wonderful! I wish I wasn't as ignorant of some of the context you were alluding to, I imagine the read would have been that much more profound.-L. B. Mek
Ever read something so deep and mind-blowing that you lay your head back afterwards and try to recover from the overwhelming emotions? I just did, reading this one.-nourayasmine
Nice. Happy Independence Day sir.-Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal
Loved he beautiful lines Satish Ji... This was invisible love, before sunrise. Dream gazer goes green in dark.- Happy Independence Day! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal
What a complicated poem, I'm not even sure what you intended to be about but it resounds with meaning in me. Love lost and seeking meaning in apocryphal scrawlings on the wall. You did not set a scene as much as you set a feeling.-T.S. Ulmus