Sunday, July 31, 2022
Saturday, July 23, 2022
The Sunday Ritul
Belong to yourself in?....This does not make any sense in sentence structure or flow of written/spoken English, correct coherent English, that is.
And to be frank nor does the rest of your poem. It's a mish mash of eclectic poetry.
And what does Ritul mean? Surely you mean the word Ritual.
And this was selected, viewed, chosen and won. Ye Gods!
Those are my honest thoughts regarding this poem.
Anyway, salutations to you.-Shaun Cronick
And to be frank nor does the rest of your poem. It's a mish mash of eclectic poetry.
And what does Ritul mean? Surely you mean the word Ritual.
And this was selected, viewed, chosen and won. Ye Gods!
Those are my honest thoughts regarding this poem.
Anyway, salutations to you.-Shaun Cronick
Friday, July 22, 2022
Monday, July 18, 2022
Loneliness
Haunting and sad. As poetry is meant to be. Thank you for sharing.-lalalaEulalie
Saturday, July 16, 2022
Friday, July 8, 2022
Thursday, July 7, 2022
Wednesday, July 6, 2022
Crossing The Fog
Powerful stuff-DariusAce1
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