STARED BLANKLY

A beautiful poem. The sacred is our highest sense of being- Some Girl

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NAMELESS INTRUDERS

Not all enemies are evil.- Ultra Violet

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LEGITIMACY

I love the legitimacy of alphabets, and the last line the dignity of its own, very good stuff- Spaceroy 

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SAVAGE FIRE

Thank you for sharing, best to you.- LightH2O

Hoplessness to you is a burning feeling, but perhaps it is not hope that you need to cast out that savage flame..perhaps a cold glass of water?- Ultra Violet

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POETRY BOOM POETRY BOOM

I can't hear...beautiful imagination..- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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PASSAGE TO UNKNOWN

Excellent Satish, I've had similar ideas lately ....:)- 'stiltskin

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SUDDENLY SO!

Good write with lot of emotions and good message, sir! -Padmavathi, Secunderabad

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UN - ME - ING 'I'

Good imagination and nice presentation! sir,,, Nice toread it....-Padmavathi, Secunderabad

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INVERTED BODY

Death has no meaning? Cause death is for the body, but life is for the spirit.. Our body is like a cross..the older you get..the more like gold it feels..without a strong spirit..the cross will crush you. ^-^... Guaranteed 120..gonna have to dig deeper for the other 780. ^-^- Ultra Violet

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SCARY?

quality we want and not quantity.- Gajanan Mishra

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It was time

Deep and placid like ocean lovely thank for share- Aftab Alam Khursheed

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MOST WANTED

well done , wows me .- yvette kelley

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LUNAR TOUCH

I break a flower into hundred petals. it's hard to fix scattered petals as a flower again Sir?- nimal p. dunuhinga

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DEATH OF CALENDERS

Last stanza reminds of about the wisdom of aging, but it's sad to stop watching the carnations in the eyes.  Nice penning.- LightH2O 

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DEAF CITY

I take it the use opf car horns is prettu much a moot if not mute issue,yes? lol....Some solid expression, here -Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Wisdom at its best my dear teacher. Nice you posted right after me, love being next to you, if at least this time. Take care.-LightH2O

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