TENDERNESS

The kiss of a flame,
after the perfect
sketch.

^^I like this opening. For it shows desire that
has been sparked by a beauty...in a way its very romantic too!

The geometry
ignites the ice.
It falls, fiery particles.

^^I like how you have weaved nature and human feelings into one. I've an image of a very passionate couple in love. The word, "geometry" has taken the place of a woman's physique and one leads to another. Maybe I'm wrong but the message here sets a fiery, passionate mood.

The space shrinks.
Glided slope.
How can you stop?

^^Oh yeah..I will not delve deep into this. All I will say is I've enjoyed reading this! Excellent!- Meena Krish

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Heart Of The Matter

A man,
in the shadow of a child,
walks, for the sake of
phylogenesis.

^^This opening stanza creates an image
with lots to think about. Where an adult walks
down a path in the woods where he once used
to go when he was a child perhaps..?


The Great Bustard,
was on the brink of
extinction. Somebody
was not an achiever.

^^Either this is talking about a person/or one
of nature's spot that has failed to achieve its
beauty or goal...I'm just guessing here.

Seeking,
an inborn god in thighs,
for running faster than light,
weightless, faceless.

^^An interesting stanza here. I've old mythological images playing through my mind
while reading this!

Dust will take,
dust for the dark matter
sequencing a disaster.
The animal within roars.

^^Hmmm..you know this poem has got my mind working really hard to grasp the meaning behind these words. Reading this to me it shows that patience has limits..whether it refers to human or nature.

All in all a very intriguing read that has gotten me to think deep into it...good one!- Meena Krish

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The Woods Are Burning

A very interesting write. The images in each
stanza is vivid and I guess it talks about how the
beauty of mother nature is been ravished by
greed..at least that is what I got from this write.
Liked the read.- Meena Krish

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Overwhelming

One who has renounced everything and gives himself to nature by protecting and trying not to kill any small living thins yet with the very simple things he steps on dies..once again I'm guessing here..- Meena Krish

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I AM THINKING

I'm reading this and wish I could comment on it without sounding stupid! For your poems hold something more deeper than what it says and that makes this write thought provoking as well as sentimental to some level...- Meena Krish

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BIRTH UNTAINTED

Tis Obvious As Wonderful, Knowing, That Many Lives About This Globe Worship, Our Heavenly Holy Father, Amid Different Lights Yet A Light All The Same * Faith, Speaks In Truth Yes, That One Day 'His Children,' Shall Be Gathered Together Amid Love's Arms ˜ No Shadows Nor Squeeking Doors Haunting Passages Sceaming, Babies Waking From Nightmares. You Are Very Special And Your Poetry, Profound Of Beauty ˜ Happy Life To You, Better, 'Happy Holidays' - Johnny Rhinem

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UNZIPPED

cool- labchaddy

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SUICIDAL WISH

An Interesting and Cryptic dark poem. Enjoyed the read.- Starry Knight

Lovely vivid images you portray here, almost as if I can see them right before my eyes. An ever changing canvas for all to enjoy.- Sue_Pinkston

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CUP OF DARKNESS

I Absolutely Love This Piece. You are a Deep, Vivid Writer.- Lindz

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FIGHTERS AT LARGE

that was amazing. wonderfully penned.- Nilla

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THE WHEEL

Onward we march to our destination and hopefully final rest after we complete and repair our past lives. - Lady Dragonwyck

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VOYAGE

Well crafted- seema chowdhury

Amazing metaphor used in this gem of verse Satish. That perfect last line reminds us of your masterly way with the pen.- Fay Slimm

Dear Satish I like the rhythm and flow of the poem. Moreover, your choice of words is amazing.- omer

Wonderful write, sir. Thanks as always for sharing with us.- cjblaze

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DRAMA

what a beautiful poem you have penned. I really enjoyed reading this, Thank you, for sharing your words.-Sue_Pinkston

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UNBELIEF

I like the last few lines especially. Thanks.- cjblaze

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WITH APOLOGIES

what is in a name? what is in a name? Most of the names have some meaning in many of our languages., but the modern names are hard to be understood..Nice poem with lots of good flavors..- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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