Wednesday, August 15, 2012
Monday, August 13, 2012
ANSWERED...
It is as if you've become one with our mother Earth.-
LightH2O
I am here to read these words- leafsailor
I am here to read these words- leafsailor
Sunday, August 12, 2012
THE HYPHENATING
"The past presents a missing link..." and we all must have made wrong turns in the past, led or deceived by some "priest" but awareness and questions lead us finally to the truth we seek - if we seek it hard enough. I like this poem for its thought-provoking content, deep humanistic relevance, and challenge of the end lines.-
Cynthia
There are always two ways we can go by, and not all are lucky enough to be shown the right path.. An interesting in that sense.. thanks for sharing Sir..- Prashant Shaurya
Very interesting poem to read...about indecision?- Some Girl
There are always two ways we can go by, and not all are lucky enough to be shown the right path.. An interesting in that sense.. thanks for sharing Sir..- Prashant Shaurya
Very interesting poem to read...about indecision?- Some Girl
Falling Crumbs
Reminded me Spanish artist Salvador Dali. If you were a bit more explicit, readers will appreciate a little more. You kept it a bit hazy when you said "bent backward to wet the floor of glass". "crumbs fall from the table. It was not me, it was not me." Had you lifted the shroud, more people would appreciate. But, as I said, your poem reminded me of Salvador Dali.- Sharbaaniranjan Kundu
Saturday, August 11, 2012
NAILED
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Location:Ajmer, Rajasthan, India
Ajmer, Rajasthan, India
Thursday, August 9, 2012
FUGITIVE SWAN
How beautiful. Wonderfully expressed.
The last two verses are my favorites.
...so delicately versed it made my soul swoon- Morning Star
I can see how that happened.- Kailashana
The last two verses are my favorites.
...so delicately versed it made my soul swoon- Morning Star
I can see how that happened.- Kailashana
Wednesday, August 8, 2012
BELONGING
The spirit and mind knows no boundaries, well written!-
LightH2O
This jumps one quantum closer to verbal understanding with out eluding the inner mind, a fine transition of comprehension.always light behind my eyes- leafsailor
This jumps one quantum closer to verbal understanding with out eluding the inner mind, a fine transition of comprehension.always light behind my eyes- leafsailor
Sunday, August 5, 2012
THE RED ROCK...
Agree with Gita, thanks for sharing, blessings to you.-
LightH2O
A deep, thought-provoking verse on reflection with effective use of metaphor. Ths closing stanza is powerfully expressed- Gita Ashok
UNBELIEVING
very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.-
ianhm
REMEMBERING ADAM!
Interesting poem, if is the same Adam I'm thinking of, he won't be alone for ever. TFS-
LightH2O
It Was Enough
This is hauntingly powerful and moving piece with an embedded unconventional triolet. An inspiration for budding poets to learn more about pouring the heart into different types of poetic form. Thank you-
Harriet James
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