Yes
A stimulating ode to humanity. Pathos and empathy well woven into a splendid poetry. Warm Regards,
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Monday, January 11, 2010
Sunday, January 10, 2010
Brad Stahoski, Carol Brown, Sara Michael Lokken
A FAMILY DUST
Brad Stahoski : Wonderful sexual imagery here. "Thighs of a tulip valley"...Very nice string of words.
Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Brad Stahoski : Wonderful sexual imagery here. "Thighs of a tulip valley"...Very nice string of words.
Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Saturday, January 9, 2010
Dr Pooja G Bhuyar, Bijapur
One silver bowl
The last paragraph is the best, very nicely woven in words. Best wishes.
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The last paragraph is the best, very nicely woven in words. Best wishes.
http://www.museindia.com
Friday, January 8, 2010
Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi, Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Secrets of my love
Love to you two lovely people. Thanks, Seshu and Jasneet. Regards always,
Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Beautiful...Each word is penned with compassion. Splendid indeed. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing. Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
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Love to you two lovely people. Thanks, Seshu and Jasneet. Regards always,
Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Beautiful...Each word is penned with compassion. Splendid indeed. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing. Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
http://www.museindia.com
Phed
Helmeted Version
Delicious use of words!
"The transliteration of a famished lake " beautiful!
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Delicious use of words!
"The transliteration of a famished lake " beautiful!
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Thursday, January 7, 2010
Sara Kendrick, Sara Michael Lokken
UNENDING
Sara Michael Lokken : I love you, Satish Verma.
Sara Kendrick : The use of the flowers here moon flower, morning glory, and rose brings this write to life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Sara Michael Lokken : I love you, Satish Verma.
Sara Kendrick : The use of the flowers here moon flower, morning glory, and rose brings this write to life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Wednesday, January 6, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken, Carol Brown
GOD OF BLESSINGS
Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Satish. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : He knows what you did- and He forgives you. The water didn't drown the body, I did. You know who is speaking. It's not reincarnation. Jesus is my God. I now pass on my gifts to you.
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Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Satish. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : He knows what you did- and He forgives you. The water didn't drown the body, I did. You know who is speaking. It's not reincarnation. Jesus is my God. I now pass on my gifts to you.
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Tuesday, January 5, 2010
Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Dark prison
What a terrible experience! But this experience leads to the goal and always light will be there, affter this bitter experience. Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta
Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
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What a terrible experience! But this experience leads to the goal and always light will be there, affter this bitter experience. Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta
Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
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Monday, January 4, 2010
Kimberly Hilliker, Sara Michael Lokken
ONE RUNAWAY RELIGION
Sara Michael Lokken : "Tie the thread to the moon" means a return of something... and I love "dark blood of a white soul"- which means, there is a good person behind the "adolescent crime" even though innocence has died. That is what I am getting
Kimberly Hilliker : Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Sara Michael Lokken : "Tie the thread to the moon" means a return of something... and I love "dark blood of a white soul"- which means, there is a good person behind the "adolescent crime" even though innocence has died. That is what I am getting
Kimberly Hilliker : Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Sunday, January 3, 2010
Saturday, January 2, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken
A STAR PLUNGES
This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
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This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
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Sara Kendrick,Sara Lokken
A STAR PLUNGES
Sara Lokken : This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write in this one. Sara
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Sara Lokken : This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write in this one. Sara
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Friday, January 1, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken, Andrea Fischer, Carol Brown
UNENDING
Carol Brown : ~~Satish~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
Andrea Fischer : A beautiful poem and beautiful contrasts moon flowers/morning glory, singing dark Well done
Sara Michael Lokken : You're remembering something beautiful..."singing dark"- what a gentle contradiction and metaphor. -Sara
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Carol Brown : ~~Satish~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
Andrea Fischer : A beautiful poem and beautiful contrasts moon flowers/morning glory, singing dark Well done
Sara Michael Lokken : You're remembering something beautiful..."singing dark"- what a gentle contradiction and metaphor. -Sara
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