Saturday, October 31, 2020
Pragmatically
What words cannot say poetry can intimate. So thus the intimacy of this poem of yours.-Delmar Cooper
a strange phenomenon
So beautiful Satish and a joy to read. (Do you think you could leave a response on another poets work please?)-Pauline Miller
Tuesday, October 27, 2020
Catching Myself
'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?
Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.
In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.'
Brilliant!-L. B. Mek
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?
Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.
In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.'
Brilliant!-L. B. Mek
Saturday, October 24, 2020
I Keep Mum
That is a great honour.-Peter Kiggin
Confusion
Loved the poem much Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Friday, October 23, 2020
silvereyes
An interesting write Satish. I particularly like "When thoughts become a song, peace comes back and you can see the distance between the stars." Many thank for sharing. Regards Pauline., UK
An Electric Affair
brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write's hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
'Guru' - I humbly thank you-L. B. Mek
Wonderfully written Satish. I like how you say, "to blunt my hyperaesthesia which wants to drink moonlight. Clumsy with my pen, I write and rewrite a message which will not reach you." Regards- Pauline Miller, UK
I will admit, I read your write's hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
'Guru' - I humbly thank you-L. B. Mek
Thursday, October 22, 2020
I Love You
Loved your poem Satish ji!
Beautiful as always...
Take a random fall
in the valley of flowers and
see the wounds of moon.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Beautiful as always...
Take a random fall
in the valley of flowers and
see the wounds of moon.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Saturday, October 17, 2020
Hiding Truth
I prefer to take the path of ahimsa having in 2 or 3 other lives I think... been a warrior.-saiom
Friday, October 16, 2020
My Salt Was Not On Sale
Beautiful expressions as always sir! Always such a pleasure to read your poems.-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar
Beautiful expressions Satish ji!
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
"...the god without a temple on road... "
can't express the effect of these words...-Bhagyashree Mishra, RANCHI
can't express the effect of these words...-Bhagyashree Mishra, RANCHI
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
Adieu (To God)
A well-constructed piece of poetry indeed Satish.-Peter Kiggin
Painless Green
I'm really in love with the
I'm really in love with the line "the fish smells the man". Structurally, visually, metaphorically, this is a great poem, I feel. The message, if I am indeed beginning to unravel and understand it, is wrapped well within.-lyrycsyntyme
I'm really in love with the line "the fish smells the man". Structurally, visually, metaphorically, this is a great poem, I feel. The message, if I am indeed beginning to unravel and understand it, is wrapped well within.-lyrycsyntyme
Monday, October 12, 2020
Punishment
Your story When it's dark outside and you're lying in your bed Your eyes are open but you're somewhere else inside your head The mind is spinning and you unravel the story that you read The truth of all the things you've done and have ever said Like a film of everything you've seen and been to and now its lead To some memories you keep and turmoil's leaving scars that only you know that bled The special moments captured like a bright light that you fumble around to tread The awkward silences and misfortunes that somehow turn into your final dread The things you shouldn't have done but you did them consequentially instead And then you fall asleep in the darkness of the night and dream another dream that may lie ahead…see more-Peter Kiggin
Satish , I have a feel of your work and it is not unlike mine as we both tangle with the present and past like two soldiers going out on a battle field to find only injured and dead bodies in our way.-Peter Kiggin
Satish , I have a feel of your work and it is not unlike mine as we both tangle with the present and past like two soldiers going out on a battle field to find only injured and dead bodies in our way.-Peter Kiggin
Cool Embers
A deep and intriguing write Satish. I enjoyed the read. Thank you. Pauline.-Pauline Miller, UK
Friday, October 9, 2020
rocks understand
What a powerful poem! Your brown eyes still chase me to cross the wet boundaries of pain. A chunk of a star can decide. I love these summing up lines. Sad, if the rock could have understood your pain! May the portion of star you are waiting May hear you. Regards.-Dhal Jirel 'Ravi', NEPAL
Thursday, October 8, 2020
My Salt Was Not On Sale
Beautiful expressions as always sir! Always such a pleasure to read your poems.-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar
Beautiful expressions Satish ji!
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Beautiful expressions Satish ji!
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Tuesday, October 6, 2020
On Cobbled Trail
a wonderful take: wording the empowering 'attitude' in the term 'owning one's own destiny'-L. B. Mek
behind windshields
Well penned sir. among the stanzas I love the third stanza. Regards from Nepal.-Dhal Jirel 'Ravi
What Was The Great Idea
Lovely poem Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines...
Someone unknown
will come back to say goodbye.
My heart will miss beats.- Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Especially loved these lines...
Someone unknown
will come back to say goodbye.
My heart will miss beats.- Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Saturday, October 3, 2020
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