ONE RUNAWAY RELIGION

This sounds sort of like somthing William S. Burroughs would have written: With impacts of images and with disconnected meanings loosely tied together. Yet this exceeds Burroughs with a Blake brightness. Even the first lines: "Ignite the barren clay, I need some rare elements to tie a thread to the moon." What, really, does this mean? What can it mean? It seems really to have no definite meaning. Yet it is a mannificent sentence. Because it has no real definite meaning, it is capable of many meanings, supplied by the imagination of the reader who is struck by the bright power of the phrasing, and the very striking image. // I like this poem. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet


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MEANINGLESS

Thank you for sharing your Awesome poetry Satish. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love- Carol Brown

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A TRUE DECEPTION

Satish your remarkable word usage to help the reader feel some of the emotions that are left in the spirit, after such inhumanity of war and loss is remarkable. I keep wanting to say 'I'm sorry', but then that isn't enough, we need to get that Peace going Now so as there is never a need to apologize to all who suffered and to all who must bear the memories. Thank you Satish for your constance in the fight for Peace!- Marcia Schechinger

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DISCLAIMER

Are you employing this "DISCLAIMER" because the title serendipitously permeated your Third-Eye while penning the above work... or because this is the 1st post in the past week that you haven't mentioned the planet, MOON, and by the time you realized your obvious literary "err"... you didn't have the time to go back & toss in the Lunar lamp, and so instead, you decided to opt-out of any astronomical accountablity via a "DISCLAIMER" ?!!!!!!LOL!- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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WORDLESS SILENCE

Sir: I get so much from your writes. I truly enjoy your daily writes. - Lady Dragonwyck

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GOD OF BLESSINGS

Some potent phrasing in here Satish - - I love that "moon-scented " walk and the "affectionate kill of lies" - your poetry never disappoints. A fine piece and a compelling read.-Fay Slimm


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Conferred guilty

Every poem you write is unusual and unique, where do you get inspiration from?With regards- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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TANTALUS

Satish an excellent title and always every line a mixture of the past and personal emotions, "...A future has been tied to my past...". The last stanza was excellent, your use of metaphors to display the horrors of war and the hauntings there after, always show us your genius as a writer. Thank you Satish, I am privileged to read your work.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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UNDERSCORING

Diction makes the spirit high. We the reader as if feel the pronunciation o the poet. Nice. As if the poet talking with a clear voice. Synchronization of word choice, thoughts and expression... balanced. "Shades of lies haunt, in flames of faith."- Pranab k chakraborty


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THE PENULTIMATE DILEMMA

Wow, I mean really wow. This is great, how you bring yourself into the world.-Gerard Gauthier

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FOOD WAS LEFT ON THE PLATE

This is one of those deep, deep writes that has certain meanings, which elude me for now...and that is a good thing, requiring me to think, think, think. Thanks for the challenge. -D Johnson

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BLAZING TRAIL

"They swim like tadpoles. Thoughts!"-  George MacLean Akurunwa

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DENUDING

Goodness!!- She Whispers

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HAPPENINGS

such a deep poetry.. beautifully penned, sir..- smrityshakti


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Religion

Awesome write Mr. Verma. The images are superb. Loved it.- Tahera Mannan, Nagpur

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