Wednesday, December 30, 2020
A Summer Poem
I loved this poem, especially the line "Confine the blue lilies unkissed by tears" awesome poem! I can hardly wait to read the next one!-Louise Robello
O Blood, O Tears
Especially loved these lines Satish ji...
When you recite my
poems, a black hole opens the
mouth to suck them in.
Beautiful as always! Loved the poem much!- Giti Tyagi, Karnnal, India
When you recite my
poems, a black hole opens the
mouth to suck them in.
Beautiful as always! Loved the poem much!- Giti Tyagi, Karnnal, India
Friday, December 25, 2020
Thursday, December 24, 2020
Aborted Faith
Lovely lines Satish ji....
Moon has disappeared.
I forget the human touch.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Moon has disappeared.
I forget the human touch.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Wednesday, December 23, 2020
near the sun
You have a most beautiful way with words Satish. Sending love and peace your way at Christmastime.-Pauline Miller, UK
Monday, December 14, 2020
Where Dreams Are Killed
Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.
Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.
Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Sunday, December 13, 2020
Forgetting Identity
Well done!-Raksha Manaktala Bhayana
Beautifully expressed Dr Saheb-Sharad Bhargava
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Beautifully expressed Dr Saheb-Sharad Bhargava
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In Bell Time
Lovely lines Satish ji...
Night sky was lit up.
There was a flower show to celebrate
the beauty of supermoon.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Night sky was lit up.
There was a flower show to celebrate
the beauty of supermoon.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Friday, December 11, 2020
The Avenger
So layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always-L. B. Mek
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always-L. B. Mek
Thursday, December 10, 2020
Forgetting Identity
Beautifully expressed Dr Saheb-Sharad Bhargava
Wednesday, December 9, 2020
I Need You
Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Saturday, December 5, 2020
Eros Was Blind
I will play with 🔥 in separating flames... insightful contemplation! 5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain
Coming of age with beautified situation. Eden was dying daily. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Coming of age with beautified situation. Eden was dying daily. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Fragment Pains
Only moon will cry.....great poetic expression! A magnificent piece of work....5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain
Blast Cells
Although I am a bit confused by the concept of this poem, it seems very unique and the choice of words are good! "Now theft has taken
place of stakes, meant for black lungs." This line would have to be my favorite because of how well you described it using the word theft.-Kay/Hayden
place of stakes, meant for black lungs." This line would have to be my favorite because of how well you described it using the word theft.-Kay/Hayden
Wednesday, December 2, 2020
Some Halters
You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!-RDS
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