Sunday, February 28, 2021
Wall Of Death
Heartrending!-Rahul David
Friday, February 26, 2021
Punishment
What a lovely expression.....
Why the saline drops
are held on lips when you cry in
dark? There were many fireflies.
Simply beautiful Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Why the saline drops
are held on lips when you cry in
dark? There were many fireflies.
Simply beautiful Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Thursday, February 25, 2021
In A Senseless World
Great imagery! Vague enough to allow my own interpretation which I always find fun; like a puzzle. I'm also a big fan of music........ and cadavers in moats! More.-John Cardwell
Wednesday, February 24, 2021
Tuesday, February 23, 2021
Message from PostPoems.com
Winter To Spring Challenge
"Another kind of brutal" - the fire next time. Right-O. Conspiracy/fact - cia planted radioactive bombs under Hymalayas with cameras to spy on China that caused the flood in India. All players have nuclear power. N. Korea wants all embargoes lifted and no un inspectors. Like Russia, not big on keeping agreements. It is going to be a hot time in the old town some tonight. Duck and cover is not mallard hunting and old Beatles tunes reupped.
Civilizations do fall under such stresses. Hmmmm...
I just want a crocus to show.-allets
Warm where I am
Sending heat from my heart out to yours
And the cool remembrance of Winter's dipping digits
when the dog days of Summer roll 'round again-DSR.Summar
Sky Poet!
These feet were made for poetics (a lil pun there). Grounded in the Big Mitt, they leave snowflake prints in the warm sands of spring time vernal equinoxial days To grow meander-roving as shadows in longer days. -allets
Allets,
It was always interesting growing up in a place where all four seasons are present and experiencing missing winter in summer and summer in winter. I feel like that shift in hot and cold taught me to live in the moment, and to try my best to enjoy the current weather. Despite that, winter has always been one of the seasons more difficult to appreciate. Thank for sending this out, this is the first time in a while I wrote creatively, as short as it the piece is!-Sky
Awwwwwwe shucks. To write is to create is to live inside inspiration spheres. Dwell in the air temperatures of all things renewed - paint splashed in Dutch Elm leaf green, Robin orange-reds, and the perfect purples of the crocus.-allets
"Another kind of brutal" - the fire next time. Right-O. Conspiracy/fact - cia planted radioactive bombs under Hymalayas with cameras to spy on China that caused the flood in India. All players have nuclear power. N. Korea wants all embargoes lifted and no un inspectors. Like Russia, not big on keeping agreements. It is going to be a hot time in the old town some tonight. Duck and cover is not mallard hunting and old Beatles tunes reupped.
Civilizations do fall under such stresses. Hmmmm...
I just want a crocus to show.-allets
Warm where I am
Sending heat from my heart out to yours
And the cool remembrance of Winter's dipping digits
when the dog days of Summer roll 'round again-DSR.Summar
Beavis
i dreamed
i was a cardinal
on a sill
contemplating
frozen dewshine
from the sun.
Happy Spring!-allets
i dreamed
i was a cardinal
on a sill
contemplating
frozen dewshine
from the sun.
Happy Spring!-allets
DSR.Summar
Heat rushes in
surrounding a heart
that, once chilled,
will remember.
.
Thermodynamism
floating on an emoted
jet stream April
to August
warms the world.-allets
Two sides of the same coin.
Give it a flip. See what you get.
Heads it’s summer.
Tails it’s winter.
Better yet. Jump on a jet.
Live on the edge.
Where it’s always warmer.-Sky
Heat rushes in
surrounding a heart
that, once chilled,
will remember.
.
Thermodynamism
floating on an emoted
jet stream April
to August
warms the world.-allets
Two sides of the same coin.
Give it a flip. See what you get.
Heads it’s summer.
Tails it’s winter.
Better yet. Jump on a jet.
Live on the edge.
