The Massive Glory

Artificial love makes two ends meet! This line tells a lot of things about love and life. A nice way of expressing, Sir...-Setaluri Padmavathi

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Mythical Thoughts

I doubt you ever read my scribbles
but for some crazy reason, your words below
elucidate the inspiration for the feeble effort, I posted today:
'Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves― green
yellow and red. I survive
the quake.

A tiff burns the fingers.
I will not hold the pen.
The blank paper shivers.
Who will write the
wet poem?'
(thank you! Guru)-L. B. Mek

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Life Has Become A Constant

Wishes and emotions were expressed well...Good poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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Avant-Garde

Very straightforward way of saying things will satisfy us sometimes. A good write.-Padma

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Soldiers In Line

they're swimming in their shared tears of regret, dear Poet
one regretting it foolishness, in blind belief
the other, its foolish capitulation in the face
of all-things: Greed!
thank you, for sharing your profound wisdom: Guru-L. B. Mek

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Parenthesis

Your slanted brown lives
always reflect a broken world, where
words wander to find the page of heart.
These lines are the main points that make someone realize what love really is. A lovely verse, Satish jee.-Padma

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What A Cut

satishverma,

Ready to be free…
Ready to be me…
Ready to be thee.-Laura

what a worthy dedication
to one of my all-time favourite poets,
I read and learn, Guru
thank you!-L. B. Mek

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Is it Togetherness?

Nobody can have the freedom to create love or emotions for others. Absence is common when thoughts are deviating. A good one, Sir!-Padma

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A Cup of Hemlock

imagine, what we could achieve
if we utilised half the energy we wasted
hating and belittling, those we oppose
for simply having a different perspective
that literally, has no impact on our own lives?
How absurd, when you realise
barely 10 to 20 percent of Earth is inhabited
and we're all head down busily, elbowing a path
through societies 'narrow minded' settlements...
modernity's narrow minded self observed, ignorance
cultivating
another generation of mind warped, submissive sheep's...-L. B. Mek

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Why This Madness

Life continues either it is darkness or a bright day, Satish jee. A lovely verse.-Padma

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My Baby Steps

A thought-provoking poem, Satish jee.
My love was beyond the
pain of stones submerged in the
salt lake. Nightmares visit the eyes at night.
I loved these lines which reveal much pain. Good expression.-Padma

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When Dew Weeps

'The moon was sleeveless.
It drops a hint.
You cannot blame the tree.'
we blame roots
we blame nature
we blame choices
till, we realise for our maths to work
there must first
be a value to existence, for us to lament
otherwise, we're just wasting time
multiplying null by sans
whilst dreaming, of moonwalking our regrets..
(as insightful, as ever
thank you, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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You discribed death as beautiful Satish?. Strange. But still enjoyed reading your poem.- Alan Brown, UK

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The Serene

The images of nature are well painted by your hands in words. Thank you for sharing your wonderous poem.-Carlos L Estrada

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The Last Battle

The pain of someone's heart due to the absence of a loved one is beautifully depicted, Satish jee.-Padma

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Golden Birds Are Falling

'The silver barge cannot stand
in the cyclone-unheard..Collect the
handsome corpses of them who wanted to live.'
wonderfully impactive, finale
such a sobering read
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Were You A Maneater?

Enjoyed your poem Satish. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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Unreturning

This reminds me of someone who has lost a loved one and they still have conversations with that person; where they once sat.-Poetic Beauty

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Return Of Light

Words can do harm and they can do good. The description in this poem are done very creatively.-Poetic Beauty

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Walk A While

Your eyes play with flying
sparks from the fireworks of the lips.
This is the best line of all which gives a deep meaning, Satish jee. A good poem, indeed!-Padma

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How to say salaam?

from Muse, by Anna Akhmatova
What just means liberty, or youth, or approbation,
When compared with the gentle piper's tread?

And she came in, threw out the mantle's edges,
Declined to me with a sincere heed.
I say to her, "Did you dictate the Pages
Of Hell to Dante?"
(and so, I too ask you: Guru
Do you dictate, your Visionary pages
akin to Grecian Oracle: truth's...?)-L. B. Mek

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Very well written enjoyed it very much. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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No Prophet Speaks

Incredible! I valued your expression and way of revealing truth. A tender unique way to say much more with less. To notice the disharmony while maintaining heart wholeness. Not with anger. You powerfully send a clear message with your words. Also instilling even more power from your uncorrupted standpoint within your being.-Danielle

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Lifting The Dead

Too cruel to be born again.
Life challenges the rising pain.
These lines tell me how painful and challenging life is! An insightful poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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A Bone Quits

Amen!
you're digging the Ruins
of cloud-bricked Empire, now
the mere sands of our shoreline, afterthought's
you're searching for ideological Deity's
imbued, with Morality's wafer-thin bedrocks
now belittled, to a mere fragment
of our despairingly cyclical: dreamless reality..
'antiquities: to be, or not - to be...'
warped
in-to modernity's:
to believe, or
nihilistically: yearn-for - endlessly...!'
(profoundly insightful
as-ever: Guru
thank you)-L. B. Mek

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The Voyager

Think True
You are a Masterpiece Incarnate!-Pungus

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Email from Padmavathi, Museindia.com

Commendations!
I'm delighted to congratulate you and announce that you're the winner in Editor's Pick - July 2021. I always feel happy and curious to read your evocative writings. I wish you all the very best in your endeavours that would make you successful.
Best Wishes and Regards
Padmavathi, Editor, Your Space, Muse India.

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Living In A Cave

A good poem that depicts the truth, bitter feelings, and the ultimate meaning of life, Satish jee.-
Padma

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Euphoria

Hi Satish, I found this very interesting and have read it a few times to feel your poem. Good work.-carol wiseman

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Tormenting Dreams

'The collected suicide
of the nightingales have given the worry.'
'my poems are
working crossing the pains.'
'The tulips have started
talking. Why the blood spots are appearing?'
'Humankind is becoming
rare.'
(sheer Brilliance, as ever: Guru
please forgive my rude rearranging
of your masterly lines)-L. B. Mek

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