Carol Brown

Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Satish. Sometimes I have to read more then once to get my brain cells rotating.Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Carol Brown

I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Satish.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

James Marshall Goff

Hi Satish....your fine poem can translate to many cultures with truth....I can see this to represent the plight of the Northern Plains "Sioux Nation" Native Americans who were rounded-up after the (so-called by the pale-faces) 'Sioux Uprising' and hung in Mankato towards the end of the 19th. Century....Jim

James Marshall Goff

there is a place on the shores of Lake Superior in Minnesota called 'Split-Rock-Lighthouse' where I have seen such a fog roll right over me & my Daughters this last summer!...nice!....lines 3 and your last line are among my favorites in this amazing poem!...jim

Priyanka Bhowmick

HOMECOMING
wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.

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Sara Lokken, Marty Owens

MOODS

Sara Lokken :Beautiful, agonizing....this must be your inner child. -Sara

Marty Owens :Nice...Enjoyed....Marty

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Catrina Heart

SECRET WAKE
Savage

Vultures and tigers have eaten the flesh
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun

Sanitizing

Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence

Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings


Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT

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Nikunj Sharma

SUN’S INHERITANCE
very thoughtful and sensitive poem, yes the world needs a burnout sun , not the cold fading moon that falls on many stars. good write.

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paul claxton

Prozac

different,but so good,u have a good collection of poems,interesting

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Sandra Martyres

SERENE REVENGE
This poem has so much philosophical depth to it - a provocative and thought provoking piece Satish...brilliant write thanks for sharing..10+++


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Kristin Reynolds

ANNIVERSARY
That was a very deep read, full of truth. The first 2 stanzas I understand very well - machine had failed me...3rd eye of the sun...key's chasing unbroken latches...yup...gotcha - awesome. Blessings, Kristin

Carol Brown - Satish Verma

Hi Satish....your fine poem can translate to many cultures with truth....I can see this to represent the plight of the Northern Plains "Sioux Nation" Native Americans who were rounded-up after the (so-called by the pale-faces) 'Sioux Uprising' and hung in Mankato towards the end of the 19th. Century....Jim

Martin Owens, Carolyn Devonshire

I enjoyed reading this..very nice...Marty

Great poem filled with unique and clever images. I especially like the way you describe the mushrooms popping up and wearing "white caps to see the game." Also, there is much truth in the way books can open "a museum" to the reader. Well done, Satish! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Lovely poem, Verma. I especially enjoyed the third stanza. Hugs, Donna