Your Depth of Being

Life is coming to a close. My experiences are of no avail. The path ahead is thorny. My love emerges as pain in spite of my equanimity. I try to bury all the arguments burning within.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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No Cause

A sensitive mind feels pain at the happenings around whether they are related to his person or not.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Out There

maybe that inverted tornado swirls through our conscience and wraps our head around our guilt.
Powerful.-jacob erin-cilberto

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You and God

Human beings who think experience pain. There is an urge to express it in poems. It is better to be down to earth than be in abstractions.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why You Say, I am a God

Home is the symbol of our existence. Losing it is losing ego, that is oneself. Ten there can be no point of view. Cleanliness of mind is the way to reach that destination.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You are the Key

Both war and peace are two faces of man. War is a game to assassinate the unwanted.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Killing Wolves

Killing wolves i.e. losing ego is essential to find truth. The fumes of untruth raise even without fire.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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This is My Home

A thinker always changes his ideas as he progresses. An artist goes by his conscience. The world is a conglomeration of many complex things. Unbiased approach alone protects one from spiritual superstitions.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Your Empathy

Good write S.-orchidee

Great writings😌-Jazzy.Special

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Emergency

There truths beyond time and place. But there are many truths applicable to our time and place for a thinker. Many do not have the wisdom to choose values that ennoble lives.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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An Occult Experience

Everyone experiences death of some dream or other. A poet expresses the pain in a way that can be experienced by the readers. Many may consider it a useless activity like that of Sisiphus.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why Thoughts Disappear?

Forgetfulness helps us forget the ills of life. Life is a continuous fight between character and desire. Learning form the wise is reflected when one is alone.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Can You Break Sky?

 Like sky the concept of god is all pervading and It is not confined to any country. Advocates of humaneness should never be disregarded.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Have You My Blood?

References to the ‘original sin’ committed by Eve by eating the fruit from the Tree of Knowledge and the movement of Jews without a land of their own for centuries.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Hundred Stories

Powerful.-Thomas W Case

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Where the Philosophy Ends

Where physicality ends spirituality begins. The world is full of dark ideas and acts. Some remedy has to come into operation. History is proof of cyclic nature of good and bad things. But we have not yet learnt the lesson to be good, peaceful and happy.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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No Dark Crime

I admire your writing!-G.Cabús

Powerful.-Thomas W Case

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The Heart Holds Me Back

Love which has been a pleasure, comfort and solace is no more any of that. Man is going ahead without direction or destination. Listening to wet eyes is a nice figure of speech.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Penultimate

Excellent work.-Thomas W Case

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Are You Carnivorus?

Love is a beautiful feeling but poverty is a hard reality in this carnivorous society. People try to escape form it with spirits. They even create a god out of fear.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Analysis

The world was told everything needed to be told by Adisankara and Buddha. Rama and Gandhi demonstrated the same. But the world has not learnt either from the theory or from the practical models.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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My Philosophy

Knowledge of unhappy past hurts. Forgetting ills of the past man should try to live with the present in the company of all. We should be able to think of bettering the future with our present efforts. Looking at past stirs past emotions in the present.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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No Troubles

Unable to say what we think or feel about things. When we cease to look at our own selves in the mirror we see the world. Walking straight without bending over issues is the thing to be done.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When I am Understanding Myself

Understanding oneself is a tough job. It is like touching a formless one.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Buddha Will Not Sleep

Buddha, symbol of peace and meditation, is unable to sleep because
He has to abandon everything including family to be out of pain as desire and bondage with worldly things is the root cause of pain. Present life is bloody as we made it so with wars and conflicts.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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In Captivity

Encounter between opposing forces is an everlasting power tussle.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unlocking Grief

Humanity is on slef destructive mode. War on some pretext has been happening as desires of man are unlimited.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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No Stone Will Turn

 Time is a continuum. Nobody knows what we were in the last birth and what we will be in the next birth. But reltionships are such that we feel that they are forever.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Standing in Place

The forbidden candle is the Sun which lights the world with knowledge. Fidelity makes one get hurt in love which is the centre of man’s being. Still one has to have fidelity not to be sinful.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nrellore

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No One was Outsider

When we believe that world is one family, no one is outsider. But our hearts are bound by time and space. Poet uses his pen to remind us of the oneness of this earth and earthly beings.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Solve this Enigma

Creation of life is an eternal process. Life undergoes constant change. Man, who creates also destroys. This is an unsolved enigma of life. Poets should continue to highlight this anomaly.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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From Grass to Grass

Politicians are bothered about their seats and notes but not about the tears of people.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Who will Never Die?

