UNTILL I ARRIVE

...the glaciers decided not to melt away...at so many levels - nice line for me tonight..- Blacpoet

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LONGEST ECLIPSE

I just want to keep reading and reading your offerings - Blacpoet

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GOLD-TIPPED

Suicidal Gods, Batman! I blow away like winds of winds - Blacpoet

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

my shadow will sit beside me and we will drink the pain~~solitude and beauty in one, alluring and illuminating for an okay writer..-Blacpoet

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COUPLING

The background selections are lovely - so are the synapes firing well and fine...-Blacpoet

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EVEN THE PLANETS

An interesting combination of words to render a surrealistic view of our surroundings.- Robert Pettit

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RELIGION

Thought provoking!-uncia2

So dark and absent the opposite for balance, tilted lines...unanticipated equals. My my...-Blacpoet

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CLUSTERED

Quite an interesting write. Your use of metaphors is great.- Robert Pettit

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IN THE NAME OF ………

Such a sad write...-Raggedyann

Tonight, nouns that hurt, healing requires too much energy...Stella

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JUDGEMENT

Very sensational judgement indeed! Thanks and regards.-K Pankajam, Chennai

Amazing Judgement...! Thanks for sharing Mr. Uniyal.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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FALLING

Dear Sir, Truth having become almost extinct, fakes have now reared their urgly heads. Redundancies or residue of fakes and slogans make morale extremely low.

The scenario of the present day has been portrayed well in the poem. Thanks for sharing. -K. Sadasivan, Chennai

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The Moon-ed ‘I’...

Nostalgic-LightH2O

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Guiled ‘me’...

Such gripping words and deep thoughts, blessings to you.-LightH2O

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AWARENESS

And such are the spoils of war. Even in its end, the pain never stops. Always a winner, always a loser. Maybe the wars would stop if everyone broke even. All dead ... no war. Certainly .... no winners. They only breed more wars.-e. Gene Myers

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ARTFUL PINCERS

Very well written piece, I really enjoyed reading the piece-dri

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