SMASHING THE ROAD SIGNS

"The essence will not heal, this bandaged soul, ...I walk in the shadows of sounds, smashing the road signs." and move you must.- LightH2O

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INTENSE POETRY

Soul gripping!... "Knowledge explodes the myths, and hurls the naked truths."- LightH2O

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DYING BEAUTIFULLY

I started to quote a line in the first stanza but found so many other lines worthy of quoting that I have to say the whole poem is worthy of quoting. You never run out of great lines.- LightH2O

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THE NIRVANA

Deep questions makes one ponder.- LightH2O

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HOLDING MY TOES

I agree with Some Girl (Wow!), we wonder about her while we enjoy such peaceful times in the beauty & tranquility of our moment on earth.- LightH2O

Wow - amazing poetry - just what I like to read. Recommended- Some Girl

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FIERCE MOONING

Not exactly sure how to interpert this one..If it is really a bout with cancer, I am truly sorry to hear of the illness effecting you or your love one..I hope that the treatment is working..I will remember you and your family in my prayers..If it is a metaphor for your muse, great creativity that you have displayed in this work..I have not seen your name in awhile on here but of course, I could have just missed you when you come on and I am not on..Sara Kendrick

Cancer ...... chemotherapy ..... so hopeless! - Terrible sad, Satish. - Well written. - oxox / /- Anne Lise Andresen

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FOUND YOURSELF

"..too shy to die..." lines like this make me think deeper than the deepest allowed. My best to you.- LightH2O

only for a mount it seems then off again, san untangled poem ,smiles- leafsailor

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WALKING TOELESS

Enjoyed reading your poem.-Ndaba Sibanda

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WITHOUT QUALMS

Happy weekend, Sir. Another thought-provoking write. I like the "feel" I got here. As always, wonderful work. - Lady Dragonwyck

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FIERCE MOONING

Cancer ...... chemotherapy ..... so hopeless! - Terrible sad, Satish. - Well written. - Anne Lise Andresen

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EASY TO FORGET

"The flash of insight burned my thoughts." "Here was a naked truth unclothed..." here is a naked soul, disrobing before our souls eyes, voicing what we all wonder deep inside.- LightH2O

Here was a naked truth unclothed by time beyond the innocence of age................................ageless!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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SECOND-HAND EVENT

Deep reflections, "ego was the last refuge" I love how you end it with those last two lines which shed much light.- LightH2O

Got it-leafsailor

"It suddenly transports you to the otherness" Love the use of words and its meaning. God bless- Linda Winchell

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RETURNING FAVOUR

Deeply, powerful and very well written Verma. - Anne Lise Andresen

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

it is so deep... metaphorical!- Prabesh Dhakal

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ANCHORED BRIEFLY

Felt like someone trying to balance their life/lives. I felt a lot from this write.- Lady Dragonwyck

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