For Eternal Kiss

beautiful!-L. B. Mek

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As for love it sometimes drives a hard bargain, I like how your voice used nature as an incentive to lure or entice the love interest to the voice. A strong ending “nothing else” but I don’t believe it! I think the voice is just getting started. enjoyed!-Matthew Bill, USA

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I Want Answers

Simply beautiful...
The humble
blood seeks truth from falling walls

What an expression Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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New Blood

I love your imagery. -Tracy Windisch-Mason

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An Equal - Armed Cross

to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor's unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing-L. B. Mek

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Hope And Despair

A thought inspiring write. Be well.-allets

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Silver Age

Violence of muted dialogues..what a beautiful expression in these lines..
The violence of muted
dialogues tear the atmosphere of
unknown pains.
Lovely poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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The Flesh and Predators

Another deep, dark, love piece, feeling the voice's anguish. It's kind of like following a lost soul on his journey to a dark place! I hope the forbidden love sees the voice in a better light, other than hidden or forbidden. Only time will tell when discovering true love. It will be like stepping out of the darkness and into the light Oh, and then how the voice will sing!-Matthew Bill

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Captive Clock

A pen with a lot of metaphors. Keeping time might be a little offbeat, and a little dark, so I’ll grab the good ones that agree with me. Keep on creating until The grim reaper sees me, you’ll see me. Stay Safe!-matthew Bill

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What Was Untouchable?

Your writing definitely comes from your soul vs your mind. I also enjoy the flavor of your cultural heritage. Great Job!-Words of Wisdumb 

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Magical Solution

I really love how you can express so much emotion in fewer words than most poets. And I love this verse.-Willys Watson 

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Yourselves

If there's a chance of hope it's always worth taking.
I hope you are well.-Mr. Darcy

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Are You There

The wheel being a symbolism of Earth - and the questioning of leaving your home. The way I interpret this is you're lonely and feeling like you're foreign/alien - like you don't belong so therefore you are lonely. It's as though you've written four poems and made them one - they're disconnected unless you look further into it - the way I see it - you seek to find peace in your religion - did you find it? Are you there?-stormingdance (Jessica)

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Wild Reflections

Love the last stanza.-H. Elizabeth

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Displacing The Milestones

Dark, ethereal, beautiful.
"when I was dispensing the
laughs amidst the grief
of hills"
I LOVE THIS LINE.-stormingdance (Jessica)

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How To Say Love

Such beautiful and powerful expression Satish ji....
You were Agni.
Loved the poem much! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

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You Were The Moon

I'm not really sure what to make of this, but I guess that would be the point. I like the deep meaning buried in obscurity. The last line is perfect =) Nice work!-Words of Wisdumb 

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Trekking

The poem is beautiful, overall, but that first stanza, and the imagery of the moons, is extremely powerful and striking; what a great lead in to the remaining lines!-Januarian

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Unmatched

 'Let the traffic grow between

give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.'
wow, brilliant lines.-L. B. Mek

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Repeat Dilemma

i love the ending. well played-eleven_eleven

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Small Pains

You Describe
USA polarity indirectly in your empty spinning minds. The monarch reading is brilliant.-allets

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My Things Your Things

Lovely lines Satish ji...
A dead hibiscus wakes up
in your hand.You fondle the denials
of pain of internal bleeds.

Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

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amour propre

Many muses not yet written and still she steals a many voice and hearts with her beauty and cruelty (Mother nature)-matthew Bill

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Why Do I Suffer?

I can see this voice developing into a hate-love relationship a burning desire that needs a nice cool drink to quench that dry parched conflict.,Some great metaphors in conflict as is desire, love, and betrayal. -matthew Bill

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Enjoyed Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!-Poetic Dan

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Sitting In Fog

 Tell your loved ones that they didn’t die alone. A part of us is still with them.-Pooja Bhayana

well said..................vincent bhayana

intense emotions after one loses its life partner......vincent bhayana

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Between The Veils

 'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.',

indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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Meditating Again

your every poem is just sublime nectar of nirvana.-Dalton

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Hope Was Done

Beautiful lines...
Don't go my angel back
to your abode in deep sea.
Earth was burning. I am on fire

Thanks https://museindia.com/for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Ignorance?

'when touched
by a moonbeam.' beautiful.-saiom

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Take Me In Arms

Beautiful expression...Paper-thin love carries Himalaya.
HAPPY NEW YEAR SATISH JI!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Repentance

Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go.-Amon

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Earthly Claims

indeed you might be my favorite poet. -Dalton

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Without Ceremony

'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge'
wrote Sylvia in her 'Cut'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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