In Quiteude

Despite oneself we walk into life's fire-Mr. Darcy

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A Moon Dance

Lovely metaphor. This is one i think i deciphered. A girl come of age?-Deluke Muwanigwa

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We Will Meet Again

Someone calls and there is promise of meeting. An amazing poem is well penned. This poem is excellent one.-Kumarmani Mahakul
 
'A poem
was born to inhale the angst' - so beautifully said!-Khairul Ahsan

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Where Was The Justice

Such a beautiful use of Oxymoron in these lines...
The moons were
alone in togetherness.

Beautiful as always Satish ji!- Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Contours Of Pain

Satish verma thank you for a searching inquiry through verse. Your words, always houghtful (though I might not comment on all) leave me hoping for a conclusion I know can never come. Really well done.-RDS

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Under The Lens

I shall just repeat 'just wow' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to praise your art befittingly:
'Syntax was
beautiful, not the abstract
of the hidden truth. You
resign to become a unique!

Helpless in my integrity
I don't forgive me, when
I forget my enemy.
And start thievery.'-L. B. Mek

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Retracing My Steps

just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent.-L. B. Mek

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Exiting Fog

'water has no feet' wonderful
'when stars go to sleep' lovely-saiom

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Becoming Otherself

Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Mode Of Slaughtering

India is still the land in which more people than anywhere else practice ahimsa
... in all areas including diet-saiom

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Unwedded

You have a remarkable way of expressing yourself through the images to paint in words. i love this verse.-Willys Watson 

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striking a bargain

This is a beautiful poem Satish but I'm not sure that I fully understand it. Could you explain it to me please?-Pauline Miller

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an ocean speaks

Loved these lines especially Satish ji... An untainted candle refuses to burn in the bed of roses Beautiful as always!-Giti Tyagi

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An Ocean Speaks

ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning SATISH ~ Thanks for an excllent & intriguing Poem ! 71% of the Earths Surface are covered by the OCEANS and they are all intimately connected by the WATER CYCLE ! Once the OCEANS were formed LIFE on Earth could begin ~ AMEN The ambient Temperature on the Earths Surface is now 16C. It is that that keeps the Oceans Liquid and a great reservoir of WATER to sustain all LIFE ON EARTH 24/7 !-
Blessings & Peace & Love-ANGELA & BRIAN

wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you go-on to weave this jaggedly tentative - yet gripping song, calling out for something whilst musing its virtues:
'On my tongue and
skin, your salt burns.'
'Unbroken thorns
will not give up. Catching your sleeves
they will beg you to come back.'-L. B. Mek

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Virtual Images

this is a very intense write...affairs start wars of the heart, and significant others lose trust.
then there ends up being ghosts of relationships...
and they haunt---

the last line allows for us to expand the allegory....war is for what? And why do we fight just prove we are more powerful than the other...playing God? Perhaps, yes.
Infidelity.....Playing God, destroying the relationship...throwing the relationship out of the garden.
quite like this piece...challenges the thoughts of the reader.-jacob erin-cilberto 

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Melting In Cold

Lovely lines Satish ji...
You
take a long breath and jump into sea.

Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal ,india

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In Terrible Times

This is very interesting. I love the lines:
"Your pretty face―
needs dusting. I was
curious to know about the story
of night shifts."

Love the meaning behind this, or at least, my interpretation on it. I will keep that to myself though. I really enjoy your wordplay and writing form. Flows very nicely. Nice work!-Broken. 

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Bumpy Ride

'Vibrations start when in
storm two dark caves meet in
jungle of irreverent words.'

'I will keep on prodding
your stooping shoulders
to stand erect.

Nothing else will count.'
just Brilliant!-L. B. Mek

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Hello Satish. This is an interesting read which seems to have deep meaning, but I don't understand it. Could you please explain it to me? With regards Pauline.-Pauline Miller

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poem on paper lips

Hello Satish. Another splendid write from your good self with some good lines added such as "The marrow will eat the bone." and "Between dot and dash I have left long pauses to understand unbroken lines."-Pauline Miller

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Nobody Was Innocent

Nice emotional imagery here. Powerful in these uncertain times.
Take care.-Mr. Darcy

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Friendship

Lovely poem Satish ji!
These lines reminded me of Atal Bihari Vajpayee's poem 'Unchaayi' (Great heights) in Hindi in which he expresses the same views as expressed in these lines...
Pinnacle of success
brings loneliness. You would
search yourself for company.- Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Something Of Nothing

A truly amazing piece you wrote here! Astonishing!-Audax

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Conflict Between Desires

Heart touching lines Satish ji...
You should not have left like
a thread from needle
Lovely poem!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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it matters

Hello Satish, this is beautiful. It holds such depth and feelings. Stay safe.-Pauline Miller

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Holding On

You write such praiseworthy lines and stanzas: "The castle / has connived with the moat / to end an era." I could quite honestly and easily highlight a number of others. It seems to me that, without fail, you are a go-to for great reads. :)-lyrycsyntyme

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What Else I Will Do

Well written, enjoyed the rhythm & flow.-Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach

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remote from sin

All I can say is that, like all of your work Satish,this is beautifully written and would touch the hearts of many and well worth reading.-Pauline Miller, UK

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Smoking Candles

Wow! The imagery is very strong.
"You left your guitar
on the moving sands of beach.
Waves pick up the song."
Stunning! Keep up the good work. It was a joy to read!-Jess 

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Fish Ladder

The title drew me in. The poem itself intrigues me, each stanza a puzzle to be opened before moving onto the next. I like this and found the imagery pleasing. I am sure I will return to this again and again.-Mr. Darcy

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