Peter Schlosser

BOLD STEP
Your poetry always gives pause to ponder. Nicely done.

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Edwin Hurdle

IN SLEEP
A well written piece.take care.Excellent work


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K.K.Srivastava, New Delhi

Trembling
Satish, this is a real masterpiece. Excellent imagery and presentation. But very difficult to comprehend. Mathew Arnold once remarked, "For having superior poets, we should have superior audience." Nay, I don't claim to be a superior audience. I only want to suggest you also send your poems to Sahitya Akedemi's Indian Literature to make these available to larger readership. Best Wishes,

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K. Subapriya, Chennai, Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

Beast and lovers

Very matured. Need much knowledge to understand.
K. Subapriya, Chennai

To be frank with you, Satish, I do not understand each line of the poem, but I admire its each line. You have written with a great style. The concluding stanza is too good. Best regards,
Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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Catrina 'CT' Heart

WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER
The grief of the scarred face,
in a serious midnight syndrome of
invisible slit throat in a long journey manifested
above the waves. Tree was calling again
for immoralism of flowers, quashing
his life.
------
splendid concrete poetry...like half forgotten dreams and grief...lovely! ! !

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Catrina Heart

WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER
The grief of the scarred face,
in a serious midnight syndrome of
invisible slit throat in a long journey manifested
above the waves. Tree was calling again
for immoralism of flowers, quashing
his life.
------
splendid concrete poetry...like half forgotten dreams and grief...lovely! ! !


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Goldy Locks

A HOME IN MY HOME
i just love your sentence juxtapositioning. I think it's surreal.

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Obed Dela Cruz

CHRONICITY
very well narrated.....

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Catrina 'CT' Heart

A LONE WARRIOR
That was that, of hollowness of globes
and golden peacocks. A seed of mildew
implants a kiss on the nakedness of greed.
How far the want will go in dark
------
brilliance in crafting..brilliance in formulating...awesome! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury

A LONE WARRIOR
very nice poem, I wish we can all learn from this.

see my new poems too.

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Catrina Heart

A LONE WARRIOR
That was that, of hollowness of globes
and golden peacocks. A seed of mildew
implants a kiss on the nakedness of greed.
How far the want will go in dark
------
brilliance in crafting..brilliance in formulating...awesome! ! !

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Jennifer Ottinger

A LONE WARRIOR
This is beautiful description you have there, and it's very interesting. I like it a lot. ^_^

Please read some of my poems.


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Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad, K. K. Srivastava, New Delhi

Fangs

Satish, I like your composition and some of the images are simply beautiful. But honestly I fail to connect he, you and I. Will you please give some hints? Best regards,
Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad


Satish, your poems are serious stuff. I enjoy these. I also believe in writing serious stuff. It seems, nowadays, there are very few takers for serious poetry. we should not mind it. Regards
K. K. Srivastava, New Delhi

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Christine Alwin

DEATH OF ABSENCE
Had to read this twice...heartfelt and so powerfully demonstrated
Christine
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AngelGodNeverLoved

Leaves

I am speechless this poem was amazing!

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