, very poetically said, Satish Sir! Respectfully yours, Sylvia FC. CONGRATULATIONS for the choice of Poem Hunter as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! A 10 and myriad of 10's more. God's Blessings! Straight to MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing, Sir!-Sylvia Frances Chan
interesting and sententious POD, congratulations Satish Verma-Alouwou Mandjah
Ancient Nemesis accept only the fallen grace (the avoided truth!)-Mahtab Bangalee
Concise expression. Excellent-Sanjibsaha Aniketa
Lovelyand makes interesting reading.-Kingsley Egbukole
Congratulations.
Your poem reflects a poetic spirit.-Poetic Poet
A concise and poignant verse, well conceived and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful work of art.
Thanks for sharing, Satish.-Chinedu Dike
Inseparable
the words will be buried
in tongue like nails. great expressions.. Congrata! ! ! ! dear Varma-Drtony Brahmin
Like you want to
meet the Demigoddess, before
you go in bloom..................................excellent metaphor...............full score-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee
Wednesday, December 11, 2019
Poem Sublime
Thanks for the profound verse sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, December 10, 2019
Monday, December 9, 2019
Playing With Marbles
A thought provoking verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE
Saturday, December 7, 2019
Inquisition
Thanks sir for a poignant verse.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE
Animating Fear
Appears like the future has been captured in this verse and it serves also as a warning to humanity to mend ways...a relevant theme. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE
Friday, December 6, 2019
No Complaints
Sunset was visible with amazing way. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Interesting reading. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing...-Kingsley Egbukole
Interesting reading. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing...-Kingsley Egbukole
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