The people who are path breakers, who sacrifice their life for the good of all are immortal.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Divider

shell shockers Online Game is widely recognized as the preeminent online first-person shooter io game that revolves around an egg-based theme, boasting an extensive global player community.-hendi

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My Soft Voices

Sun, symbol of knowledge, manifests in the form a sloka from the erudite. Internal war makes one prudent. All that is sinful will vanish leaving purity like that of a white rose.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Meet the Karma

War may not always be reason for destruction. Unrequited love can also cause total destruction of a person. One may try to express his disappointment in poetry. The everlasting fire may turn him towards spirituality.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Crucifixion

A powerful writing. I feel there is some treasures hidden inside your poem. Good work 👍-Arundass TP

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Supernatural

Beautiful lines. Enjoyed reading 🙂-Arundass TP

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There was a Sad Valley

Man naturally seeks safety. But at the same time raising voice against evil is also necessary for our survival.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Before You Listen to Me

Man talks about peace but also has a tendency to fight. For his glory of reaching the moon he is ready to destroy all the imaginative mystery about the moon.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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To Dying Muse

While I do not like to think of the Muse every facing demise, I very much like the phrases in your poem, especially the sixth line.-S74rw4rd

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Between Done And Undone

Your excellence in this format, and the endless variety of the phrases you deploy, never fail to amaze me.-S74rw4rd

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It Is Getting Dark

Moonheads guillotined, and unsaid words that become speaking eyes---your inventiveness and radical imagery never fails to deliver a verbal and very poetic impact.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-S74rw4rd

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Ambiguity

When a child is born he inherits an identity and gradually picks up a personality. But he has to leave all that when it is time to die.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Again Nightmare

Present surroundings are full of lies. People are driven into a make belief that what is around is real.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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I Sing In Dark

Treating women just as targets of lust, mercy killing and things like these have been happening unhindered and it has become almost normal in the eyes of the world and consequently there are no protests of condemnation.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Repeat Dilemma

I like this. It is short but expressive and lets the reader interpret meaning.-Brad

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My Vision

I have not been able to comment much on your work, lately, but I still applaud your work in this particular form, and the way you put so much into such a small space---like Chopin's Nocturnes and Preludes.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-S74rw4rd

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Take an Acid Bath

Body, the home of soul, gets liquidated with age. Past is an invisible luggage we carry. Love for life keeps death away. Good in this life makes it worthy of living.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Poem of Unknown

A person should be ready to fight with unseen enemies too. He is capable of destruction. He realizes truth by destroying myths.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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About my Poems

rt makes a poet sensitive and love all people and things. He can see through others and understand the unspoken words too. That reflects in his poems. Religion may appear as blanks and halves but even when not understood its legacy is carried forward for our own good.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Every line in this verse talks about the truth and present scenario. A lovely poem, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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No Hierarchy

Man’s endeavor is to understand God and he believes that God will understand his problem and lessen his pain. As per science birth is accidental (but religion says that it is because of Karma). Man wants the power to heal himself that is to say find solutions to his problems by himself thus making both of them equal without any hierarchy.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Have Not Put The Love In Place

Such a sad but visual poem. Leaves prints on the mind, makes the heart tremble with and for you.-emmajoygreen

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How will you Walk with Me?

Man tries to find happiness. He should have freedom to express and do what he likes to do. If authorities do not give freedom he will continue to fight the moral war.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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What to Do?

The target missed. There is no way to start dialogue to stop war.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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In My Small Fists

A stunning poem with packed emotion 💖-Teddy.

