What You Didn't Say

Yes, Satish Verma…waiting for the Angels!
As always, exceptional writing.-Laura

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Do Not Favour

People die in war. Warriors wear masks to look soft. Those who can pacify wait till the right moment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Sounds Of Silence

"To live to the edge of no return..."
Mighty powerful opening, Satish. Makes one take inventory of their life.-Kelly Scheppers

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Carbon Copy

One of your most powerful. At least to me.-lyrycsyntyme

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All Mercury, All Bare

With a lot of struggle we wade through the ills of life though we continue to dream of better things. There are many to be reborn as worms after the day of Judgement.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Who Was Blessed

Everybody is in pain which is inevitable at sometime or other in life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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My Frescoes

Analysis of one’s own thoughts and feelings makes one understand oneself and the world.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When I Am Understanding Myself

The crux of the issue is, we, none of us, understand ourselves. We try. Yes, we do try! People from eons ago tried. But we fail, miserably-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Hi Satish, the question is NOT " Why life ends? " for, everything that has a beginning has to have an end. The question, barely, is why at all there IS life? Why at all a human being? Why did we eat The Magic Mushroom?-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Sonic Dark

The verbal beauty of this poem cannot be overstated. It resonates off the screen---so much significance compressed into so few lines. This is one of the best poems I have read in a long, long time.

Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward


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Spirit Rises

World is full of evil and good is hiding somewhere unseen. Reasoning is blunted. Search is on for light and comfort.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Of All Luxuries

"You become your best friend "…. The philosophy of Bhagwat Gita… good-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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The Candle Breaks

Candle an item used in prayer, melts down. This melting and the title suggest that good is endangered. Exploding Himalayas may be a reference to Kargil war.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unborn Visions

Vicious nature makes us move away from each other. We are all born from the same ash which we became in our previous birth. There are eternal truths for all humanity for all times in a book that is regarded as the world of God.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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ow Big Idea Comes?

Brilliant poetry. " The moths are ready to become fumes.." Man knowingly commits sins and defies His Mandates… that attracts the inevitable. "Who kills the god? " Is a moot question. Top-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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Knock on my Door

Poet is a sensitive being. He perceives what other do not. He nay delve the depths of truth but people can see only what he does.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Sit Beside Me

Beautifully inked. Enjoyed reading.-Anil Kumar Panda

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For a Perfect Life

In spite of several constraints and pain some people stand for their principles thogh others quit the true course of action.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Unwrap the Moons

great job! i loved when you said "i was drinking the sun. who will bring water?"-skylia

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The poet is expressing his anguish that the suffering of people is without a remedy. Poets who are not socially conscious write about pleasant nothings and move on closing their eyes to the realities of the world.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Hope Lives

Preventing change will remain a blot. When the other person is ignored apathy develops. Different people will fall in line and there is hope for understanding. A poem expressing hope for a happy life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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