INWARD JOURNEY

You did excellently well my friend am loving it here luv-kelechi emeaba

riveting offering that runs deep with beguiling metaphors, satish... all the best to you.. warmes,- nette onclaud

How very sad for you. Good luck with your work it is good and very colorful.- marymkilker marymkilke

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RENAISSANCE

Satish,
for me, great lines -
“The petrol burns with hate”

“The babies flick like tender candles
inside the saints.”- Gion Gion

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FAITHFUL

Marcia Schechinger	Satish I read and reread you poems and am always astounded at the hidden meanings in every word chosen. The time, the place, the religous beliefs, the hatred that brings forth more hatred. Here within your works I delve to see the states of war held within some human flesh, and I experience emotional pain for all those who suffered/suffer at the hands of war and mutilation. Thank you for always giving us such fine poetic work, Marcia :)	USA	11/7/2010 9:07:45 AM
Westly Shaw	Intresting! different, not more so or less so just different.	USA	11/7/2010 12:54:23 AM
Cynthia Baldwin	I LOVE this!! One of those rare pieces that puts your senses on overdrive - I could feel reality shift a little. Amazing work!!!	USA	11/6/2010 9:25:43 PM

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ANCHORAGE

Outstanding writing here..-sanctus

This is a gorgeous write! Sometimes you are left speechless as I am here- Thank you Satish, Abby- Thundering Waltz

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UNABUSED

And like a tres jolie femme, a floral as delicate as the Daisy must ne're be used, abused or sole-shoed !Thus on paper of rice we shall sojourn 'tween the dew drops, yes?...-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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TERROR TRAIL

Satish this particular piece really clutches the heart, as your talent in writing takes the reader from our simple world into a world of Holocaustal thinking, and we cry for the earth and plead for injustice to stop that all might have a day in the sun. Thank you Satish, I see a bit of technique change in your work, it reads very well. I like it :)- Marcia Schechinger


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AN ACID RAIN

funny in a way...well done!-Doris Culverhouse

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STUPIDITY

The ideas are well conceived. I really like the poem. Please read my poem 'I am not a poet' and have your say.- Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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DON’T THROW THE BOMB

Yeah, of course. The bombs that are being showed should be stopped otherwise we'll have to dig out only dead bodies. War is not a solution but a problem itself. Good poem- Mohammad Muzzammil (10/28/2010 10:18:00 AM)


Yeah, bomb throwing should be stopped and both parties should come on talking table. Because war is not a solution but a problem itself. Your poem is praiseworthy. Read my poem A CHILD'S DREAM that presents the riot scene in a dramatical way.- Mohammad Muzzammil (10/28/2010 10:23:00 AM)


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WOUNDED DANCE

A great poem too difficult to understand-regards- JVL NARASIMHA RAO


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A DAY OF COUNTING

Thanks for sharing!- Westly Shaw, USA


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PUZZLES

Nice!-Westly Shaw, USA


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INDOORS

Satish another wonderful metaphorical verse where the reader is caught in your words, "...ask some uncomfortable questions. I enter the eye of the wound...". Hopefully one day your talent will be heard by all, that the world might find peace and more joy. Thank you so very much for sharing. :)-Marcia Schechinger


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SOFTNESS

I enjoyed this poem very much. Joe - thank you- Byronic


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BEAUTY

Satish,
I read it first on my mobile and was intrigued with this poem.
Not you usual topic Beauty, on the face of it.
The re-working of the moon and sun images is clever.
These lines I like a lot -
” Amorphic I would not find the music

of words translated into a kiss”,
Gion

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