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Blue Drinks

Soft feelings like love have been disappearing from our world fast. Only pain is seen and felt all around in the fast changing world. There is a longing for going back in time. Everyone does things at the cost of his life. In such a world soft people are considered losers though the real losers are those whose hearts ceased to respond to more important things in life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Sky was Falling

A lover portrays his lady love in his poems. Even when he is disappointed still there is some charm left in life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

A well-written poem filled with emotions, Satish jee....-Padma, Hyderabad

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Seeking Salvation

Not bothered about philosophical concepts like life death and its aftermath.
There is so much beauty in the world but one is unable to enjoy anything including romance. Seeking way our of this.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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My Impeccable Questions

Tough time has become tougher. Buddhism could not survive the intellectual onslaught of Hinduism. To save the people of the world someone has to come and sacrifice his life to uplift the people.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unmaking Love

I read this twice but I have no idea what it is about.I think its about moths and butterflies.-David Wakeling

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Behind Vanity

Full moon in June is known as strawberry moon. Full moon in Summer, with a clear sky is very pleasant. Memories of such experiences last long. Still there is a lot more to do to make this world more beautiful. A hummingbird which moves with the group teaches that that is the way to live. That is the way to find god.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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A Blissful Fall

People talk of values and pose as lovers of peace. But within they also crave for war as much as they love peace. The dichotomy of mind and heart is a natural phenomenon.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Is World Coming to an End?

It appears that any day the world can end with the animosity and arsenal we have. We have to constantly keep vigil to exist. Man also has in him the deep desire to survive in spite of many things against him. We have to wait for the day on which all people will be conscious about the way to survive.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Meditation and Kill

I needed this.-desvalida

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Frozen Heart

Keep your distress and suffering- away from yourself. Not you cry, not me. Neither killed anybody.-Dr. Dillip K Swain

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Irretrievable

An accident of the lips, yeah I guess we've all been there.-desvalida

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Creeping Dresses

In nine short lines, you create a sense of foreboding horror, which us centered around the fifth and sixth lines. There, the poem defines the place as "an eerie loveland," and describes the "holy people" who "tear earth's womb." Within the context of the poem, those otherwise ordinary phrases become wildly charged with an implicit horror which resonates from them through the entire poem. Even in a second reading, the horror does not diminish.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Last Confrontation

Your customary skill with this form and these phrases is highly evident in this poem.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Who was Who?

War or peace, irrespective of victory or defeat, human emotions are the same.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Poems were Taken Away

Your poems do shake the roots of my brain. Well, I was able to crack this, at least partly. Yeah, I am going to read all...-desvalida

Monoliths

A call 'back to nature'-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Poems were Taken Away

The concept of God is a great comforter. Existentialism which recognizes only the presence of man takes away that comfort. But man mostly prefers to be in the world with pain than go for spiritual enlightenment which gives him immense inner rapture.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When The Sun Was Born?

The end would come one day.! can throw a death in the eyes of weeping moon for bargaining? Wonderful lines!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Hierarchy

 Excellent!!!

Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.
Starward, changing soon to j-calle-Starward

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Breath to Breath

Love is apparent in eyes. People find god in stone but may not really understand godliness which is love. If one understands that one is ready to sacrifice one’s life for love.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Hairy Bites

Myths are beliefs which may be true (unless proved otherwise). Man sometimes faces troublesome situations which he cannot overcome and then looks for help from above. Building a strong self amidst towering difficulties is needed.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Know How To Bleed

This is an important read I freel the pain coming through your words we have way to express wht we feel thanks for the read.-RobinRebirth

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Gloved Stings

The world today is not a pleasant place to live. So nobody wants to be reborn.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Will Not Smell Poison

As always with these poems, I applaud your style. This poem's second and third stanza are particularly eerie.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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In Autumn

The short statements made me want to know more Satish. You keep the reader involved in the words. You did well. The words danced to a interesting ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.-Coyote Poetry

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Who was Mesmerized?

Reward of knowledge is unbelievably great. Different view points become a part of history. Influence of evil will be replaced with good in course of time.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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In Autumn

The short statements made me want to know more Satish. You keep the reader involved in the words. You did well. The words danced to a interesting ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.-Coyote Poetry

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God's Distances

People appear to be modern but their thinking is medieval. They forget that the Sun god watches their true intentions. Nature takes its revenge when man tries to exploit it in the form of pandemic and the like. We should remember that our stay here is not permanent.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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God, What is Your Real Name?

