THE OTHER SMILE

who is listening does not matter as what is said is of the self-  leafsailor

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THE SAME KIND

My friend ,words of this world make dark poems of beauty-  leafsailor

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SANTHARA *

Is it “Paryushana? The period of Santhahara is fixed. However in Paryushana the period is up to his last breath. -Puttu Kulkarni, Hegde-Kumta

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One anthos

Life itself is an incessant war. We are only bonsai who crave for sky-rocketing growth. And your words flare to noon glare.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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PRIDE OF VALLEY

very nice..-  Elliott Bowe

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NAKEDNESS

Nice rhythm and flow in the delightful verse my friend.. Your words are so powerful and I am intrigued every time I read.. Well done my friend!!.-  Jared Pickett

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AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

Your chosen images and general tone accurately paints a portrait of this all to common tragedy ... somewhere a killer is hailed as a hero -  york2frisco

pushing the like button--dark but illuminating-  spysgrandson

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RAGING SPRING

''Was it a hymn to drink
the religion of rage?
The men sitting in the glass vases
worshiping the rising sun in awe
with folded hands. ''

Very good saying, though the poem is full of wisdom...........................-  Wahab Abdul

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STARDUST

This made me think of Clash of the Titans!! With the gods and the wrath.. What a great poem this was Verma.. I have so missed your creativity my friend, you will see my name in you comment box more often now.. Good to see you again my friend....-  Jared Pickett

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LOVING A STREET

Morning, Sir. I like this write and especially the last paragraph. Hope your Day is going beautifully.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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STUNNED

salted dynasty can not be revived,
still hold with it and amused,
brainless generations of
great grandpa, a grandma,
a father not enough,
do we need a grand son,
to continue with the tradition,
another hundred years?
Don't come back home,
to rest and relax,
wake up the sleeping people,
to make up our country.-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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JUST BEAUTY

I definitely saw the beauty in this poem my friend.. Well done, very vivid and well written.-  Jared Pickett

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NO-MANS-LAND

Very well written, like it Satish. -  Anne Lise Andresen

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BROKEN DAM

Magnificent write, exquisite imagery.-  Mister Kite

A passionate verse...Teary! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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PUSSYFOOT

The absurdity of it all...such is life at one of it's many angles.-  LightH2O

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