Where it’s always warmer.-Sky
Pray the vernal come now, O Strawberry Spring
A temporary respite from wintry things
Send Stella a stalling of the cold and the froze
Make toasty her fingers and roasty her toes:-DSR.Summar
A temporary respite from wintry things
Send Stella a stalling of the cold and the froze
Make toasty her fingers and roasty her toes:-DSR.Summar
THAT'S A SENDING OF WARMTH Yes! So very well sent, exceptionally and warmly received.-allets
Sky Poet!
These feet were made for poetics (a lil pun there). Grounded in the Big Mitt, they leave snowflake prints in the warm sands of spring time vernal equinoxial days To grow meander-roving as shadows in longer days. -allets
Allets,
It was always interesting growing up in a place where all four seasons are present and experiencing missing winter in summer and summer in winter. I feel like that shift in hot and cold taught me to live in the moment, and to try my best to enjoy the current weather. Despite that, winter has always been one of the seasons more difficult to appreciate. Thank for sending this out, this is the first time in a while I wrote creatively, as short as it the piece is!-Sky
Awwwwwwe shucks. To write is to create is to live inside inspiration spheres. Dwell in the air temperatures of all things renewed - paint splashed in Dutch Elm leaf green, Robin orange-reds, and the perfect purples of the crocus.-allets
Saturday, February 20, 2021
You had the Answer
Satish, In this world where we stop believing up, is up, and down is down, where we move down, while falling up, war is peace and peace is war! A deep ink you have created, peace be with you!-matthew Bill, USA
Nothing To Mend
How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece-AlitaOpal
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!-L. B. Mek
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!-L. B. Mek
Friday, February 19, 2021
Asking No Mercy
As always, you achieve so much in your preferred, condensed style of penning. It is the fleshy body, mostly, that cries for it's poverty. And the spirit/soul or mind, if you will that cheers for it's own wealth. But will power and perseverence only come from the latter's wealth, all while needed physical relief is brought on by the former. Woe to one whose perseverence is attached to the physical, for a mere earthquake can change all that in a moment, and tears will wash it away.-lyrycsyntyme
Terror In Air
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination.-L. B. Mek
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination.-L. B. Mek
Thursday, February 18, 2021
Drifting in Dust Storm
Beautiful poem, Satish. Thanks for sharing!-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark
Wednesday, February 17, 2021
Drifting In Dust Storm
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory's crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close-L. B. Mek
while we strive to keep their memory's crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close-L. B. Mek
Saturday, February 13, 2021
The Celestial Affair
What an excellent poem so well written and deep, I absolutely loved it!-Louise Robello, USA
Via Negativa
Loved this particluar stanza...
When the life meets
death, I stand on no man's land
to find if any spark was left.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
When the life meets
death, I stand on no man's land
to find if any spark was left.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Thursday, February 11, 2021
Increasing Angst
Of the pieces that you've written which I've been lucky enough to read, this is amongst your best. The profound sequence of lines that you close with, I suspect, will prove quite memorable.-lyrycsyntyme
Wordless Meanings
Like this poem
;You love to dig
your own meaning.'
I see your exploring the boundaries of imagery
Cool stuff keep it up.-Samith Pich
;You love to dig
your own meaning.'
I see your exploring the boundaries of imagery
Cool stuff keep it up.-Samith Pich
Wednesday, February 10, 2021
After The Eyebath
A very enjoyable read Satish , Best Wishes.-Edwin Jepson, UK
Fugitive
A theme in the realm of Poe. I greatly appreciate that. I recently learned about the woodpecker having a great affinity for acorns, which has quickly proved useful in understanding the reference here.-lyrycsyntyme
Tuesday, February 9, 2021
Poems Knock
Such a beautiful expression...
Death brings the live pain
of fossilized to-morrows
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Death brings the live pain
of fossilized to-morrows
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Thursday, February 4, 2021
Without Eye Contact
Dark, Creepy, somewhat shocking, occult like! Hopping you move out of the dark and into the light. Sometimes you have to walk in the dark to move to the light! kanwas- Matthew Bill, USA
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