Although I do not care for the title of the poem, I really like the text of the poem. The succinct and short statements give the poem an enormous verbal power.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-j-ninetyfour

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Notch But Me

A poet is happy with his writing. But there are some to criticize his exploration of truths. At the cost of his reputation he wants to preserve his writings.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Anguish Of Scars

This is a beautiful poem, reading like snippets of overheard conversations. The final two lines present a striking, and maybe even a little frightening, concept of the moon's death. But I doubt the poem indicates anything about the medical health of the Poet.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-j-ninetyfour

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Holy Tree Crying Earth

 Most beautiful, this evocation.

Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-j-ninetyfour

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Nothing Will Change

Rose garden is like Adam’s paradise. But for some like Satan it is a cage. For everything good or bad there are two opposing views. Keeping quiet before evil is worse than death. If there is no corrective action even in dreams only snake haired Medusa will appear.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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I Will Think Again

Myths support a belief system. When they are blown suffering is the consequence. It is like being without protection for all kinds of infections.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Bones Quiver Again

Life is a series of pleasures and pains. There is a constant effort to come out of this circle of different emotions. Love alone can give us peace and happiness.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Did I Ask More?

"Touching trees,
one by one, searching your
name on every leaf"
Too touched... ivery deep one.
Keep penning-Soyam prabha

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Taking Liberty

A person in confusion or extreme pain will nt be able to behave in a predictable manner. One in love with him/her also will feel the intensity of pain. When circumstances do not allow them to unite one has to drink love only from the eyes of the other. A good poem on love.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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I Write Blood

Excellent!!!
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unto the exultations of Heaven.-j-ninetyfour

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Among Foxes and Wolves

Man is among people like foxes and wolves. He needs to keep up his human element in trying circumstances. It is struggle for existence. Intellectuals who should lead the society are silent like cows. Each of them has hs/her own tattoos/parties. So future is bleak.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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I See In Dark

These really are becoming addictive to me, and I love it.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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We Will Kill The Hate

Beauty will never perish. Write my name on a star, I will crash on the white moon.- Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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No Mercy Today

Your metaphors and similes are always so well phrased.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.- Starward

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Where was the Time?

Man does not fear doing wrong these days. He has become insensitive to the suffering of others. He thinks that by giving charity all his sins will be washed away. Life has become a count of years and nothing more.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Paralyzed Words

I love how you gather these phrases that, individually, seem to be unrelated and perhaps even random verbal constructions, into a singular and shrewd observation of human existence.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-j-ninetyfour

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Life at Stake

Poems which are within the reach of common people will fulfil the purpose of the poet. Poems above their heads serve no purpose.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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hen The Thoughts Break

Simply awesome poem, I see vivid imagery while reading your poem from Gothic structure to haunted house and the meadows with green pasture.5*****-M. Asim Nehal

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In House Of Criminals

Excellent, and that last line is very dramatic!!!
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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My Signatures

Excellent poem.....Thanks for sharing, liked it.5****-M. Asim Nehal

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Relationship

Love is the base of any relationship. But there isn’t any formula applicable to all. Green pain too did not make one believe in God.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why Roots are Dying?

Future appears bleak. Words fail to describe the atrocities of the day. People are nonchalant. Many will be killed with poison being spread everywhere. Roots of a civilization are dying.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Were Very Tall

Not entirely sure what this means, but I do like the format and the evocative tone of the language.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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The Fabulous Dream

The accumulated phrases add up to a vision of almost unbearable sadness, but it is so elegantly stated in your usual format of nine brief lines.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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You Are Trembling

A fantastic commentary on the present times. " Animalism prevails. No human love. " true to life….-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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No Good Reasons

We do not understand God’s ways. Transformation within may be gradual or sudden but it might be there in all who seek within. Ego is the only wal to break to reach the goal.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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There was no First

Accumulation of knowledge is of no use. You have to think it out and own it. Life changes constantly and one has to be conscious about it.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Roses Don't Bleed

I have been reading Poetry for fifty years, as of this past April. And although I am at a loss to know what the name of your writing style is, or how it should be defined, I am sure, as sure as I have ever been about any poetry I have read in this half century, that I like your poetry very, very much.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights, unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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For The Proud God

You go for a new journey. Via commas and full stops.....I like it dear poet.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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A Strange About –Turn

In the present world non-violence is disregarded. Writer should stand up to resurrect wisdom among people. A happy mind thinks positively about the possible realization of pain by all.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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A River In Your Eyes

Wow, with each poem of yours that I read, I become more and more fascinated by your style, and by the phrases that inhabit your poems.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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How will You See the Moon?

