Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Monday, December 16, 2013

TALE-BEARER

The metaphors are too great though the destruction is seen everywhere in our mother land.-VS, Kl/Thanjavur

NOTHING VERSE

I think it is fear of all kinds that leave us with nothing and prevent so many of our desires and wishes becoming true.- Bengieske

ONE DAY

WONDERFUL....stark and dark images....all the best.-Syam Madappattu

Sunday, December 15, 2013

NAKEDNESS

I found the title very interesting and the analytic suggestions in the poem itself quite intriquing.-dcwriter

A FUTURE WAITS

Proficient written - spread your seed ..... - Beautiful Satish ! - Anne Lise Andresen

Monday, December 9, 2013

BLACK MAGIC

Nice work,enjoyed very much.Thanks, for sharing.-Sue_Pinkston

COMMENTRIES

What an amazingly lingering line: "The violence of our thoughts created an empty wasteland." I like the way you develop the theme and the strong impact of the conclusion.-robyn selters

UBIQUITOUS BEING

Very inspiring. As always, your always marvelous perspective.- Lady Dragonwyck

Sunday, December 8, 2013

PRIDE OF VALLEY

A dark poem filled with haunting imagery but an interesting and intriguing read. Best wishes.-m eleanor3168

SOME QUESTION MARKS

As usual your deep thoughts are unique, your senses amaze me. Is as if you sat, chatted and drank tea each evening with life and death.- LightH2O

This is very powerful and emotional. Brilliantly written.- cupcake

Friday, December 6, 2013

TALE-BEARER

the metaphors are too great though the destruction is seen everywhere in our mother land.- VS,Kl/Thanjavur

GALLOWS

i like the intensity here.- labchaddy

Tuesday, December 3, 2013

KILLING ZONE

I love this a lot, the different histories embedded, from different path. Lovely ponder- Entelechy

KILL

At lost for words, but thinking of you. Take care!- LightH2O