SMILE BECOMING LARGER

an interesting write with a mystical touch.. I agree with Gita- Sandra Martyres

A mystical write with fine use of imagery. Thought-provoking, too.- Gita Ashok

Dark is creator..light is destroyer. - Ultra Violet

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ONE GARDEN CITY

Society and our neck breaking race with greediness has spoilt everything your last line I mean concluding ///Sexless virginity is at stake! beautiful 10- Aftab Alam Khursheed

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BODHISATTAVA

The title fits aptly for this elegant poem. I have read you for a long time. You have a fan now. - Maya

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THE LOST GENERATIO

Feeling this piece nice work.-Lazarus (DaGreat)

Such finesse. I enjoyed the wrapping put into this thought. Art! Respect friend.- bubblegutzbrown

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FALL OF A TENDER DOCTRINE

Yes, sometimes, because of how rotten our world has become, we dare say with impunity that Death is the only thing that can save us from Life.- GEURRU

Make sure to catch it!- Ultra Violet

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PEACE AFTERWARDS

Good write, Congrats.- WILLIAMSJI

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IN THE GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE

Your always heartfelt write. You always "touch my soul" with your words. - Lady Dragonwyck

 

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UNSPOKEN SECRETS

Sir, you are one of my favourite poets. I wrote so many comments to your poems in museindia.com. None was published to my great disappointment. Your poems have great depth, metaphysical allusions and enigmatic surrealism ..great to read and reread.- sathyanarayana

Good read!- Eusebius Han

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AN UNBORN PRAYER

Very Powerful.- msfresh07 

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MAULED SELF

Indescribably gripping work, like no other.- LightH2O

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EPILEPTIC TRUTH

Is like you travel outside your body to find the most extraordinary and original lines that makes one wonder. "The dust smears the face of epileptic truth."- LightH2O

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FEET OF CLAY

Nicely written- Weeping willow

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MY BLUE VALLEY BURNS

Nicely written- Kiran Bantawa

 

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RESSURECTION

Sir: I like this write. I wonder when my time to leave "this" Life comes, what will happen to me. I want to just go sit in the Library of Heaven and see if I can find my "records" and try to understand "Me". Excellent write, as always.- Lady Dragonwyck

A journey without destination must be tiresome and noisome, indeed...I agree~- Wide Awake

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INVISIBLE PARTICLES

I feel the hurt and dementions of pain and sense of confinement that is being so masterfully expressed here. Well done!- KayinBH

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