One is a volcano of love. The other is reflecting it like a mirror without any feeling. By removing ignorance one tries to make her see the moon, a symbol of love.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Whom I Dispel

Excellent poem, I liked it Full Stars.-Rajan T Renganathan

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What A Cut

I find your poetic style very instructive.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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No Negativity

The poet is in pain. Love is painful. Love lorn the poet swallows burning pain.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Zen Shuts the Eyes

The elite are silent when evil things are happening. This leads to disaster.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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No Love is Safe

"Sun writes graffiti on the clouds" - Your ability to personify is quite inspiring.-jenaro

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Gruelling Descent

The poet suggests that there is need to clean up certain things related to religion. Love is the medicine to clean up the maladies in today’s world. He says that though we created so many temples with love for god in turn god has not helped us by developing love between us, human beings.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Golden Birds Are Falling

Hello. A message to let you know I've dedicated a poem to you. It's titled 'Who are you?' and was created 3 days ago. I'd be curious to know what you think of it. Thanks.-Teytonon

The unusual structure of your phrases increases the evocative power of the poem.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Golden Birds Are Falling

Hello. A message to let you know I've dedicated a poem to you. It's titled 'Who are you?' and was created 3 days ago. I'd be curious to know what you think of it. Thanks.-Teytonon

The unusual structure of your phrases increases the evocative power of the poem.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Natural Tears

Both love and war are inherent in human nature. A man who thinks right will move on the path of Buddha. Realization of true nature of things equates pain and pleasure.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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A Pygmy God Bleeds

Although I dislike the title, I think the poem presents an excellent balance of specific imagery and abstract concepts.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights, unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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The Mystic Path

Romantic youth is exaggerated facts. As one moves on, when bitterness of life is faced love becomes less tasty. When one attains maturity all that is identified as self disappears.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Panther In Cage

Poetry relives the pain in its own way. Crafty poem.5****-M. Asim Nehal

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Our Resistance

Rise and Fall are cyclic. One who has control over his actions and completes his tasks in time wins. This struggle is everlasting.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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A Sea Of Moons

I really, REALLY!. like this poem. The voice speaking seems rather casual and conversational. yet the tone becomes eerie from the first few words. Is that word "pinned," in the first line, just a phrase, or to be taken literally? And what kind of watchman---a security guard, or a horrified witness to some strange goings-on? The person being addressed, who is pinned to a board to watch some sort of process, is watching as the nomenclature of pain changes, but the watcher is now not able to move a mouse (the computer device, or the roden?---the ambiguity increases the poem's effect). The fianl stanza shows us violet acquiring hands (mutations?), voices dimmed (is sound now perceived as light?), and the sky is darkening. Who or what the two small eyes belong to is left unstated, but, in reading this, I become sure that the eyes in the final line are not those of the watchman in the first and second lines.

I beiieve this poem is a brilliant demonstration of the ability to compress so much activity, and an implied sense of eerieness, in the fewest words and lines possible. A huge backstory is also implied; but not disclosed at all.

I applaud your accomplishment in this poem. It is one of the finest of its kind---a poem about mysteriously eerie occurences---that I have read in a long time.

Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights, unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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My Commitment

It seems like I like it, I just don’t think I’m clear on “brave robbery “ and where it should take me?-Bobby O

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Moods Killed

Present world is not kind to soft feelings like love. But it is difficult to point out who particularly is responsible for this. No system like religion is able to control this.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Wavelengths

Wavelengths are different for different people. But if they are too far apart, as in the case of aliens, no meaningful communication takes place.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Two opposites never meet and the same is applicable to human connections too, Satish jee. Emotional blackmails, misunderstandings, and lack of cooperation are the reasons for this. A well-written poem, indeed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Increasing Angst

Absolutely true.-James Michael

I got lost. Stratosphere laughs andThe moon to touch in inclement weather ? The imagery seems arbitrary and not connected . I’m sure it’s me as am still learning to stretch my mind to catch metaphors.-Bobby O

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Your God, My God

Although not entirely sure of what is means, I like this poem very much. It reminds me of some French symbolist poems.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Slaying Demons

The poet seems to hint at ‘Sati’, an earlier practice in which woman used to sit on the pyre of her husband and immolated herself. Subsequently people recognized her as a goddess.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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When Would You Come?

