UNBELIEF

I like the last few lines especially. Thanks.- cjblaze

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DIRTY HOMES

Nicely expressed;- Weeping willow

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BETWEEN FEAR AND COURAGE

like- labchaddy

Beautiful sir as various thoughts Keep wriggling out as I read this write thanks for sharing- Rohit

Sublime, profound and thought-provoking. Excellent penning!-Mountaineer

I second that comment by Nikunj to the letter.-cjblaze

A wonderful dialouge that poses questions , stirs the mind and conscience through a versatile poetic effort . It's a privilege to read this poem.-Nikunj

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WHOLE TRUTH

Man has become superior to god. A pleasant line!- nimal p. dunuhinga

for so long.- leafsailor

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HOPE AND BANALITY

Quite heavy and deep in subject matter- RonaldLearner

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REASONING

you have caught the moment of time......and the directions of the winds...very well!- malinikadir

Beautiful,and so well penned. Exquisite,Sue- Sue_Pinkston

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LAYERED ACHES

If there is no witness there is no crime.- Ultra Violet 

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A REPLICA

Wow. Just an array of gems, line after line. An endless
game, where it loses itself and takes on another shape.
The source of it, ah! That's the catch. Just a portion of what I took from this. Loved it Mr. Verma. Excellent write Friend.- bubblegutzbrown 

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JILTED

I liked the opening lines. Very clever. Very reality based, you can find these scenarios in contemporary headlines. And as always, you've a very creative way in expressing yourself. , Respect.- bubblegutzbrown 

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NON REAL

Gripping! the last stanza ends this is a softer note.- LightH2O

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BROKEN DAM

Your poetry is both beautiful and challenging.- InTheRain

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FALLING APART

"You squat on the cinders of untruths" - I love it.- Cindy

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CURVED IN

This is so tender, I just love this incredibly beautiful poem - Thank you Satish !! - Anne Lise Andresen

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LIFTING

nice write. very inspirational...- Mister Supernova

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SYSTEM

A vivid write sir! Good metaphors in this poem also. Thanks for sharing!- cjblaze

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