Love was So Thick

Poet brings in a novel idea that every one is a creator by begetting children.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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I was Afraid

A nice poem describing asiration, dejection and pain.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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It Was Like That

great read Satish. I love that killer last verse, making life's weariness simple and beautiful is a mission statement for the world.-Ken e Bujold

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Where Do I Live

"How is it possible that/ all the songs should be buried in blood "? Words that persistently gnaw at my conscience! Profound!-UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon

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Wonderful Stones

It is well knwn that we can take away nothing from this world. Still forgetful of that we try to amass wealth. The thing tht remains is worthless good character of persons. good message.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Simply Watch

A modernist poem bordering on obscurity.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Your poem reminded me of Eden Garden and how love was generated between two souls.
A lovely poem with a good message, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Parting Day

very evocative write here Satish, quite a bit for imagination to chew on-Ken e Bujold

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There is Darkness

Enigmatic love. Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore.

Powerful words of emotions. Padma, Hyderabad

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Concepts

Satish, very much enjoyed the poem. Simple concrete construction which packs a significant conceptual wallop.-Ken e Bujold

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How To Survive

The roses will not take bribes. Nice one!-Ramesh T A

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An Awareness

Some deep thoughts about life. Liked the last stanza.-Hakikur Rahman

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Everything Flies Away

A comment on transience of life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

I loved the line 'My pain is omnipresent'. The mental pain is felt in such a situation when words become facts, Satish jee. A well-penned poem as always.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Don't Inhale The Gas

Why don't you want to live and marry death?-Ramesh T A

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You Are Giving Away

Why the human beings are changing skin and tongue.? Very nice question!-Ramesh T A

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No Pyre Speaks

Satish Verma is a Sharp Shooter. You find him one here, as always. And, true to his words, his poems "burn the residual integrity". No one raises his hands, when asked "who distributes the venom"? Albeit, the fact that the venom is visible everywhere and in everything and everyone!-UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon

Great poem, that incises the readers conscience with surgical precision…-UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon

Satish Verma is a Sharp Shooter. You find him one here, as always. And, true to his words, his poems "burn the residual integrity". No one raises his hands, when asked "who distributes the venom"? Albeit, the fact that the venom is there everywhere and in everything and everyone!-UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon

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Without Faults

A poem with modernist touch.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Moon will do Nothing

The fog covers the footprints.
Are you sure, I will scream?
Very powerful expressions, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Rehearsal of a Call

The connection of nature with mind or appearance is beautifully depicted, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Lilacs were Crying

A powerful poem, indeed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Healed by Love

When the words end.
heart speaks It was a farewell.
These words sum up everything and explain every inner feeling, Satish jee. A well-written poem.-Padma, Hyderabad

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