An infinite row of kisses waiting for the lake to scream...beautiful dear poet. A fantastic poem!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Flutey Silence

I feel a certain gravitas embodied by a well executed plan and my faith is well earned by your authors verite yet, humbly I must admit, earned accolades aside, my grasp of the last line is not exactly clear and hear by request you enhance my straining incite?-Bobby O

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Mode Of Slaughtering

A picture of hopelessness formed in my mind. There is a critical battle being fought here and the search for truth is ending in bleak places. Mercy seems to be losing out to coldness. The dismembering of deities presents a powerful picture. Well done.-DIVYA

I'm with Carl on this, it kind of took me into a flame lit tomb where secrets are carved into the stone and truth is a forgotten feeling. Nicely done-willweb

that was a nice little if bit of scary trip ( , put me in mind of tomb raiding. Especially liked this stanza in and of itself.
"Thinking of truth
was difficult. Your footsoles
develop blisters. No home
was in sight."
The pursuit of truth is difficult and the the steps taken to find it can be blistering and seemingly no home in which to rest seems on the horizon. Thanks for the post - carl

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Naked As Moon

Full *****-Rajan T Renganathan

Excellent poem, your title to the poem drew my attention.-Rajan T Renganathan

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In Short Life

If a poet’s pain is understood he is a fulfilled man. When in love all pain is forgotten.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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I Apologize

Who will touch my poverty? Your prudent inquisition needs serious introspection dear poet.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Let Me Say

Powerfully painful. Emotive write. The big questions always leave you prayerful. Thank you for composing. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SSmoothie

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Describing Life

Life is a series of experiences, some unique, some ordinary. Living a life of empathy and love is divine.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Rebelling in Dreams

When one identifies with the whole, bad at any place hurts. Searching for remedy at a wrong place is of no use. Ignorance/ darkness is about engulf the world. When one can’t do anything there wil be rebellion in dreams only.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When The Rains Stop

To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative phrase and tapping into metaphors without bending to cliche’-Bobby O

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Throw Something at Twilight

Everybody repeats what he heard about truth or speaks with his own creative imagination about the Unknown. But twilight is the half truth one understands.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Don't Inhale the Gas

Inhaling gas is deadly. Humanist approach towards transgender is requested for. Though trees fall in the storm, blades of grass stand as they do in the Sun.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakurr, Nellore

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Myth Of Golden Love

This is a beautiful poem.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Light Does not Matter

For a broken heart all things look dark. In spite of moonlight only the fireflies attract attention. To light the world man should become a torch. For one in ignorance suffering brings enlightenment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Before Sleeping Pills

One prepares oneself to be remembered after death. Beauty in life is missed by giving importance to insignificant rituals.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Fall and Death

When thought, speech and deed are similar there is no difference between inside and outside. That is the true way to live. Without that temples and gods are of no avail.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Ceremony of Darknes

When one does not understand there is irritation and anger. Separated lovers will experience invisible pain. The buzzing of cricket appears to be a more sorrowful sound.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Go Back In Wombs

Your flesh is disappearing to expose the bones of our culture....meaningful expression dear poet.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Acoustics

People are insensitive to things. In a way they are with the evil doers. Consequently those who can guide are also disappointed to see the innocent not being able to enjoy even important things.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why You Say, I Am A God

A wonderful poem dear poet.... I like it-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Revolutionary

Abundance gave only more pain and fear. Conscience makes us feel guilty. Attachment makes us suffer. Be a revolutionary to free yourself from attachment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why You Say, I am a God

My home is lost in
you, without teaching. The
school is closed. It gives relief.

The point of view
disappears. The eternity of one
moment, will bring the god to tears.

Everyday I feel pain.
The cleanliness of mind will
give you freedom to dig a black hole.

Satish Verma

Do Not Throw The Moon

The language and the imagery in this poem are incredibly powerful.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Pain Always Moves

Modern life has become hollow without necessary emotion even in prayer. You carry consequences of your actions beyond death. A nice poem with meaningful imagery.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Killing Wolves

Profound verse. Raises the real questions, which have no answers…-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Why do We Go Insane?

