BRINGING DOWN

I like this one. Thumbs up. Well said.- louis gander

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BLOOD WAS ON SHEET

"Pain was you was me was him the guilt of chewing polluted words...naked lies" So very true, I once heard someone say that if we love others we will never find happiness here on earth, for how can we be happy when our brother suffers, pain, hunger, abuse, etc. I sense your sensitivity and connectedness to all life and energy.- LightH2O

A good poem you wrote here- RonaldLearner

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PANDERING

Wow so many contorted images to dwell and perhaps a grotesque subject requires this..yes! fav verse [I should, if I could/rip open the zipped mouth of black death to count the/teeth of shrunk questions.] I have missed your writes hope you are having a Happy New Year. Light & Love- Debbie Guzzi

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VALENTINE

Packed with rich images that make me wonder at the meaning you intended yet it brings up my own deep interpretations to consider.- LightH2O

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SALT LAKE

So symbolic, I like how you detach yourself from your body "I'm dead in my arms". "salt lake" on your last stanza reminds me of a prayer used in the Catholic religion that refers to us being in a "valley of tears" here on this earth because of our sufferings.- LightH2O

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sui generis

You combine elemental forces, with the minutiae of insects and tears. I love it!- Ye Caterpillar

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MILK BATH

"Let us first accept the defeat of eternity" a deep revelation.- LightH2O

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BECOME MY FATHER

Deep thoughts!- LightH2O

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NO ROOM

Wind snatches a sun. good. I like it.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.- Gajanan Mishra

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LUNAR ECLIPSE

Thank you Satish Verma... for your nice sharing...enjoyed your amazing work ...luv and hugs :- Sukmawati Komala

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CORPSE IS BEING SENT

Thanks for sharing.... Happy New Year my dear friend.- LightH2O

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UNSPOKEN

touching... good write.- apoorva patrikar

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NOT SINNED

Very nice write. Once bitten... twice the wisdom- Tony Karas

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SANITY

This thing named me,
And there is work to do here
Is why I want to believe
And just that. I must challenge the way, however, beware
Any more,
and to watch out
For being here,-Richard Bowers
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WINTER STORY

You are a good writer Satish- steve Chering

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