CUP OF ELIXIR

Great poem, with words communicating directly to the spirit itself. Thanks Satish, for I was really moved by your sad reflection of humanity's present nature, in contrast to the sound past...


Dowell Oba, Nigeria

Dimensions

Satish, In your poem you have made great statements. Grief brings psoriasis, the eternal itch and restlessness.... and  'to protect the purity of tongue, silence was not a golden word...' Kudos.

Ch J Satyananda Kumar, Visakhapatnam

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DIVINITY WITHOUT

Very interesting writing today Satish. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol Brown

Wow, quite the image you have here my friend... Excellent word-play... Good work....:JP] Jared Pickett

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THE HOLY MAN

Beautiful word-play.. Powerful and thought provoking.... Keep em comin' my friend....:JP]

Jared Pickett

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BLACK WALLS

Marvelous write. The subtle journey from white to black.

From inner peace to the dark dungeons that creep up on a unguarded soul.
Very intelligent penn.-Andy Turner

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THIN VEIL

Carol Brown
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Satish. Love, Carol

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REPEATING HISTORY

Interesting write.

The last stanza reminds me of our Viking ancestors, who'd put a body on a raft then when it was out on the river take aim with a arrow alight and ignite the raft. - Andy Turner


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A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

L'nass Shango

Date: 2/7/2010 10:29:00 AM

This is truly a great poem and deserves to be featured. Reading this poem make me believe that there is still poetry left in the world. Satish, this is your immortal verse, it has open the annals of history to you as an English poet. Well done, my sage friend.

john freeman

Date: 2/6/2010 11:30:00 AM

ABC's of an awesome featured presentation here Satish. Congratulation on a fine feature. Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher

Date: 2/2/2010 11:49:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

James Fraser

Date: 2/1/2010 1:52:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Gary La Buda

Date: 2/1/2010 10:26:00 AM

Satish, congratulations on your feature this week. Always, Gary La Buda

Ann Rich

Date: 2/1/2010 5:42:00 AM

Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Brown

Date: 2/1/2010 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Satish. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Paula Swanson

Date: 1/31/2010 8:30:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured this week. Love this poem

Karen O'Leary

Date: 1/31/2010 5:22:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. The emtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/31/2010 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations Satish, on having your very interesting poem featured this week. I like the way you called it an ABC poem and then in the last stanza said, "Do no give it to me, my award." Each word entices the mind and seems to have an underlying depth... saturated with some kind of sorrow. I'm not sure what. But the poetry is very good. Keep writing. Lovingly,

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Obed Dela Cruz

CLOUDS AND ROADS
wow... this one is really poetic... i can see it!

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SUICIDES

You have to be really down and out to comit suicide, thoughts have to be avidly off. I do like this poetry though.- Lois Christensen

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Balachandhran.S, Chennai

Revocation

Hello Satish, I found your poem to be very cryptic and therefore fascinating. The third paragraph starting - Green goes the sea by full moon... - truly is one to savour. In the second paragraph did you want to use 'of' instead of 'off'? Good piece. Keep going. Thanks,

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Annorlunda

Charity
A very good poem. I liked the brevity of it, it gave the poem more 'punch'. This was my favourite bit:

'Dying was an appropriate thing
a festival of freedom for veils,
to leave you alone with your morality.'

A fantastic bit of description there.

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Carol Brown, Scarlett Anderson

GREEN PASTURES

Carol Brown : It has been a pleasure to read your awesome poem today Satish. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Scarlett Anderson :Whoa this is very profound. I look forward to reading more of your material. Have a great day! Scarlett

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Janette Fisher

A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen, Karen O'Leary, Paula Swanson, Carol Brown

A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

James Fraser : Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Gary La Buda : Satish, congratulations on your feature this week. Always, Gary La Buda

Ann Rich : Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Brown : Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Satish. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Paula Swanson : Congratulations on being featured this week. Love this poem

Karen O'Leary : Good use of imagery for a creative view. The emtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Congratulations Satish, on having your very interesting poem featured this week. I like the way you called it an ABC poem and then in the last stanza said, "Do no give it to me, my award." Each word entices the mind and seems to have an underlying depth... saturated with some kind of sorrow. I'm not sure what. But the poetry is very good. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

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