One must think of life if we don’t want to go insane.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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See You Again

Beautiful poetry. Very nicely written. Thanks Sir.-Anil Kumar Panda

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Unlocking Grief

Congrats for pod.-Nabakishore Dash

A powerful piece, as always. The implosion of humanity is on an exploding range.-Kesav Venkat Easwaran

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What Limitations?

Poets and poetry have no limitations as they reflect multilayered life. In the name of poetry many write what can’t touch the threshold of poetry.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Crucifixion

I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you have to explain what you mean.Words are missing.-David Wakeling

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This is Sophisticated

This is too sophisticated to comment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Defining Equation

I read this poem several times and saw more, I think, of what you meant to communicate with each reading. However, I don't think I grasped the full meaning. This does not by any means diminish the power and literary skill of your work. The great poet Wallace Stevens wrote many such somewhat obscure poems, even more so than this, and is yet acclaimed to be one of the 20th century's best.Keep up the good work.
If you get a chance, read Stevens' "Anecdote Of The Jar" or "Sunday Morning"-charles69

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Motivated by Hate

Hate is a destroyer. It destroys more who has it in them.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Impeccable

I love the images that each stanza produced for me. Thanks for them.-Mr. Darcy

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Trekking

The poem flowed well. I only wish it was longer.-Kips

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My Metaphysics

you have NEVER studied metaphysics... lol... but Sisyphus... now there's a beautiful tragic mythical figure... of that, we can agree.-bohemian

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Sharing My Agony

Reality and fantasy may cover up truth that violence is continuing in the streets where men behave like wild animals. Kind intervention alone can sit right things.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Translated from Love

What it was not, the answer
to an everlasting question.
Where are we going?
A twisted answer for love .
Nicely penned-Jasmeen Kour, Jammu

Consciousness about the goal is inevitable. In this mundane world songs of the heart are discounted. But bonds between persons are weakened.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Impeccable

I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no idea what it is about.-David Wakeling

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The Virtual Pain

Something bad happens somewhere but the pain is felt virtually by a thinker who is straight forward.- Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Eternal Sufferings

Suffering of man for some reason or other is eternal. A White rose, Ukrainian wants to be Pink, a European. Big foot, Russia intervenes. There is no fear of God while in war.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unheard The Blood Flow

Yes, indeed love heals wounds!-Ramesh T A

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No Love is Safe

Everyone is trying to destroy nature, as if it is his own property, unmindful of the consequences. Partition of love is separating yourself from the whole. i.e. being selfish.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Bronze Meanings

A person who loves truly does not hate and will face any trouble for his love. A wise man tries to know about himself. In this world one is s guest and nothing belongs to him.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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What You Didn't Say

Yes, Satish Verma…waiting for the Angels!
As always, exceptional writing.-Laura

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Do Not Favour

People die in war. Warriors wear masks to look soft. Those who can pacify wait till the right moment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Sounds Of Silence

"To live to the edge of no return..."
Mighty powerful opening, Satish. Makes one take inventory of their life.-Kelly Scheppers

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Carbon Copy

One of your most powerful. At least to me.-lyrycsyntyme

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All Mercury, All Bare

With a lot of struggle we wade through the ills of life though we continue to dream of better things. There are many to be reborn as worms after the day of Judgement.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Who Was Blessed

Everybody is in pain which is inevitable at sometime or other in life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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My Frescoes

Analysis of one’s own thoughts and feelings makes one understand oneself and the world.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When I Am Understanding Myself

The crux of the issue is, we, none of us, understand ourselves. We try. Yes, we do try! People from eons ago tried. But we fail, miserably-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Hi Satish, the question is NOT " Why life ends? " for, everything that has a beginning has to have an end. The question, barely, is why at all there IS life? Why at all a human being? Why did we eat The Magic Mushroom?-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Sonic Dark

The verbal beauty of this poem cannot be overstated. It resonates off the screen---so much significance compressed into so few lines. This is one of the best poems I have read in a long, long time.

