RAGING KINDNESS

what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!- baj-a 

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LISTENING

Good poem. Sometimes we want to close our ears to these screams, because they are part of a living nightmare...- David de la Croes

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Salvaging

Great write, I like it. Pls read my poems and comment- Babatunde Aremu

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I TRUST

"I do not exist" ~ I recently wrote these words myself. Excellent poem.- Anthony DiMichele

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WANDERER

wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.-baj-a

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APPLE PICKING

i liked this a good poem-sammie bagley

Sir: I read this several times and each read went deeper into my Soul. I sincerely "felt" this write. - Lady Dragonwyck

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CIRCLE OF GLORY

Weaver, faked skin...orange...mmm .... Fake tan as no sunlight? ... Or fake by day, real by night.... I love poems like this.... It reminds me of another poem about living a lie- Some Girl

"The shadow was a terrorist on the terrace" I can identify with this line. Some lines are very clear but others make me wonder, wishing I could know exactly what you had in mind. Like who or what is the "weaver of faked skin?" knowing that would shed more light into this poem. TFS- LightH2O

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A CLEAN MURDER

and the purpose of it all?? Hopefully, to protect the rights and liberties of the innocent. Otherwise, it is indeed futile and blatantly wrong...- louis gander

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ODE TO LONELINESS

As always, I am awed by the sensitive connectivity of ideas and structural sound migrations and collisions - Blacpoet

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BON VOYAGE

The staircase is broken" and so am I, always so nice to read your work, thank you for being there for me my dear friend.-LightH2O

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Ending War

heralding the new moon. good poem. thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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FOOTFALLS

Much food for thought, gripping lines. Thank you for all your assistance. Blessings!- LightH2O

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WHAT COMPARISON?

This write, as most of your others, are thought provoking and leave
me pondering your words. 'The walking trees start swapping the roots.'
I find that line most intriguing but can't say that I fully understand it.
The last two lines of the poem are very effective.- LindaM

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AWARENESS

Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work..- Sara Kendrick

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LAKE SONG

Very interesting and nicely done! - Last Temple Knight

i loved your poem.- sammie bagley

wow. very interesting write. Love.- heart song

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