THE GOODBYE

a sad poem, but lovely. Hugs, :)-  Catie Lindsey

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WOUNDED FLIGHT

I am collecting the words to weave a phrase.. And Barren trees overhear the wailing winds.. Lovely words and imagery, Thank you for sharing : )- Brenda Victoria Northeast

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VICTORY OF FALL

Such troubled times, but then again, from the beginning of time there has always been the struggle between good and evil. "...comatose truth was listening to lies"- LightH2O

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BRINGING DOWN

indeed- Michael Firewalker

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BLEEDING DAY

I just love the imagery - - the strong use of adjectives so much in evidence. Beautiful words in abstract form-Alistair Muir

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A SICK UNCERTAINTY

"The hypocrisy and violence will wolk side by side." well written poem from the heart of a sensitive soul.- LightH2O

Up to interpretation, I thought of politicians spreading lies and the masses eating it up, many too tired to fight.-Yarbrough

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GESTURES

Great poem, really like it. A great write.-Dave Walker

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STONE CATCHERS

so interesting
are these 4 verses stand alone or connected
I find your writing mysterious and beautiful-A PAX

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POURING

may dawn continue to tread lightly
as you awaken us all
to a stark fresh image of morning
lamenting want in the land of plenty
nice to read you in peak form again, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle

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PRIZEFIGHT

Love that last stanza, specially the line; "The Essence of pain" very much enjoyed write.- LightH2O

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PAIN OF ELEGY

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TERROR TRAIL

Your use of language is just sublime -- so much texture and elegance. A great write and marvellous read thank you- omment By: Alistair Muir 

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Death In Exile

a great poem, liked it.- Dave Walker

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Unstitching

Really like this. enjoyed reading it. a great poem. may i invite you to read my new poem called, reincarnation.- Dave Walker

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SHAMEFUL

S.V.- Your poem intrigues me, yet i don't understand it much. In S3, why wax, meaning the moon? In S5, are the sins of love, the sins of the father AND the sins of children? Is love a sin? If you please...- Goode Guy

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