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Spirit Rises

World is full of evil and good is hiding somewhere unseen. Reasoning is blunted. Search is on for light and comfort.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Of All Luxuries

"You become your best friend "…. The philosophy of Bhagwat Gita… good-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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The Candle Breaks

Candle an item used in prayer, melts down. This melting and the title suggest that good is endangered. Exploding Himalayas may be a reference to Kargil war.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unborn Visions

Vicious nature makes us move away from each other. We are all born from the same ash which we became in our previous birth. There are eternal truths for all humanity for all times in a book that is regarded as the world of God.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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ow Big Idea Comes?

Brilliant poetry. " The moths are ready to become fumes.." Man knowingly commits sins and defies His Mandates… that attracts the inevitable. "Who kills the god? " Is a moot question. Top-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Knock on my Door

Poet is a sensitive being. He perceives what other do not. He nay delve the depths of truth but people can see only what he does.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Sit Beside Me

Beautifully inked. Enjoyed reading.-Anil Kumar Panda

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For a Perfect Life

In spite of several constraints and pain some people stand for their principles thogh others quit the true course of action.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unwrap the Moons

great job! i loved when you said "i was drinking the sun. who will bring water?"-skylia

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The poet is expressing his anguish that the suffering of people is without a remedy. Poets who are not socially conscious write about pleasant nothings and move on closing their eyes to the realities of the world.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Hope Lives

Preventing change will remain a blot. When the other person is ignored apathy develops. Different people will fall in line and there is hope for understanding. A poem expressing hope for a happy life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Your Mythology

There are some practices which are against human values.
All such things are poisonous to our well being.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Becoming You

Becoming you is possible in deep love. But there are many slips and one has to move wisely.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Stay for a Stranger

When homes are destroyed and become roofless moon comes to congratulate your pain. Nice description of war torn area.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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What Is The Truthfulness?

Masterful stroke, dear poet.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Standing In Place

I like the rich imagery used in this poem. The fidelity of the moon in a galaxy of sins, is such a wonderfully strong -image!-Aufie Zophy

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Why This Madness

Love is the ultimate paradox.-lyrycsyntyme

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MY MAP BURNS

You look like the President of USA Mr Joe Biden!-venkataraman M.V.

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Pain to Pain

In the name of God wilderness in creativity is checked. But it continues and now the edifice of faith is crumbling.-
Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Dear Sir,
A lovely poem indeed.
You look like the President of USA, Mr Joe Biden!-M V Venkataraman, Chennai

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Every Man is a Word

If a man cannot overcome his problems or worries there will not be any happiness in his life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Solve This Enigma

" I was not born as I am"… no one is. Time corrupts our lives. Fantastic poem. Top score.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Sorry, I can't solve it. I can't even understand it.-Cowboy Ron Williams

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When Ocean Burns

Love can survive in a world without crime. Different isms create strife and destroy love and peace. The poet thinks that religion too kills love. But the truth is it gives meaning to life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Who Will Never Die?

Your images are so subtle but the impressions leave me dwelling into it for moments. This is what poetry's best effect is.-Savita Tyagi

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The Influence of Unknowing

Some of the traditional things are outdated. They should be abandoned and though risky. new things should be tried and adopted.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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My Pain Unfolds Tonight

For a sensitive thinker the world gives a lot of pain which is difficult to describe. Quarrels based on faith are more destructive. Those who think of the welfare of all will be liked by some and eventually by all.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Don't Tell The Truth

I am not criticizing, but tell the fact,
I can't understand any of his poems,
As my small mind can never grasp it,
I blame my little brain, not his poems!-mvvenkataraman

Nice!-BoxMyHeart

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Crossing Death Zone

(is this that same wasteland of Eliot's divorce
mirroring our world of warmongering woes
inking that personal, in that poetic universal...?)
Happy New Year!-L. B. Mek

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Deep Echoes

"I do not know how you turn roses pink"-Rob Lamberton

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Sadness was Punished

Woah.. you're talented- f4f?-doom_shroom

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Truth of All Pains

In spite of facing hardship there is still light at the end of the tunnel (hope). When the governance is vulnerable it is natural that the house will perish. There is gradual deterioration in the situation. As usual the poet might be referring to war on Ukraine.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Match the Zero

One can praise someone as an angel even if it is untrue. You can create giants with you your imagination. The realities of the wakeful world may also make you feel like a king.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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